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The Netherworld: it is a hellish landscape inhabited only by demons, creatures born from the dark abyss. It is also the only world Salvos knows.
Joining the ranks of newborn demons, Salvos is thrown into the violent, anarchy-ruled landscape of that world. To survive, she will have to learn, she will have to adapt, and she will have to evolve. She will gain experience to reach new Levels of power.
Her curiosity aids her but her pride could be her fall. It is the nature of the Netherworld to avoid or conquer any threats faced. After all, the law of evolution is survival of the fittest, and Salvos is a survivor. And perhaps, eventually, she will leave this world behind for a better place. But is that what she even wants?
Do note that it's a slow-paced but action-packed litrpg!
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Great story, well worth the read i recommend it to any who are new to the litrpg genre. The litrpg is done well without overpowering the rest of the story which can be very challenging. The grammar and word choice are well done which i appreciate because too many good story concepts are ruined by poor sentence structure. The supporting characters are a bit 2d but i think thats mostly because of salvos pov since shes very naive. Salvos herself is well written and i love her distinct non-human outlook and drive. The only issue is that the pacing feels weird in places and salvos pov can be limiting at times. Also we dont get much reasoning and explination for salvos choices in the last chapter and at the very end she gained skills witch we learned nothing about leaving the volume on a mini sub-cliffhanger. 9/10 would recommend.
Im really loking forward to volume 2 and the hijinx of dear salvos. Perhaps we'll learn more about the mexhanics of the netherworld and learn more about our poor little fiend. I would also like to see more backstory of the other characters if the remain with Salvos thats including more information on spirits and the spirit world.
I came in expecting a book about the salvos and was more curious about what it could possibly be like. It's not what i thought from the original Title but it is really good
The author keeps his characters personalities separate and clear with understandable motivations and i look forward to their future development
The grammar is great with only minor mistakes that an English professor would care about.
Story has clear progression with evolving goals.
The style of the author is clear and flows well
All in all a great book and thank God for the salvos or i would never have given this book a go
Read it you won't regret it!
I like where this is going. The update schedule and the quality of the story have me joining the F5 sect on release days. I eagerly await more of the story!
Most of the characters are a little daft in some way or another, but that makes it more fun!
Thanks for your hard work Delta! The story is great!
A demon "child" explores the world and her own personality as she grows.
Salvos shares many of the qualities of the author's other work and few of its flaws. More specifically, the main character does not pester and antagonize everyone she meets. Instead, we have amusing interaction between a bright of inexperienced demon and hapless mortals.
The characters are decently fleshed out, the story is well-done if unimaginative, and the combat scenes are good. It lacks depth but it is still one of the more solid works on RR. I would recommend it for fans of monster evolution and growth stories. It also matters that the author keeps improving so Dalvosnfollows an upward trend quality-wise.
This novel is growing quickly, steadily growing in complexity and depth. characters are not handed to you on a silver platter, but you get to see glimpses, inklings of their pasts, their desires, their morals.
The world itself needs a bit more work to make it stay as firmly in the mind as the people who live there, maybe more mention of the foods people eat, maybe the main trades of the people's? maybe a bit more harvesting from the monsters they fight for I bet some of those hides and horns and shells might fetch a pretty price if harvested by adventurers.
style wise the author already has a lovely style, few cliffhangers, but just enough to get you wanting more, to push you to the next read. early on this wasn't as evident, indeed rereading the early chapters can be a bit of a slog for myself.
However I feel like the story is adapting rather well and I can't wait to see what will happen next, will the protagonist pursue her goals or will she try to survive and focus simply on adventuring for the next arc until she gains a goal?
grammar nazis may have problems here and there, but for those of us who just want to enjoy a good read, I don't think there will ever be a problem from my experience.
for the author, maybe its time for solus to do research into skills, i am sure the adventurer's association has all sorts of books on what skills evolve into, various trees, how to get the best bang for your buck, even lists of different evolutions of demons, spirits, monsters and classes for salvos to base her choices on in the future, afterall salvos knows that planning is key to victory
One thing that usualy anoys me in many stories with a no-human character is that the character thinks like a human. I am happy tro say that in Salvos the autor was was able to make the character think and act in acordance with it's experience.
Onother thing that anoys me in most stories that is absent here is the character making absurd decisions without any information that end up being the best choice. The character makes a lot of mistakes because of inexperience and it learns from those mistakes.
I like it.
Good grammar. Good character progression. I like the system of skill and stats based on points.
I like the world building. I like the
I like her curiosity about human nature.
I don't have much else to say.
I need to post 50 words? But I don't know what to say. I said already all that was in my mind.
I like her companion. He's good. Hope he becomes the next demon king. Or maybe something similar.
This is an excellent story! Salvos is awesome!
I really enjoy the progression of Salvos from her time in the Nether world, the events that lead to being transported to the Mortal world, and her journey to get back.
The setup for the Djinn as the main enemy for the arc was well done and I really like how Salvos's character has progressed from the simple thoughts/needs of an infant demon to more complex, but still simple, thoughts/needs as an evolved demon. Her oversimplifications of varions situations and her misunderstandings of 'common human knowledge' are very funny. My favorite being the whole "you will not feed me to a restaurant" bit.
The only negative I can think of are the occasional grammar errors. Luckily they are minor and I can still easily understand what you were trying to say.
The main character is really well written as a powerful warrior with the innocence of a child. You really notice her gradual personality and behavioural change because of the environment she has been thrown into.
The side characters are nicely written with their own goals and motivations and the story flows nicely from one plot point to the next without seeming forced.
Would definitely recommend for some lighthearted reading without overly complex storytelling, enjoyable action and great character interactions.
This is a story I'm glad I picked up. Rather than an isekai where the main character has a general understanding of what is going on around them, we see Salvos fumbling through a world she is still learning how to process as the story progresses, exploring both her own thoughts and the actions of others. The story has taken on an interesting tone, it can be funny and ironic at times, but it hits you with real ideas and emotions every now and again. These two aspects have been mixed really well and made for an enjoyable read in an evolution fantasy I'd say is worth reading.
TLDR: This story is great, consistent with what's existing, unpredictable (in a good way) with what comes next, has virtually no grammar issues, and actually takes the time to develop characters in meaningful ways. A good read that I recommend giving a shot.
Style (5 stars)
The point of view is spot on as Salvos develops, no lapses in perspective. The style the story is written in, the word choices used, they all add something to the story. Not using blue boxes is a bold move, but it fits Salvos well, we can get constant updates on Salvos's status and flow right into the rest of the story, making the system take a little bit more of a back seat here, it's just another part of the world.
Story (4 stars)
This is a familiar set of situations, but it has its differences. The story in hindsight is well planned out. Following a character who, as they learn more about the world set a set of firm goals and keep with them thoughout situations she herself is challenged with, it keeps the story fresh; just about anything can happen, and it will fit right in when it's all tied together later. Even in the action scenes, the story flows well, leaving almost no incentive to skip over to the gains. During the in between scenes, when characters are showing off who they are and plot is advancing, the read remains interesting. This story is a bit on the slower side, but everything that happens builds the story in some way.
Grammar (4.5 stars)
There are very few errors that jumped out to me, nothing that detracts from the flow of the story. Any that you can find, you can probably fix in your head as you read.
Character (4.5 stars)
The world Salvos has initially been dropped into doesn't leave much opportunity for character development, though this changes further along into the story. However, almost all of those opportunities are seized to further both Salvos's character and those around her. Salvos is a growing character whose knowledge has holes, she is discovering more about herself, and it's wonderful to read. Different thoughts and mannerisms occur in the other characters that have been mentioned, and they stick to these actions consistently, even chapters apart. Salvos isn't the only one receiving development, and that's really cool in a demon story. The only thing I can really find difficult about the characters is that sometimes it feels like time has been forcefully set aside for character development, that's the only gripe I've got. This has gotten better in later chapters however.