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Hisoka Higawara struggles to understand those around him, but he's learning quickly. One day he makes friends with a girl named Nanami, and his life will never be the same.

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Kingkaen9
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        I'm loving the story so far, I like Hisoka's personality and inner monologue. It shows off his ability to reason, and that feels emotion in some capacity. The quirk is great too, it's balanced and strong, not something you see often. The fact that he's still growing, as a person, and in power is exciting and I look forward to it.

Revilo Straight
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As everything he does, this is pretty good

Reviewed at: Chapter 12

OC with a sand quirk and a drive gets into UA

It's written fairly well with only the occasional typo and I'm excited to see where it goes beyond this point. 

Everyone seems to be in character, except for minetta who just seems to be missing(thank God hate that guy.) For sure worth it

 

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Pretty sure the oc has some form of autism, or is an actual sociopath. He has a very logical mindset without coming across as "super cool and logical and for sure not a Gary Stu guys I don't even know where you are getting that." 

He has a very cool power set without seeming super op. Sand is always a winner. 

I love the uncle and aunt dynamic. It feels very well though out, as do all of the interactions.