Aurora Scroll

Aurora Scroll

by Avery Light

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

Hey, what would you do after you got isekai-ed?


Look! A cockroach villain has appeared. Let's kill him before he messes things up. Too cruel? That kind of character is always introduced to be killed by the protagonist anyway so I'm doing the world a favor here. Less CO2 emission. It's time to "Go Green" guys, even in another world.

See over there, that's a trash young master type right there. What do I do? Endure the initial insults and provocation then dispose of him when no one sees of course. Why make things difficult?

Hmm, a pretty girl in peril. Potential love interest there… but no, I have enough problems as it is. At the very least, I won't help her just 'cause she's a female. Same goes for males. What? I support gender equality.

Hey, I know the clichés, what did you think I was going to do? Simply let it run its course? Well duh, I'll twist it to my benefit.


-This is a power fantasy story. Weak to strong, strong to stronger.
-The MC is very genre savvy and a hardcore internet citizen.
-English is not my first language, apologies for the imperfections.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Glossary ago
Prologue ago
Chapter 1 - Flight From the Nest ago
Chapter 2 - Counter and Counter ago
Chapter 3 - Head ago
Chapter 4 - Mokash Town ago
Chapter 5 - A Life of Adventure ago
Chapter 6 - Vanity ago
Chapter 7 - Ghosts of the Past ago
Chapter 8 - Egg Hunting Preparations ago
Chapter 9 - A Must Have ago
Chapter 10 - Camping Leisurely ago
Chapter 11 - Fury of the Owls ago
Chapter 12 - Bump With Chicken ago
Chapter 13 ago
Chapter 14 - Stirrings ago
Chapter 15 - Villainous ago
Chapter 16 - My Fair Lady ago
Chapter 17 - Level Up ago
Chapter 18 - Euryale Sight ago
Chapter 19 - Closure ago
Chapter 20 - Leaving Town ago
Chapter 21 - The Unfortunate Man ago
Chapter 22 - What Dark Magic Is This? ago
Chapter 23 - Excavation ago
Chapter 24 - Savior ago
Chapter 25 - Road Bump ago
Chapter 26 - No Entry ago
Chapter 27 ago
Chapter 28 ago
Chapter 29 - First Blood ago
Chapter 30 - System Breach ago
Chapter 31 - Warpath ago
Chapter 32 - Water, Water, Fire ago
Chapter 33 - The Battle Begins ago
Chapter 34 - Kill Streak ago
Chapter 35 - Law ago
Chapter 36 - Finisher ago
Chapter 37 - Dread It, Run From It, Destiny Still Arrives ago
Chapter 38 - The Warrioress of Light ago
Chapter 39 - Release the Slug ago
Chapter 40 - Snatching Victory From Defeat ago
Chapter 41 - The Lonely Girl ago
Chapter 42 - Oath of Revenge ago
Chapter 43 - The Living ago
Chapter 44 - The Dead (1) ago
Chapter 44 - The Dead (2) ago
Chapter 45 - Viers Isuel ago
Chapter 46 - A Touch of Shadow ago
Chapter 47 - Back to Nature ago
Chapter 48 ago
Chapter 49 - Trust ago
Chapter 50 - Strength ago
Chapter 51 - Mister Horse ago
Chapter 52 - Overture ago
Chapter 53 - Asking Nicely ago
Chapter 54 - A Cheater's Cheat on top of Cheat ago
Chapter 55 - Slow Life ago
Chapter 56 - Overgrowth ago
Chapter 57 - Biome ago
Chapter 58 - Plant Life ago
Chapter 59 - Symbiosis ago
Chapter 60 - A Happy Return ago
Chapter 61 - The End of Winter ago
Chapter 62 - The Call of Spring ago
Chapter 63 - Clearing the Way Forward ago
Chapter 64 - Packing Up ago
Chapter 65 - Sin City ago
Chapter 66 - Third Time's the Charm ago
Chapter 67 - Legal but Unethical ago
Chapter 68 - Underdog ago
Chapter 69 - Entrance ago
Chapter 70 - Izabella Thyris ago
Chapter 71 - The Four Great Nations ago
Chapter 72 - Dangers Outside the Borders ago
Chapter 73 - Gear Up ago
Chapter 74 - Second Coolest Weapon ago
Chapter 75 - Smooth ago
Chapter 76 - Funneling ago
Chapter 77 - Water Heaven ago
Chapter 78 - A Slave's Worry ago
Chapter 79 - Gathering Intel ago
Chapter 80 - Blade in the Mist ago
Chapter 81 - Ejection Seat Protocol ago
Chapter 82 - An Eye For An Eye Is Insufficient ago
Chapter 83 - Assimilation ago
Chapter 84 - Graveyard Cleaning ago
Chapter 85 - Self-Improvement ago
Chapter 86 - Crimson Lotus ago
Chapter 87 - Early Birds ago
Chapter 88 - On the Prowl ago
Chapter 89 - Among Thieves ago
Chapter 90 - The Whole Shebang ago
Chapter 91 - Boogeyman ago
Chapter 92 - Should I Stay or Should I Go? (Rewrite) ago
Chapter 93 - Escalation ago
Chapter 94 - Plan Failure ago
Chapter 95 - Prelude ago
Chapter 96 - Know Your Enemy ago
Chapter 97 - Shaking Foundation ago
Chapter 98 - Rising Action ago
Chapter 99 - Little Friend ago
Chapter 100 - Boiling Point ago
Chapter 101 - War and Heist ago
Chapter 102 - Reversal ago
Chapter 103 - Boss Fight ago
Chapter 104 - Payback ago
Chapter 105 - Vortex ago
Chapter 106 - Outcome ago
Chapter 107 - Compulsions ago
Chapter 108 - Next Stage ago
Interlude - Aurora Scroll ago
Chapter 109 - Insignificant Fate ago
Chapter 110 - Knight Errant ago
Chapter 111 - Regidana ago
Chapter 112 - In the Hall of the Santa King ago
Chapter 113 - New Home ago
Chapter 114 - Homeworks ago
Chapter 115 - Offer ago
Chapter 116 - Unrefusable ago
Chapter 117 ago
Chapter 118 - SOUL PAWAAAH!!! ago
Chapter 119 - Profound Codex ago
Chapter 120 - Parting Gifts ago
Chapter 121 - Earthborn Amalgam ago
Chapter 122 - Title ago
Chapter 123 - Adventurer's Life ago
Chapter 124 - Letter and Wealth ago
Chapter 125 - The Calm ago
Chapter 126 - The Wind ago
Chapter 127 - The Storm ago
Chapter 128 - The Players ago
Chapter 129 - The Book ago
Chapter 130 - Tyrant Viers: The Adventurer of the Mysterious Book ago
Chapter 131 - The Honor of Viers Isuel ago
Chapter 132 - Path of Paradise ago
Chapter 133 - Rise of the Hobo ago
Chapter 134 - Pigs for Slaughter ago
Chapter 135 ago

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What can I say about this story that others haven't? It's really, really good. Saying too much just spoils the fun for others, so I will simply give it an unqualified recommendation. It also has the best references to other stories. It's definitely a favorite of mine now.  Read it now or regret it later. 


This is an interesting approach to the genre. Reasonably well written with a few grammatical errors (mostly the past tense slipping) and an MC who just can't abide the trope isekai heroes or villans so he does everything he can to avoid their fate.

Funny and definitely worth a read


This is a story I was on a look out for. It is excellent, I have fun reading it and it is also well written. Story progression is just right, backstory is stretched and not infodumped and characters are alive. Magic is well thought and nicely presented, mc is a realist and not naive(which is a plus for me) and he has no qualms about his motivations and actions. I didn't give it 5 stars because I need more chapters to see consistency will add it close to chapter 50. Good work, keep it up. 


DARKNESS AND SUFFERING are one and the same qualities that man has long endured throughout its ages. The trauma of such suffering can be found throughout our history from the likes of wars and differing cultures. In Aurora Scroll, Avery Light creates a world that is both familiar and disturbing, and the sharp depiction of human naturalism gives the story a surreal, dark-fantasy atmosphere.

Light has said that English is not their first language, and from reading you would hardly be able to tell. The prose is clean, simple, somewhat philosophical, and written with an attraction to all audiences across the board. This delineation of an alternate world is truly captivating and worthy of attention. 

With this in mind, some imperfections draw the reader away from the experience, if not by technical means, by story-related issues.

STYLE - 4/5

Stylistically, the story is written with a propensity for simplicity. From the start, we are shown a third-person narration that reads like old literature found from the shelves of libraries: literary, long-winded, and thought-provoking. This changes as the story unfolds, changing to a more Neil Gaiman, beige approach. Along with this, the POV of the characters changes frequently, and at random times, starting with Cain of Ur and finishing with someone else. To combat this issue there are separators (***) found throughout the story. But these come either too early or too late: they generally don't represent the switch, but instead a time-skip. This leaves the reader wondering the which POV the story is told from; this is especially evident in the later battle between Cain and Demetrus. It hollows the immersion and takes the reader away from the more important scenes. To fix this, I would suggest carefully focusing on each character's POV and telling everything from their eyes without seeming too forced (he saw [and] he heard). The aim of the story should be to make the reader forget they're reading at all, not to emphasise that they're living in a reality that cannot mirror the intricacies of fiction. 

There are also inconsistent switches between formal English and informal writing, which I found to be jarring. This is usually caused by a confusion of POV in characters; Cain of Ur using colloquial phrases, and at some times, divine language. 

By the same token, Light has a tendency to tell at the wrong times. By this I mean the characters' traits are told directly to the reader instead of leaving them to conceive their own opinion. This is especially the case with Cain of Ur, the supposed main character of this universe, and the driving force behind the plot. The "Show, don't tell" rule is often misrepresented in cases like this: show more than you tell. This rule can either break you or make you; the aim of telling is to convey a sense of pace, to create the scene, to expose the trials and tribulations of the stories, to invest the reader in the story, and to, above all else, make the reader slip into the pages. Showing is used to keep them in the pages; an easy way to know when to show and when to tell is to plan a scene, either by daydreaming or writing it down. Show the character's quirks, emotions, beliefs, hopes, dislikes, relationships, and so on; tell the background noise. This attention to prose will leave the reader invested, if not disturbed by another source of error, which leads me to the next category.

GRAMMAR - 4.5/5

Overall sentence flow and structure is fairly good. By reading, you would not be able to tell this story was written by a non-native speaker; there are only minor flaws that hinder the experience for both more attentive readers and pedants. The first is the incorrect dialogue punctuation: sentences that should end with commas, end with periods in places where it is incorrect. And vice versa. A mastering of punctuation is important for many readers: we want to see your display of English, your virtuoso in the craft, your attention to minor details and microscopic blunders in sentences. All this tells the reader that you care about quality, but that's not to be confused with perfectionism. Slip-ups will happen, and they can't be stopped; the only way to avoid this is to edit, again and again, get help from other writers and readers alike, and improve your mastery of English. When we get past all the errors that make us feel terrible, we find an improved version of ourselves. And that's perhaps all that matters in the end. 

Other areas, such as the inconsistent number spellings, hyphenated words, British and American variations of words, and occasional grammar mistakes, lead to hiccups in the story that are difficult to ignore for some readers. But considering the general good quality of the prose, it's nothing that a quick reread wouldn't fix. 

STORY - 4.5/5

As far as I've read, the story is quite unique. This new world is certainly more interesting than a lot of the others found on Royal Road, and the longer you read, the more complicated and wonderful it becomes. It made for a lot of actionable scenes, coated with a touch of dark atmosphere, and fantastical eerieness. Cain seems to encounter new and refreshing challenges in his way, suffering a "fatal wound" and showing "no sign of injury"; battling against others in the same universe; enduring cold winters and harsh climates. It's the small stuff that makes it all the more enjoyable. The pacing is quite slow at the start, especially where scenes are shown instead of told, even though they don't seem that important to the plot. I can't fault Light on this, because I, too, do this. It adds an air of mystery and realism to an otherwise dense plot. The structure of the plot follows a pattern similar to Stephen King novels: we have characters in difficult situations, they progress to handle them, and newer more challenging situations arise. This is a solid set-up to follow; it differs from a lot of the more teen fiction platforms: action, action, more action; it's nice to take breaks when needed . . . As long as they aren't overdone to the point of boredom, which really hasn't happened in this novel thus far. 

There are contrived moments, in my opinion. These likely stem from my unfamiliarity with power fantasy as a whole, but they didn't matter a whole lot in the long run. They simply make for a more exciting experience. 

As a side-note: I think the blurb of the book needs a rewrite, as it doesn't really offer anything to the story that readers will encounter. In this case, a dramatic depiction of the novel would best suit, and could then be followed by an excerpt relating to the said blurb. 


As I've already mentioned, Cain's traits are simply told to the reader. They warranted mixed reactions from both me and some readers in the comments section. Nonetheless, the characters seem human, their dialogue isn't stilted, and their interactions feel genuine. I could best liken them to a cinematic introduction at the beginning of Netflix series: dramatic, somewhat comical, and realistic. This all adds to the air of authenticity that often goes unfound in a lot of stories, especially in web-novels. I enjoyed the interactions between all of them, the different ways in which they communicate, and the opinionatedness of their beliefs. My favourite would have to be Irene: her hot-headed attitude was a nice change from the regular, formal talkers earlier seen. She holds within her a drive that many others possess and may act as a catalyst for change in the community, an inspiration that will leave readers turning the pages, wondering with unease if she'll be okay in the end. Only due time will tell, as they say.

Cain's name-change, later on, seems confusing when brought up in scenes where he should identify as Cain. It may be the interlude-like cut to his other life that makes it strange, but it's something I was bothered by. 

Although this book left me bewildered at times, I would still rate it highly at around 4/5 (I would put 4.25 if I could). Many qualities make this story a gem on Royal Road: the brilliant atmosphere, the characters and action, the focus on politics, the excellent prose, and so on. But I feel the story could be devised more cleverly, following a faster pace that feels more like fantasy and less like horror. The darkness in which the story is portrayed may turn readers away, especially the gory moments. Cain is without a doubt an evil protagonist, and that's something to be warned of before entering. If morally grey characters are more in your alley then you will enjoy this story, if you look for the characterisation of good, then probably not. Fans of slow-burn novels may also enjoy this story; that is if the author doesn't quicken the pace, which will likely give it that more authentic feel. I highly recommend this book to fans of dark fantasy, horror, and LitRPGs.



A story thats a little hard to place

Reviewed at: Chapter 7 - Ghosts of the Past

First of all, this is definitely a good dtory overall. BUT...


Style 4/5

The very first, and very big, issue of this story is the prologue. Especially the first half of it, so the very start of the story, is a pretty long exposition on the geopolitical situation. The characters involved probably won't be mentioned again before chapter fifty, and appear before chapter 100. And what little information we get that actually seems to matter before we have already forgotten about it could have been used in different ways as  well.

But besides that little mishap, the story is well written in a style that doesn't skimp on descriptions. At the same time, the story lives from not telling the reader jackshit. Pardon my french. Already in the first seven chapters the author seems to make a point of waiting until the last moment before he tells us what is going on, which can be both good and bad. I find it to be a bit much, but thats for everyone to decide themselves.


Story 4/5

The story itself is very promising. Its not told from the very beginning, but starts at a later point in time, providing a backstory that can be discovered over time. Which is very unusual for an Isekai type story.


Grammar 5/5

I didn't see any problems with the grammar, not even the occasional spelling mistake, which wouldn't be unusual.


Character 3/5

This is a bit of an issue I have with this story. Until the point where I read, not many characters have been introduced, so I can only judge based on the MC. But he is who is the problem. The MC seems very unstable in his personality. Sure, considering his backstory (that I don't know) he might just not be the most mentaly healthy person, thus the unstable personality. But for now there havn't been any hints towards mental health issues like that.


Style: The author has a strong sense of style and the story is written in third person. The author does not deviate from this and thus it is pleasing to read and flows together very easily. The story is easy to digest and that means you could end up reading forever without even realizing, very delightful read! 

Story: This is an action, adventure, isekai-type story. I, personally, am a fan of isekai stories and I thought that this story was very well done. My only critque is that if you don't read the synopsis you might be surprised that it's an isekai as it's not obvious until a few chapters in. Overall, it's a delightful story about the MC that left his life as a corporate drone and is embarking on fun adventures in this new world. I like that he's not tied down by any quests that were predetermined for him and he's free to just venture around however he pleases. 

Grammar: No complaints here! I think the story is beautifully written with clear, descriptive language and at no point did I get lost. 

Characters: The MC is a headstrong adventurer type. Right from the get go, we get a clear picture as to what he values and finds important, he's not some wishywashy character. I am also excited to learn more about the girls, they are very intriguing. 

Overall, a fantastic story that is welldone! Worth the read! :) 


Have currently read to the half point of chapter 6.The writing in this chapter just does not flow, the dialogue feels inorganic. It reads more like a series of statements than a continuous story.

The work suffers from repetition in places where the author either has trouble translating thoughts to words or cant find the right synonym(buildings are built). A pet peeve of mine is the abundance of "his","he","him".In one small paragraph of 4 semtences Ive counted 8 of these pronouns, and there is also a trndency to use then when enumerating when they can be safely omitted(his ability as a Pathseeker, his experience fighting, his age...)

My advice to the author would be to write every chaoter twice.One time to out the story to paper.A second time to make a story for the readers.This decoupling would allow focusing the effort on 2 different goals without interfering with each other.And to start I would actually recommend to return to the first chapters and ask yourself what you wanted to tell there.

The first writing would require thinking about what you want to tell in this episode of the story, how it fits in with future events, what are the motivations of all parties involved, are theyr actions of the people consistent with the character previously described(thats not to say people cant chang),where in the environment is the action taking place and how are the actors traversing it, and all other aspects of characters living in a world.

The second writing would be purely asking yourself:How do i show this to people?This is where you would focus on phrasing, grammar, and just put yourself in the shoes of a reader trying to imagine the events as theyre happening.


I hope to return to an improved story and rate it higher.


Trope-savvy Isekai MC wants to be a villain

Reviewed at: Chapter 21 - The Unfortunate Man

Grammar: 4.5/5

I'll just get t his one out of the way first. English is not the author's first language, but they write understandably in it, and the grammar is for the most part fine - but there are definitely times where you can tell that english is a second language for them. It's hard for me to evaluate how to rate something in these circumstances, so I'll give a 4.5/5 since it's understandable, but be aware of this as you're reading.

Story: 4/5

I am not that familiar with the isekai genre, I just know the basics: A character killed in the 'real world' that gets resurrected in a fantasy world that often follows video game fantasy tropes. Oddly enough, very little attention is paid to the character's former life in this work, leaving it as somewhat of a mystery to be revealed over the course of the story, which I think is a good choice. 

The story so far follows the MC, who wants to become some kind of all-powerful villain, on fairly typical "beginning of adventure" stuff so far - completing a quest to steal a monster's eggs, dealing with a loan shark, etc. Some attention is paid to his temporary companions, so they feel a bit more like actual characters. The real interest comes from the MC himself, who is a bit mysterious and seems to be a little mad. He has three 'spirits' in his head which seem to have connections to his past, but it seems so far exactly what the extent of those connections are are being left to the future to be fleshed out, which is a bit of mystery that can serve as a hook to the story. Funny enough, as soon as they were done with the first adventure 'arc', the story seemed to immediately get more interesting to me - the MC seemed to take on the role of a journeying magician, making dark deals with unfortunate souls in return for magic items, which is definitely much more interesting to me than the monster-quest stuff.

Style: 4/5

It's hard for me to evaluate this. The MC is "trope-savvy", in that he's well aware of the typical pop-culture stereotypes of the genre, and expects them to apply to the world he lives in. Unfortunately, this leads to him making a LOT of references that, to be honest, fly completely over my head. A lot of times I just have no idea what the MC is talking about with real-world references. It definitely hampered my personal enjoyment of the story, but perhaps if you are more familiar with the cultural milieu that the author operates in, it will be more understandable and enjoyable to you, so I didn't take points off for that. 

There were some other style problems that I notice a lot in stories on this site - a bunch of characters get introduced at once, and their physical description isn't given enough attention, so it becomes hard to keep track of who all these characters are exactly, or a bunch of characters that you were just introduced to interact in conversation and it becomes difficult to keep track of who's speaking. I think in general the author could pay a bit more attention to painting the scene and the characters of the world, so the reader has a clearer picture of what's happening in their mind. 

Character: 4/5

Temporary characters, or side characters, are given a little depth, love interests, backstory etc. so that they seem a bit more like real people. 

However the character that we definitely spend the most time with - and the one we spend most time seeing the world through their eyes - is the MC, our aspiring trope-savvy villain. By chapter 22, it's...still a bit hard to get a handle on him. A lot of his past is left mysterious (intentionally, I believe, for the mystery to be revealed later: it's not a bad thing), and more than being simply an earth nerd thrust into a fantasy world and taking advantage of genre awareness, he does seem to be genuinely a little mad on top of that. Other than thirsting for power, he doesn't really seem to act much like a villain, so you don't have to worry about him being a completely unsympathetic MC.

One thing I do wish is that we got to spend some more time with the spirits he talks to in his head. They're important characters that are vital to his success, who will presumably be sticking with us for the entire story. We've got to see enough of them that we can tell them apart by personality, but I would really like to see them expanded upon, get some more depth added to their personality, know more about what exactly their relationship with the MC is like.

Overall: 4.5/5

An Isekai adventure with a trope-savvy MC who aspires to be a legendary villain, I think where this story gets the most interesting is when it doesn't dwell on references, and instead the author spends time expanding the backstory of side characters, emphasizing the mystery of the MC, and having story elements that are a bit more folkish, like in the later chapters when the MC trades his magic to unfortunate souls. I personally felt a bit alienated by the references just because I was so unfamiliar with them, but if you're more familiar with this genre and what the author references the story will probably be more enjoyable to you. The author takes things at a good pace, not rushing through the introductory arc to the story, and introduces the more fantastical elements at a good pace so that they're easy to understand, even if there's still a lot of mystery left behind some of them.

Ellen Taylor

Being someone who is new to this site, a lot of the fantasy genre stories are something I’m not super familiar with. So when I saw this story was specifically an otherworldly reincarnation, I honestly had no idea what that meant. Therefore, this review is from someone who is completely unfamiliar with the genre. But know this, it was still an awesome read! 

The main character, Cain, was an interesting person to follow. He had a mystery about him that made me intrigued. The snarkiness and seemingly insane traits helped me not immediately hate him when he began showing some much darker traits. Still not sure about how I feel about him, but I believe that’s a good thing in this case.

I have found while being on this site that I’m not super focused on grammar. A few mistakes here and there I sort of just absorb and move on. As long as they’re not super glaringly bad throughout, I don’t mind. And I didn’t notice anything glaringly bad in what I read.

The story seems intriguing, even though I’m not super familiar with the specific genre. I also enjoyed little nods like the year 2020 and also the evil overlords checklist. Those were pretty great.

Xel Vi Coronata

A good work, but clarity would serve it better

Reviewed at: Chapter 7 - Ghosts of the Past

Grammar: 4/5
- Grammar and structural issues exist, although they're being progressively patched out.
- At some points, it does feel a bit like MTL, although given the author's usual style, these issues can be addressed easily after an edit or two.

Style: 4/5
- Other than an infodump at the prologue, it's quite light elsewhere. 
- The absence of commas is making the work seem very fast-paced, but maybe that's me.
- The prologue does a good job in establishing the wider view of the novel, before Chapter 1 goes back into a more focused viewpoint.
- Vivid use of imagery, although grammar issues detract from it...
- The author has a very interesting take on creating imagery, although they need to be polished if they are to be executed well.

Character: 4.5/5
- I found the MC rather endearing, purely because he has very entertaining thoughts.
- Also, he's nice and snarky. On a personal basis, I like that a lot. It makes him seem a lot more alive, although these thoughts can be rather...disturbing at times.

Story: 4.5/5
- Something that stuck out to me in Chapter 6: the London Bridge rhyme. Why is it there? The confusion is conveyed very nicely to Irene, and it hints at his otherworldly origins without dumping it in my face.
- It's quite slow-paced, and I don't quite see any goal, but that's kinda alright in my book. I get a SOL feeling from it, but...
- Anyone who's read TVtropes' Evil Overlord List might find this amusing, if nothing else. 

Overall verdict: 4/5
- Enjoyable, but some odd grammar choices detracts from it. Readers who are more sensitive to grammatical and structural problems may find it hard to follow.