Grand Simulation

Grand Simulation

by lePAT

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

A programmer trapped inside a simulation.

He and a band of misfits selected as "test subjects" must successfully complete the "test run" to be able to return to their world or die trying.

Follow along on his journey where he matches his wits against the creators and their eerily familiar creations in a vast fantastical world, seeking a way back home.


Author's note:

Hello guys, lePat here! This is my first proper attempt at writing a story. I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism, ranging from grammar and spelling to plot and pacing.

Regarding this story, I intend to use Volume 1 (till Chapter 25ish) as a setup for the characters and the world. The actual plot will start in Volume 2 onwards. I hope ya'll enjoy reading it as much as I do writing it. Cheers!


Apologies, updates may be sporadic for a while, will settle on a schedule soon.

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