Dida: A Living Computer Inside Your Head

by MajorKerina

In an age of fungal computers inside people's heads, the boundaries between reality and illusion are much harder to distinguish.

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I made this review on only chapter 8 so i cant do a full review, but from what i can see so far, its pretty dang stellar! Grammer and sentance structure is good and the plot so far is gripping.

Although there are a decent amount of flashbacks, they are very important to the story and aren't all that boring (speaking to the author directly, it might be a good idea to focus more on current events more in the future. I understand the importance of the flashbacks, but there are just alot of them)

So far it seems like this is novel takes place an unknown time into the future where its common to direct interface with computers.

Our main character beta tests a specialy made ai, created by his brother. Boundaries are broken and things go sideways.

This review is haphazard. im tired.

Go read this book. Its enjoyable in a relaxing way.