Andy's family's house has been a weight on him ever since the illness and death of his parents. While tending to it one day, he discovers an extra door in the house where none should exist. Venturing through it, he finds himself on a journey deep into a surreal world full of painful secrets contained within those familiar walls.

Cover art is a modified version of this stock - https://pixabay.com/illustrations/door-doors-fantasy-wall-floor-1896503/

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So well-written you're at the end before you know

Reviewed at: Our House: End - Out

It's hard to know what to say about the content that isn't a spoiler. This story is beautifully written - the pacing and build-up are great, the characters are believable and sympathetic, the prose flows easily and comfortably. I noticed a handful of what were obviously just typoes, but who doesn't have a few of those? There is a lot of story packed into less than 13K words!

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I identify more or less as non-binary. This is the first thing here I've read to my trans roommate, who also enjoyed it thoroughly for the intensity and realism of how the author handled gender as well as the excellent writing.