Insurmountable(Hiatus until Summer)

Insurmountable(Hiatus until Summer)

by VoidedPhantom

The Universe is vast, beyond that? Well, it's definitely even more vast. With such infinite possibilities who's to say that a rock can't become a god? Through an unknown accident, a new being is brewed into life. He will discover his pasts, forge his future, and do what he wants in the present!

Update: There will be a 10-Chapter Fix after the first batch has been released, it will target grammar, spelling Issues, etc. 

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God of Death

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Crakednut69
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Interesting story till now

Reviewed at: Ch. 10 Ummm...

This story up till now has been pretty interesting with good world building and a likeable mc . The pace might be a bit slow but that is for us to indulge ourselves in the story . I haven't found any grammar mistakes and I looking forward too more from this story...