Borne of Caution

by Fuggmann

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An irritated Pokemon might tell you to stop what you're doing. An irritated animal will probably just attack you. Pokemon, for all their power, would be open books and a breeze to care for to any competent animal handler on Earth. After a fiery death, a professional zookeeper who never outgrew Pokemon games ends up in the world of Pokemon. The entire world is thrown onto its side.

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Hits the pokemon feel, not cringe, and new

Reviewed at: Chapter 16

What the titel says,

It is good as a pokemon fanfic, it got the "feel" right (especially the pokemon/trainer relationship, but it really is the entire world)

The world is beleiveable, consistent and appears logical (internaly), idk the word don't get the "this shouldn't work in this world"

It avoids ALL of the cringe that i honestly feared. 

It is also...more...than "just a well written pokemon fanfic" or maybe not, but i find the story roundet, it is not as swallow aa one might fear. 

Ugh.. words..if you like pokemon, just read this, and if you don't like this, it's Worth the read


Explosive Rift

The characters are good, and quite realistic. For example, Professor Birch acts like a real professor, looking into potentially dangerous things for grant money.The portrayal of PTSD is extremely realistic in comparison to most published stories, though that is a depressingly low bar. Characters do not stray randomly from their core traits, and act realistically for people in their respective ages in their situations. The portrayal of the Pokémon clears several plot holes left over from the games and anime, and those that remain are often used as meta jokes and have other reasons for remaining. For example Pokémon behave like animals in most cases, with different Pokémon having different specialities. The Dex is shown to be made by humans and prone to human error, instead of all knowing like it is in the games, but still mostly accurate to the point of abilities that show prominently in the Pokédex being actual, non-move abilities. The spelling is near flawless, as is the grammar. The story isn't particularly new, but is a good take on a more realistic version of the anime's portrayal of the ruby/ sapphire/ emerald story. Fate is brought up as an actual thing with Ash being functionally immortal, and his companions only realising after their circumstances are actively pointed out.

Andross Guile

This is a great fan fic of a franchise that every kid in the 90s was immersed in and it is still going strong today. I stopped keeping up with Pokémon by gen 4, but I still remember playing the original Gold on my Gameboy Colour once I could read. This story evokes that nostalgia.

The style flows well, there are no major flaws and I'm satisfied with it.

The syntax is excellent. I cannot remember a single error.

The characters are comically 2D sometimes and I am not bothered by it, because I can tell that the author intended it to be so. The MC is 3D though. He isekaid through a nuke. Anybody would be suffer from PTSD.

As to the story. Shhhh, spoilers.

Continue on and don't let anybody rush you. I love the massive chapters.

The reviews over here. I need to fill up 200 words for an advanced review. Friggin' red ape in webnovel website. Who knew?

For some reason I need 200 words for an advanced review. I like 'em short and sweet. Screw you admin. Hmm, not 200 yet, eh? Come on, should I get creative with my insults? I keep 'em short because no one likes a massive review unless it's a well thought out analysis. Now get offa my back! 

There once was an admin, he had a lovely hairpin, I took it out of his hand, and slammed his face into the sand.



This made me feel so nostalgic

Reviewed at: Chapter 15

Well for starters I am no great fan of pokemon. Have watched the first 1-2 seasons like many kids of late 90's did but never watched again. 

Played some of the beginning Nintendo games like firered/emerald but no more. 

But man reading this story brought it all back. Plus as someone rightly said in one of the reviews, this is pokemon but with something more. Such great characterization, good background story, a respectful way of dealing with Lee's trauma, the distinct personalities of all the pokemons. This is really something amazing. Also loved what the author did with Vulpix abilities. What a way to make one of the original cute pokemons into a potential legendary. This was such an amazing read I just keep sighing in admiration, again and again. Vulpix really became my favourite pokemon now. Also just bought and installed various nds simulators and stormsilver roms to enjoy the games again. This story really brought all the nostalgic memories back. 

Easily one of the best I have read on Royalroad. Totally worth 5 stars! 


Relapsed... again :)

Reviewed at: Chapter 15

*Sticks his head out of the closet he's digging in.*

A review? Oh, sure. It's really good. One of the gnarliest isekai starts and... hang on.

*Digs around in the closet some more before returning*

I don't know a lot of the Pokemon cause I'm older but the emotions and the battles are real and enthralling enough to make me... oh, there it is.

*Pulls something rectangular from the depths of the closet or perhaps his past*

Review? Oh, umm... Lemme just pick my starter...


I thought i was done with Pokémon till i read this

Reviewed at: Chapter 16

this is the pokemon journey i never knew i always wanted. Fuck takes me back to middle school.

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I didn't expect to enjoy a pokemon story so much.
It really is a good surprise to read this. Now I want to go back playing the game waiting for the next chapter but I know I will be disappointed by the games' story.

Now the difficult part, it's easy to critic but not simple to make it helpful.

The style : If it weren't good I wouldn't continue to read it.
Still, even though there are good emotional passages, I believe it could be better by trying to build up the emotions slowly.
We need some time to feel empathy to the characters, so if it goes to quickly we can't immerge ourselves in the story.
I think it would be much better to rewrite the passages to feel the distress of the different people involved.

Very few typos, not enough to disturb me.

So far I like it, it doesn't feel like the author doesn't know what to do with his characters. Good rythm, not too fast, not over extended. Plausible if we were to consider poket monsters as a reality. Also I love it the we don't go in the direction where the protagonist knows everything because he know the game's and anime's story. It feels like there has been a thorough reflexion about the story.

The author shares with us how he sees the protagonists, I love that it is progressive, not everyone at once.
As I explained in the Style, if it gets improved we will have a better immersion with the characters.

To give more details about what I feel should be improved, I am speaking about the holocaust. During the emergency call, we don't even know if a warhead will really strike, or even explode, nor its intensity and it's okay. But, why peole are so quick to renounce? Panick I can understand it, it depends from people to people but ok. Still, just shooting yourself because you are under attack seems too much. If they knew that they were going to be burnt alive and suffer so much, I would perfectly understand but they don't know it, heck we don't even know if they are in the center of the town or outside of it.
Maybe having the emergency call give update could help to build up the despair, like "It has been confirmed that X, Y  cities are stricken, nothing left, no surivors around...." then people starting to realise what happens, then later a confirmation about the next targets.
Up to the moment before the explosion, I still thought it could have been a very bad joke. Someone hacking the emergency network.

During the food stand crisis with Treecko, I feel it was better, we could really feel the crisis build up. But I think he blurts out everything to Treecko to quickly in one go. Also I think it would have been better if it took him more times to see a reaction before trying to break the pokeball, or maybe writing abut what he is thinking, seeing him thinking too much about his feelings and Treecko's and convincing himself that Treecko's doesn't want to be with him but won't say it. Maybe writing more in such a way could explain better why he tried to break the pokeball.
To me when I read this passage, I felt like he just finally decided to tell hime everything, but very quickly without taking his breath then 2 seconds later he tries to break the pokeball. It felt really fast.

One last thing, it's only in this chapter 12, I think, that I realised how much Treecko lost when the tree fell. I guess people who saw the anime really felt it when the tree fell but for me at this time I didn't really understood what it meant for him. Maybe building up this just after it fell to see the association with Lee loosing everything, home, family, a place to belong to, this 'lost' feeling, maybe it could be improved.

Sorry for being this blunt and not very helpful about it, I love reading and not writing because I know I will never be satisfied with what I write but since it's something that always get better the more you practice, I heartly ask you to continue to make me dream about your beautiful world.
Good luck!

some total kretin


Reviewed at: Interlude 3

TL;DR: Hindsight is 20/20 and the start of this fiction was really nice through my rose-tinted glasses! I really liked it, but. The scales fell from my eyes and I realized the pacing is bad and the MC is a really bad example of Mary-Sue.

The style is amateurish at best. Third-person present tense as far as the eye can see. I don't remember any glaring grammatical errors, but I don't much pay attention to that unless it's really really bad.

Once the plot got established the faults are pretty obvious. There is a devil in everything and the more I look at it the more I can't unsee it.

The power-ups are just stupidly over-powered. The MC is going for "I'm mature and sensible", but devolves into the power of friendship induced plot armor at the first hint of trouble and then he is suddenly the EMO kid.

And also "Mary-Sue? Who's that? Never heard of her!". The MC is so badly Mary-Sueing everything it's starting to stink. He's out Ash-Ketchumed the Ash Ketchum for god's sake!

At this point, the world is bending over itself in describing how amazingly great he is and how misunderstood and caring and how he is an all-around great guy who shits soft-serve ice-cream.

In the end I enjoyed reading this to about chapter fifteen - where the tinted glasses broke - and the momentum is still pushing me forward. Well, now I'm just waiting for the next chapter and if it's still this same dross I'm dropping it and maybe taking off half a star.



I have always been mixed about this story. From one perspective, I have been craving Pokémon fanfics - especially OC trainer fics that are not Gary Stu's; on the other hand,  Borne of Caution is very clearly a first draft. Painfully so.

And all first drafts are not created equally.

So while this review will be critical and blunt, some people will naturally get offended because how dare I did not hold the Authors hand for participating. Please realize that the fact I am taking the time and effort to write this means something.

So to the review.


I am giving Borne of Caution 2/5, and that is probably being generous. Any other fandom this would be 1/5 from me, assuming I managed to last as long as I did before reaching the point of dropping-which is where I am now.

My problems with Borne of Caution are numerous. From weird dialogue choices, skipped/inconsistent character development, and shoe-horned plot armour that severely detracts from the story.

Character Score 1.5/5

When reading fiction, we, the readers, are seldom looking for a true representation of living, breathing humans. Often we look to see the best in ourselves and others, the traits and aspects that we wish we had - to be played out before our eyes. That is what makes moments of tragedy so powerful to read, see our heros fall, and witness these characters suffer in ways we often dread to imagine. Yet all the while, we are unable to tear our eyes away from the pages as they walk down the corridor that we know is a trap. 

Thankfully, that really won't be a concern because Lee is a hard man to care about. And the problems with our main character start early.

First things First

Chapter 1 is terrible. Like really, really bad, and as we hit the different sections of the review, I will continue to go back to it.


Lee is a hot mess, and not because he just got transported to a new world after getting nuked. No Lee is a hot mess because the author has ADHD and cannot decide if he wants a victim (Emo Lee) or if he wants an adult man living his childhood dream (Shounun Lee). Some of this bleeds into the "story" category, but it is all such a mangled pile of shit. I am unsure how to genuinely separate it all, so I won't.

  1. Lee gets nuked, dies, wakes up, feels the burns on his face, pulls multiple pieces of glass out of his body, then pets some pokemon. Like... What. The. Fuck?

Fiction asks a reader to suspend disbelief, fanfiction sometimes doubly so. However, multiple bleeding wounds, traumatic experience, and significant burns, but naa, we cool fam, we will just be petting this cute wild pokemans here. It’s all good, yo!

  1. Lee was supposed to be an animal handler earlier in chapter 1.

If she caught him, Lee would have been dead.

Harsh is the realization that any animal could turn on you.


One thousand words later, in chapter 1…

Lee slowly, carefully reaches a handout, pushing down the twinge of childish excitement that suddenly wants to rise out. "You're a friendly one, eh? My favorite," he says, gently laying a hand on the Pokemon's head.


Please, in what world is this supposed to make sense? How many people meet a strange dog, have it walk up to you and immediately start the head pats? Not many, I imagine. How about idk letting it smell your hand to familiarize themselves with your scent. Never mind a wild fucking superpowered animal. <- ignoring he has multiple lacerations and is suffering from multiple open burns.

The problem is that if this was Joe Buck, who was your seatmate in computer science that had never seen a wild animal, sure this makes sense. They are not going to have any fucking clues what to do. The character Fuggman is trying to write is an animal handler. It instantly breaks character. (Way to fix this: Do some research and apply a little critical thinking. Then read what you wrote to see if it makes sense.)


  1. The relationship between Lee and Vulpix and the interactions between the two are so ham-fisted and forced the first time I read it, I had to walk away.

So Vulpix is a pokemon from a save state he was playing on his phone(?) I think (that managed to survive the fire and the nuke btw... which is wut??). This is also the first time we get to see Emo Lee make an appearance. Anyway, this pixel from a save state made flesh is suddenly with Lee and is obviously 100 percent devoted and loyal, and well adjusted. The perfect pokemon anyone could ever ask for.

This is bad for numerous reasons, however, just from a character standpoint. How can Vulpix grow as a character? She will be a mainstay, yet she is perfect, everything a guy could want in a starter. And so the problems become even more blatant.

Between chapters 1 and 2, they go from total strangers to Lee calling her Luv. This is totally okay because Vulpix is perfect and we all become attached to our pets—however, this is a story, NOT REAL LIFE. Merely saying and “then they were friends” is the apex of shit writing, and any chance to have meaningful character growth was 100% lost within their interactions.

  1. This will be my last point on Character. Brendan was well done, in my opinion, compared to the rest. as a secondary side character. Because he did not act like a 12-year-old, and this was good. As I said earlier, we do not want real people. We want 12-year-olds that aren't bratty little shits, but “Kids” learn from their elders.

So I will part with this for characters. We do not want realistic people to be our character. We want people we can admire, people who strive for things we can only wish to. They need to be compelling, it is impossible to show everything that makes a human a human through text, so you need to choose and make those things matter.

And once those things are chosen, DO NOT CONTRADICT THEM 500 WORDS LATER.


Story Score 2/5

The story is misleading. There is no story. What there is a bunch of words, no clear antagonist, no real character goals or motivations. And a total lack of a consistent tone (Emo Lee - Shounen Lee). It is wish fulfilment trying to pretend there is something else there. 

Instead of getting into the supreme minutia of the 'story,' I will list a few things that kill its chances of being an actual story and firmly plant it into the realm of blatant wish fulfillment.


Lee's Pokemon "Skills"

Lee has a way with pokemon. In one scene, an angered giant mother pokemon is attacking a pokecenter to reclaim her egg. Now we will ignore that this stupid fuck is unopposed to be an animal handler and immediately gets right in the middle of the situation. Instead, look to the plot armour that makes sure this boneheaded move doesn't have any negative consequences.

Lee has an unnatural ability to communicate with pokemon; they understand him, like him and universally believe in him. It is almost a direct copy of Ash's ability in 'The Sun Soul.' However, it is made totally okay by the fact that he was a handler of animals at a zoo, and as a result, the author can say don't do this turn around, have lee do it and make sure it is all okay.


Everything Goes Lee's Way

One of the most famous things said about a story is that the protagonist fails and fails and fails until things look so bleak that it seems impossible for them to succeed. However, through all of their failures, they gain the skill nessesary to win overcome their enemy.

The difference between wish fulfillment and a story is that in wish fulfillment, the MC never fails, and lee never fails.

He is put into a new world heavily injured, and two wild pokemon bring him magical healing berries that work.

Lost in this new world, he doesn't need to start from scratch, and he gets a Vulpix that is perfect in every way, ensuring that as a rookie trainer, he faces no setbacks because his foundations are beyond ideal. 

His protagonist aura ensures that when he goes out for a Treecko, he gets the Treecko whom ash had gotten in the anime. IE A pokemon with limitless potential.

When drawing a gym battle, Lee doesn't lose; he wins because the battle was "epic."

Lee faces no real hurdles. He just randomly goes EMO and starts feeling sorry for himself


Lee's other World Knowledge

Ignorance is not allowed within wish fulfillment, and lee is an encyclopedia of everything he comes across. Constantly throughout the"Story," lee will Knowledge drop people to show them how much 'potential' he has as a young trainer and how thorough his research abilities are.


Style Score 2/5

Simply put, the writing is bad. Beyond the fact, it is written in third person present tense. Fuggman doesn't know the difference between showing and telling.

If lee is hungry and tired and sore, he tells you. If a pokemon is angry, he tells you. We, the readers, are incapable of understanding the world if it is shown, and instead, we are told. I would love to pick examples, but it is pointless to look at every scene in every chapter. There is no showing.


I was initially planning on going into more detail about this but sufficed to say, and I have lost all energy and motivation to talk about or re-read sections of this 'story.'



It is terrible, guys. It sits firmly within the guilty pleasure range of fiction, and the author sorely needs to research before writing as he improves at his craft.












I am not a pokemon fan however this is nice cute vibes although Lee's 'nam flashbacks are more comical than distressing with the caps lock OMG BIG PAIN text that doesn't mean anything to the reader I think the author should describe his physical reaction to the memory instead of trying to write intense movie scene subtitles also more description of the various pokemon would be nice because this fan fiction is not necessarily for just pokemon fans given how well it is written

listen to this pokemon mix while u read 11/10 recommended good music