Dungeon Building For Beginners

by BlackBug

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Dungeon Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Mobs die. This is truth universally acknowledged by anyone who has ever played an RPG. But not all of them want to.

Follow a young Drakeling on his path to no longer get fed his own legs by over leveled fighters; his path to finding a home in the brutal world of Arkus; and maybe even his path to true love!.. nah. Fair bit of smut though!

This is a migration fic from CHYOA, and as such has quite a lot of mature content in it. 

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Not as bad as I expected

Reviewed at: Things Go Bad

If your not into monster sex, this story probably isn't for you. Characters are actually decent. I don't expect much from this story beyond gaining power, building the dungeon, and sex. I think the 'in a game world' aspect limits the ablity to have an impactful story, but it's surprisingly entertaining.

John Dovey
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Truly enjoyable twist on a theme

Reviewed at: Things Go Bad

I cannot recommend this highly enough. It's a completely different twist to a bunch of old tropes and done masterfully. The odd error in spelling or grammar is easy enough to overlook as you are engaged by the characters and invested "emotionally" in their development.

Be warned, the "smut" is so bad, it's good