Telemetry: Arc Kelvianna

Telemetry: Arc Kelvianna

by Telemetry

A station cadet and her best friend intercept a mercenary on a mission to sabotage their home, the M.S. Aster.

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Telemetry

Telemetry

aka Mr. Letterhead

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This story has an Ender's Game / Expanse kind of vibe to it. We're rapidly introducing a cluster of main characters which will make up the various parts of this story, then thrown into either a class or a battle exercise, I'm not sure which because the setting focuses on building the banter and relationships between the characters over transitioning into the next scene. Overall, this story has a lot of potential and I will be sticking with it.