Earth's Alpha Prime

by MN_1223

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore

 The System is assimilating Earth with the rest of the Vast Universe.

A Trial Program is needed for efficient assimilation and for that data needs to be recorded from 1111 individuals with Higher Potential Innate Abilities from the assimilating Planet.

This Trial Program was further divided into 3 Sub Programs namely, ALPHA Program, BETA Program and GAMMA Program.

Congratulations! You are one of the 11 Chosen individuals among 7.8 billion for the ALPHA Program.

As a Chosen member among 11 individuals of Alpha Program, you will be one of the first from your Planet to start the Trial Program.

When the Trial Program ends, the assimilation with Earth begins.

Survive, overcome danger and grow stronger. All the Best.


Cover Art Credit: Fantasy Pics Inc


Hi Guys

I am an amateur author and am writing this as my new Hobby.

If you find any grammar mistakes or anything, please let me know. Criticism is accepted, but don't outright hate the Novel.

If you don't like the book, tell me why so I can improve upon it. Cheers! Happy Reading!


Chapter Release rate: 2 Chapters a week.


If you want to support me, you can do that through these. I would appreciate your help.

Paypal: paypal.me/MN1223

Patreon: patreon.com/MN_1223

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. Unexpected Notifications! ago
2. Unknown Grade INNATE TALENT ago
3. 1st INNATE EXCLUSIVE SKILL - [LOOTED STATUS] ago
4. Successive Level ups in [Minor Sword Mastery] ago
5. Stage-2 [Sword Aura] ago
6. [Lesser Stamina Fruit] ago
7. [Adhesive Boots] ago
8. "No Pain, No Gain" ago
9. Time - 23:28:52 ago
10. Lv.?? Bloodthirsty Earth Bear ago
11. Lv.?? Dire Wind Wolf (Tier-2) ago
12. On the verge of Death!!! ago
13. Awakening the 2nd INNATE EXCLUSIVE SKILL of [LOOT] ago
14. Entering a state of No Emotions. ago
15. [Stream Wind Sword] ago
16. [Centauri Kavach] ago
17. Looting abilities from Tier-2 Monsters ago
18. [Milky Way Galaxy Trial Program] ago
19. Undergoing Tier-2 Evolution ago
20. Epic Grade Skill ago
21. Savant Syndrome ago
22. Conspiracy ago
23. Returning to Earth ago
24. 18 hours left till Day-2 of Alpha Program ago
25. [Personal Soul A.I] ago
26. Achievement Title: [Day-1 'Tier-2 Evolver'] ago
27. Adjusting to Increased Stats & Torture ago
28. Inverse Scale ago
29. [Limiter Ring] ago
30. [Trial Zone Alpha Leaderboard] ago
31. Lucky yet Unlucky! ago
32. Arc Spirit Fruit ago
33. <Limiter Debuff> ago
34. Secret Agent Blue ago
35. Day-2 Begins! ago
36. Lizardnoid Race ago

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Aldarin
Overall

Pure power fantasy with no real substance.

Plot armor is real, with the MC going up against a horde of level 10 poisonous creatures while at level 1, and walking away perfectly fine.

Even with an OP ability, the MC should still need to do some work, which doesn't happen at all.

Pacing is also off, and spelling/grammer needs a little work (not horrible though).

peterc
Overall

Really weird word chance throughout the first chap

Reviewed at: 1. Unexpected Notifications!

It seems like you picked random words from a thesaurus to sounds smarter but it has just made the story feel clunky and slightly off. Also there are other weird word choices throughout.

The spelling is good.

You should go over it again while reading out loud, is somthing doesn't sound right change it to somthing more natural.

Mamut22
Overall

I think this has great potencial. Interesting system ;) although little bit too fast and no real back story I dont expect it to have it this soon. I am looking forward what is earth reaction and first interplanet interaction I asume real backstory starts there.

Good job keep at it  ;)

kasim2712
Overall

It's a nice story so far, just needs some improvement with the grammar and not spending entire chapters doing info dumps, but it is fairly early in the story so I'll hopefully there won't be too many info dumps in the future. But overal I think it's a good story with plenty potential 

 

category 3
Overall

a gem you cant find else where

Reviewed at: 22. Conspiracy

although the plot was too fast and our MC is too OP. everything else is lovely creation very few can have.

 

the actual problem is the MC OPness and the lack of "logical challeges" 

 

and i LOVE the Plot you can imagine it hapenning in reality.

 

over all this is suppose to be 4.5 star but i wanna support the author by reviewig 5 star.

 

i hope the author can do more that what it is now and to not degrade.

 

thank you and happy new year author.

TheJammiest2
Overall

very good, a little bit too fast paced

Reviewed at: 20. Epic Grade Skill

I'm not here to give an in-depth review or anything, I just wanna give a few suggestions I thought of while reading:

The pacing is a little fast, slowing down the story would make it flow much better.
In conjunction with slowing the story down, take time to make sure that sentences flow together properly, as sometimes sentences can feel clunky and hard to read.

Overall, though, I'm thouroughly enjoying reading this so far!