The Perfect Run
by Void Herald
The Perfect Run is now available on Amazon Kindle.
Ryan "Quicksave" Romano is an eccentric adventurer with a strange power: he can create a save-point in time and redo his life whenever he dies. Arriving in New Rome, the glitzy capital of sin of a rebuilding Europe, he finds the city torn between mega-corporations, sponsored heroes, superpowered criminals, and true monsters. It's a time of chaos, where potions can grant the power to rule the world and dangers lurk everywhere.
Ryan only sees different routes; and from Hero to Villain, he has to try them all. Only then will he achieve his perfect ending... no matter how many loops it takes.
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Void Herald has always been my favorite author on this site, so i am giving this review to hopefully boost this fiction so more people can find him like i did.
I have like most people found his fictions through vainqueer the dragon and after tha got hooked on never die twice, so now hopefully we will have a third masterpiece coming. it is alredy looking promising for me after just a single chapter though i have always had a soft spot for time stop powers in fiction.
I am giving this story a full score for now as i doubt his story wll under perform considering his previous works on this site, but since this story only has one chapter as i am writing this review might change this score at a later date but for now i will just sit back and relax while watching this story unfold.
Ps please excuse any typos or grammatical mistakes i have made as english is not my first language and i dont have grammarly or any other spellcheck websites to see if i have made any mistake son my phone. hopefully i will not have to change my score.
bye for now
From the get go, the story dives right into an action-packed narrative with witty dialogue and first-class characters.
The story's point of view is from Ryan Romano a.k.a. Quicksave, but there is sufficient character development with his many loops, allowing readers to get more invested in these characters.
I particularly enjoyed how to author peels away layers in each chapter, revealing the MC's world that is well thought out and consistent, ticking off all three ingredients of world building - imaginary, alternate realities, and actual locations.
A delightful read, satisfying at all angles.
I can finally say that I get why this author is rated so highly - absolutely fantastic first few chapters! I honestly didn't expect the writing to be this funny, but I'm 100% glad for it. Of course, now I'm obligated to check out his other works and potentially lose the next few days to them.
I'll start out with the characters because I feel that this story lucks any good quality for them to be good.
The characters really only have a few quakes to distinct them from any of the other characters and most of the time this just makes them feel really hollow and kinda unrealistic. Especially when they interact with the MC right from the get-go they all just swarm him with quite unrealistic attention and the actions that follow.
For example ''Wyvern'' Mets our MC for the first time and the way this plays out is just unreal! ''Wyvern'' Long story short our lovely lady invites him to their super fun club team and says she will be on the lookout for our MC BFF. Now all while the MC is mostly naked. And described our MC as Deranged and has a reputation for collateral damage. Then she leaves.
To keep it short again basically, our MC gets invited to a different group and it plays out just as weird in the next chapter following that.
What I'm trying to say is that characters can be extremely unrealistic when it comes to our MC sometimes and this is all within the first couple of chapters and it plays on for the entirety of the story that I have read.
The story was was interesting enough to keep me going but the characters definitely hold this one back in some parts, I really like the save point parts but they can only go so far but I definitely like the concept that you were going for.
The general feeling of the story was alright definitely wasn't bad! But sometimes the way the MC speaks and his choice of words and literary sometimes can be noxious and generally unpleasant.
I would recommend toning back on his way with words but that could just be me!
Now I'm definitely not the best at grammar! So if I see something that's not quite right I generally don't make a point of it because you as the author have to write a lot to keep the fans happy! But I did see a few in there just sentence not quite clicking into place at times but could be just the way you have written it. Besides that really not that bad.
Really the only thing that's holding this back for me is really the characters for me. Rubs me the wrong way you know.
It has its Moments!
Just worth the read honestly, blew through this story fairly fast, and loved about everything of it, it is just so entertaining, the unusual premise helped a lot also, not often that you see a superhero ‘timeloop’ story, let alone this well written, by an already established author to boot! And then there is the MC, what an amazingly well written character he is!
I just love the MC Ryan and how he is written, he has just a such carefree attitude developed from his many reloads. He just fully embraced the absurdity and yet remains sane, even if it does not seem like it at first sight. He just keeps advertising what he can do, that killing him is futile, and keeps making those jokes and references, all just part of the greater personalia the MC has built.
The MC’s power is just insanely strong, as one would expect from a power that allows you to set a save point AND also use time stop, though with clear limits, and he uses it to maximum efficiency to achieve the best possible result for him and those he cares about. But even with such a power, he still has to be careful because he is not truly invincible, he may be able to ‘reload’ his way out of any bodily harm, but cannot do the same for his mental wellbeing.
In my opinion, Void Herald has done a good job with the setting this story takes place in, even more so since its rather wildly different from his other stories, which were all LitRPG’s. While this does take place in a dystopian Italy where you can get superpowers from using one of the rare Elixir’s or their more common knock-offs which grant lesser powers.
Grammar is great in my opinion, some typos and inconsistencies do pop up, but not frequent enough to be of any hindrance to the reading experience.
This story reads amazingly well and is paced without even letting up, it just keeps going without slowing down and drags the reader just in the story from the very start. I really like the way information is delivered in this story, more than enough information to let readers become familiar with the characters and the setting, while at the same time also keeping up a sense of mystery, without even infodumping anything! There’s also just the right kind of humour and comedy as one would expect from Void Herald.
Looking forward to what this story will become, I personally have high expectations due to the author's previous works, and the rather phenomal start this story has so far. The author is also very capable of writing quite different types stories and succeeded at it all, like demonstrated with this story.
Anyone interested in reading a good story with an interesting premise executed very well and fun MC, I recommend you this one. Oh also the author is one of the most reliable on this site, having completed multiple books already and in my opinion, this one is shaping up to be his best work so far. And if you loved his other stories, then of course you should start reading this one right now.
54 chapters in (because that's all s/he wrote so far). It was a good day. I just wanted to find out what happened next - each chapter.
just when I thought I would stop, it sucks me back in ... Oh yeah, and the pop culture references.
great world building.I am enjoying learning about the context and the wars and the tech. the "potion/magic system" is fascinating. It is interesting that the powers are on or off - there doesn't seem to be any development in power, only in the skill of leveraging the power that suddenly exists.
I am curious about how deep the author is intending to go into the lore of the system - can the geniuses reverse engineer the various realms? What will happen with the black?
Good superhero style dynamics and banter. So many characters to like, especially the MC. He is extremely likable even if he is not morally inspiring. They are surprisingly human vs. tropes - even though the author is not shy about brashly playing with tropes. It makes the whole read more enjoyable.
I have zero thoughts on grammar and spelling - I don't notice or care either way. I just know if I enjoy the story.
Such a great ride. Looking forward to more.
Its a good read by a solid author a weird mix of comedy, whimsy and post apocaliptic nightmare fuel with the main character both eternally hopeful yet incredibly jaded and bored. So far I enjoy it as much as Vainqueur I just hope it ends better than Never Die Twice did.
I haven't yet found a story by Void Herald that didn't make me laugh a lot, cry a little, and leave me completely glued to my screen. This story comes with an interesting premise and Void does an excellent job of digging into his main character's psyche as he strives for a Perfect Run.
As usual, Void Herald shows us what a great story is. The MC, a time-travling super "hero," is on a quest to find his own happy ending. He's died millions of tines to do son and will die millions more. The characters all feel like they should (bad guys feel bad, good guys feel good, and all have a massive grey area showing that good and evil aren't absolute). We see a panda, a dragon-shifting woman, and a living sun, among countless other powers. The fact that this is Void's 4th(?) story shows, as the introduction to this world is extremely smooth, and the story is extremely enjoyable. If you like time-travelling, superpowers, murderous rabbit slushies, and a lonely man just trying to find someone who he can call a permanent friend, read this!
Really good story idea that doesn't get boring even though not even a month has gone by. We discover more angles and information with every new "run". The world is pretty fleshed out and the logic of the powers also seems straight forward. Reminds me of Worm for example. Also, every power seems to have some counter, which is pretty cool. Except maybe Pandas. He's unbeatable.
Characters are interesting, main character has a driving force (or will invent one on short notice) for his actions and while his power is really good it's not overpowered compared to some of the heavy-hitters.