The House Husband's Multiverse Fueled Journey From Mediocrity

by BalteringWithDeath

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"What existed before the Big Bang?", "Why are 7/11 taquitos so good?", and "What lies at the boundaries of our universe?" are all questions that have forever haunted the best and greatest minds humanity could offer. Questions which we may never hope to understand. At least, not until the ever expanding Multiverse beyond rips apart the boundaries we once had and absorbs our own little slice of Greater Space. In our return to relative civilization, how will humanity fare against the innumerable denizens of the countless stars beyond our own? Will we even survive our home planet, now refurbished with the mystical energy of the cosmos? John Mermous, house-husband-cum-author-cum-father, has absolutely no idea. But, if sci-fi space magic and annoying fairies can keep his daughter safe and reunite his family, he'll take whatever he can get.

[Participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

As such, expect some major edits after we pass the two milestones! I'll let your know if anything important changes, or if we're just cleaning up :)

Watch the numbers go up in  r e a l  t i m e  on NaNoWriMo under the same title!

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It's still early in the story but so far a well written tale with fantastic characterization .

Ten chapters in and it's barely begun, so this will be a long journey. The writing is definitely good enough that I know I'm going to wait with baited breath for each new chapter release