[PORTUGUESE] Saint Seiya: Kagutsuchi, o cavaleiro de Fornalha.

by Tyller Yang

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No mundo moderno, um ferreiro de 25 anos, trabalhava em sua fornalha forjando objetos que poderiam ser vendidos, apesar da escassa oferta, para os ferreiros antigos nos tempos atuais, com a tecnologia siderúrgica automática.

Enquanto terminava o pedido raro de um cliente para a forja de uma espada Kataná japonesa, algo deu errado na fornalha e ela explodiu o matando. No ciclo de renascimento, o súdito do shinigami cometeu um erro, e em vez do céu, lançou a alma do ferreiro em outro mundo para renascer.

Como algo imprevisto, a alma foi lançada no mundo e guiada por instintos, procurou um corpo adequado para renascer, e achou um corpo morto no fundo do penhasco, e entrou no corpo do anterior cavaleiro do fogo, treinado por Gigars.

Como será a vida do novo cavaleiro do fogo, que finalmente se tornará um cavaleiro verdadeiro com uma armadura de bronze ordenada pela própria atena?

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Okay.

I REALLY don't like early reviews, but considering the fact that we're on chapter seven and I could swear I'm the only one reading it... I'm going to need to make one.

So first of all, big thing is that it's in Portugese. I can understand that there's a language barrier, but I've been dealing with it just fine. I can't say much for the grammar, but i can say I know Portugese enough to have a very basic conversation by now. I am very stubborn with stories.

The real good part of this story is the plot and characters. I don't want to say much about good or bad plot at this point because it makes no sense to assume I know the plot at chapter 7 but it has good promise and keeps the sense of the original Saint Seiya.

 

Characters: this is where I can actually talk. Our main character goes by the name of Kagutsuchi who does the good old isekai. I. Like. Kagutsuchi. He's smart and has an adaptable personality. Also I find blacksmithing cool.

The narration is well made and I've been enjoying the story immensely.  If anyone is willing to ignore the language barrier - or can read Portugese- I recommend this highly.

 

Ps i put grammar at 4.5, which the original review would have been because it wouldn't leave it blank, i have no idea what the grammar is like in the original language, I am not qualified enough to tell...