Death God's Descent (DROPPED)

by redvsblues

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance
Consumed by boredom, Mlithru, God of Death, has decided to change things up a little. Instead of watching others venture the realm of mortals, he himself has decided to walk in their shoes and experience the world first hand. Thus begins his adventure.
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Mrsound
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Not a lot of LN can make me laugh lightly, but this one does. the sporadic comedy interjected throughout is really refreshing. the character seems to be a nice guy despite being "Death god" and its always leaves a good feeling to read a story where the MC isn't an extreme gone off case. 

 

The style is very clear and concise, clearly stating a change in POV which is always appreciated and grammar is close to perfect. though there are some typos here and there, but they are insignificant and arent bad enough to be noticeable unless you are actually looking for them.

 

The story is an interesting take on an old concept with it developing quickly away from the usual template of these 'god descent' types of novels.

TriangleKayes08
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used concept but not terrible

really not too bad as of chapter 7. The story is only just starting but it doesnt seem too bad. There is the mild issue of some stuff being...kinda?...ripped off like the whole mix of sci-fi and fantasy with 'cells' and shizz, which, personally, always makes character progression seem REALLY awkward(IMO). The idea really isn't all that bad and, tho god descent stories have been done before, they're always overnerfed to the point where i have to say: "F*CKIN' IDIOTS" because people apparently don't get the idea of a GOD being more powerful than anything besides another god when they're all primal forces personified.

The biggest turnoff is the kinda bad grammar. Once you get past that, the stories not unbearable to read, tho a little bland with all the cliche-ish descriptions and concepts: cells being empowered and sensory auras and studying martial arts to suddenly be a genius

Allstarall
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Good grammer, good story theme(?), and the characters' personalities are okay. Yeah, first comment so I don't really know what to say?  Yay keep going!