An Original Transformation

by MajorKerina

Because of Zack's sheltered youth, it took a long time before he discovered that transformation between genders was possible. His parents decry it as unnatural and a sin, but he can't stop trying to learn everything about it. When he leaves his private school for a public one, he not only discovers firsthand how widespread and common transformation is, but he also meets an unexpected, kindred spirit named Fleur, who will change his life.

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MajorKerina

MajorKerina

Mistress of Zappy

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The Shadows Mistress
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A very sweet tale of two people learning about who they are and what they could become. The back drop is in a world in which transformation has become common with the ability to with little effort swtich genders for a time. Well written, the world is well thought out and thought provoking. A story well worth reading.