Monsters Paradise

by Slime Plort

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance High Fantasy Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Alterra has turned apocalyptic. The earth shifts and shakes as it’s moulded toward a new purpose. Strange boxes appear in the faces of the natives and they find themselves rudely awakened from their idealistic peace as they are hunted and slaughtered. Alterra has entered the global stage, willingly or not. For now they remain unknown. A small blip in the expanse of the universe. But who can say how long that will last?

Fight by grit or steel. Survive, and grow. Peace is a luxury for the victorious.


Author Note: There will be three main characters. They start separately but join up together as the story progresses, and will be together for the larger part of the story.

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

I've never been good at a synopsis so if you've got advice feel free to give it. No, please give it. Help.

The cover is a placeholder until I get a book cover commissioned.

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Since one one has left a review let me the first.

This book will become one of the best books on Royal Roads no doubt. I have already read the first 4 chapters that was posted today and i did not expect it would be this good. I have read a lot books here and trust me when i say this one stood out for me the most.

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Amazing world building and characterization, not to mention author's uncanny ability to make you envision the scene he is telling you. Every scene is detailed.

Grammar:

I dont have any issues with this one.

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As stated in the description there are 3 main characters, each with different personalities The story is just beginning and the characters are experiencing the changes. I have only read the first 4 chapters. I will update the review when more chapters are uploaded.

I definitely recommend you give this book a try

 

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