When Immortal Ascension Fails Time Travel to Try Again

When Immortal Ascension Fails Time Travel to Try Again

by DragonOfRochester

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity

What is my 1000-year-old monster self to do when I’ve failed my immortal ascension? Time travel — accidentally — and wind up back in my 9-year-old body, needing to re-cultivate, of course. But after that? Get REVENGE! Muahahahaha! 

But the idiot who killed me — also accidentally — was the main character of the dumb harem Xianxia I transmigrated into. But wait. Wasn’t he only 7 or 8 at this point in time? Well, since I can’t harm a child or the main character without suffering in some way, then I’ll just have to raise him better, faster, stronger, and loyal! Muahahahaha!


This is a Xianxia comedy and satire by the author of Cold Steel Dig and Tome of Stealth. But it is also a series of interconnected and chronological short stories (featuring the same main characters).

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Story 1 - Cultivating All Over Again ago
Story 1 Bonus - The Girl in Our Village is Crazy ago
Story 2 - Golden Fingers, Jade Boxes, and Other Treasures (Part 1) ago
Story 2 - Golden Fingers, Jade Boxes, and Other Treasures (Part 2) ago
Story 2 - Golden Fingers, Jade Boxes, and Other Treasures (Part 3) ago
Story 2 - Golden Fingers, Jade Boxes, and Other Treasures (Part 4) ago
Story 2 - Golden Fingers, Jade Boxes, and Other Treasures (Part 5) ago
Story 2 - Golden Fingers, Jade Boxes, and Other Treasures (Part 6) ago
Story 2 - Golden Fingers, Jade Boxes, and Other Treasures (Part 7 out of 7) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 1) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 2) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 3) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 4) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 5) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 6) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 7) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 8) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 9) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 10) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 11) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 12) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 13) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 14) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 15) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 16) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 17) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 18) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 19) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 20) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 21) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 22) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 23) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 24) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 25) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 26) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 27) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 28) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 29) ago
Story 3 - Spiritual Vines and a Smokey Pill Cauldron (Part 30 out of 30) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 1) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 2) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 3) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 4) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 5) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 6) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 7) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 8) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 9) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 10) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 11) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 12) ago
Story 4 - What Happens in a Slaughter Formation, Stays in a Slaughter Formation (Part 13/13) ago
Story 5 - A Sharp Inheritance (Part 1/3) ago
Story 5 - A Sharp Inheritance (Part 2/3) ago
Story 5 - A Sharp Inheritance (Part 3/3) ago
Story 5 Bonus [Volume 1 End] - A Beautifully Bad Meal (Part 1/2) ago
Story 5 Bonus [Volume 1 End] - A Beautifully Bad Meal (Part 2/2) ago
Volume 1 Art 🎨 (Includes sneak peek) ago
On Break Until October 7th ago
Story 6 - Slapping Faces and Entering Sects (Part 1) ago
Story 6 - Slapping Faces and Entering Sects (Part 2) ago
Delay Note ago

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I wasn’t quite sure what to expect from this story. The cover art is cute and chibi, while the blurb radiates pure chaotic energy. And I’m not exactly a regularl purveyor of the xiaxia format, I’ve read Cradle, Forge of Destiny, and… yeah, that’s about it. 

But I’m very glad I did. 

The first thing that attracted me to Dragon’s MC is that she has a bit of a mean streak. Nothing over the top—she’s not a bully—but she’s rightfully mad as hell to be in the situation she’s in and not shy about expressing that fact. What sets WIAFTTtTA apart is how this characterization is expertly tied into the MC herself. She never stews in her anger. It just makes her more proactive, which is incredibly entertaining to watch. 

WIAFTTtTA is also one of those well-written satires that refuses to trade a good story for a cheap laugh. There are jokes, funny ones—Dragon has a strong sense of comedy and timing—but they never usurp the story itself. There’s also hints of a much larger narrative threads at play, despite the implication that this is a series of tangentially related short stories. I’m on to you, author.

The comparison to traditional publishing I keep coming back to is that WIAFTTtTA reads like a less british, more angry, Terry Pratchett.  

Great stuff. Every minute spent reading this was worth it, and I look forward to reading more. 

Nameless32
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[Note: Not a swap]

"Isn't this a bit too early to be giving an advanced review, Nameless?"

Well, dear reader, due to the nature of this story, I'm able to accurately review it all off of just the ~5k words written! You see, this collection was originally meant to be a singular short story, with a clear-cut beginning, middle, and end. However, if you're not into anthology-type stories, don't fret! This collection follows the same MCs across the same journey in (probably) chronological order. The chapters themselves are just formatted as short stories ^.^

Alright, now onto the review!

I've always been a fan of Rochester's style, and this story takes it to a whole other level with the prose. I've often praised authors for managing to mimic "traditional" xianxia style without compromising their prose, but Rochester goes a step further and manages to do so while still positively dripping satire. 

That isn't to say that the satire is overwhelming, though. Rather, it's always in the background, giving way to a real, compelling, story. The characters are absolutely adorable, and these first two chapters alone hold more development than most xianxia do in their entire series. 

Oh, and the grammar is great. I was a beta reader for this story, and even in its rough draft stages I barely noticed anything. 

All in all, if you're looking for a wonderfully written, wholesome satire on xianxia, definitely give this a try!

librarysmiles
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This is one of my favorite Xianxia stories because the focus is on cute children, rather than the face-slapping and killing (which also happens). I enjoy the human female "fairy" main character and her adorable antics and I love the humorous tone. 

The reason this novel earned a fifth star from me is because of the rules. Of course, the first rule is about not talking; but the rules are gold star material (stolen from other stories) to make this story fun! I double dog dare you to read far enough to find the rules! 😉

Csuite
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I was excited to read this one from the start. Its concept alone is a ton of fun. Protagonist Fairy Lin has been transmigrated from Earth into a xianxia book she's never read, and has already done one 1000-year stint in its fictional world, cultivating and striving for immortality while being thwarted at every turn by her nemesis, the main character - the insufferable overpowered edgelord Bloodsword with his ever-expanding harem of wives. When she comes tumbling into the past, having failed her immortal ascension at Bloodsword's hands, she storms back into the main character's life, only to find him still an adorable, well-meaning and naive child.

WIAFTTTTA (what an acronym!) is packed full of satirical, snide and clever observations about xianxia tropes, with clear affection for the genre. You don't need to be a xianxia afficionado to enjoy this story, however; its author does a masterful job of making its references clear and its jokes accessible to all. In fact, if you removed the satire you'd still have one hell of an interesting story on your hands, with a rapid pace, immersive worldbuilding and an absolutely perfect balance of tension, character moments, and discovery as Lin struggles to dredge back her memories of how events played out the first time around, and the ongoing repercussions of her time travel-enabled changes on the world.

The grammar here is excellent and both the style and flow of the story are impeccable. I could easily see WIAF being published and don't think it would need much of an edit. It's an effortless read you can blitz through very quickly and be disappointed there isn't already more. (Incidentally, this is what happened to me.) 

But WIAF's shining stars are its characters. Fairy Lin is a memorable protagonist I immediately fell in love with. Strong-willed and determined not to take any shit from Bloodsword (or anyone else), she's arrogant, highly competent and confident, yet at times hilariously inept at dealing with her abrupt fall back to the mortal realm after centuries of being unaccustomed to it. Her journey is largely one of culture shock - learning to adapt to new limitations and the occasional intrusion of humility. And yet underneath her 'grumpy old master' veneer is a heart of gold just waiting to emerge.

Bloodsword - or Little Spring, as Fairy Lin dubs him in her second run - is every bit as charming, and his hapless idealism is the perfect counter to Lin's domineering persona. The interplay between the two of them is some of the best I've seen, and the wide cast of fun supporting parody characters ensures every character interaction is an absolute blast.

Underpinning the outer fluff, however, are some genuinely serious and compelling mysteries - first and foremost being: how did the adorable Little Spring become the fearsome Bloodsword? Is Fairy Lin fair in her dismissive assessment of his annoying wives, or is there more to each of them than meets the eye? What is going to happen with the vines? And will Lin be able to reform Bloodsword, or is he doomed to retrace his former steps?

I would like to gently bop the author on the head for more story, please - this is a fantastic, fun read balancing a serious plot with lighthearted overtones. An easy five stars from me, and I can't wait for more!

flowerpower6286
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Fairy Lin is a grumpy cultivator accidentally killed and transmigrated into her 9 year old past self. Retaining her memories (not everything, 1000 years is a long time), she goes out to find the MC and correct past wrongs (by doing all she can to prevent him from being the incorrigible scourge in her past life). 

Hilarious and engaging, DragonOfRochester weaves a compelling satire around overpowered MCs and harem xianxias, from braindead past/future wives to plot armor tropes.

A really fun read! Recommended if you like fiction with really long titles.

sillystring
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After reading this, I think I finally understand why Beware of Chicken is so popular. Dropped BoC after a dozen chapters because I just could not find it funny, but this one had me ROFLing right away.

Fairy Lin is hilarious! Her hate for the original harem xianxia and edgelord Bloodsword warms my heart. I love how she is really a grumpy forgetful old master trapped in a cute child’s body.

She does feel like the only real person in the story though. Even Little Spring is an adorable kid-version of a protagonist archetype more than an actual person at this point. That’s fine if you love Fairy Lin and her cynical brand of humor, which I do, but I think enjoyment of this serial really hinges on that.

Dragrath
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The characters are fun and the story manages to come across quite naturaly given the premise.

Suffice to say the timeline divergence and the interactions with genre staple tropes and or plot armor is great XD 

It is a bit unconventional in how it is split into seperate stories but they all fit toether naturally 

Sorenmageofmareth
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I find that the stories funny well times it's just and enjoyable read. My only real problem is that I don't really get into the detail parts of the alchemy it feels more like filler and less like the characterization and you were I think it is attended to be. I feel like her reactions to the exploding cauldron and the last paired pill making for the repair done are the best parts. The alchemy had strong characterization purposes however continuing to elucidate alchemy is such would probably be a mistake. I feel that if each individual scene doesn't have a f****** that shows a flaw or advanced relationship it really shouldn't be in. I also like how basically this is a ship and it turns out dodging on the protagonist calls it him to basically implode.

luda305
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This is a great story.  I suspect that is originally started as satire, but very quickly it has become a very serious story that pretends to be a satire, but at the same time occasionally making satirical or meta-xianxia comments. As a xianxia, it's a very, very good execution (other than the meta-comments, which are funny, but don't contribute to it as a serious story).  Highly recommended.

Kevin Huynh
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I've read so many (translated) xianxia novels that the tropes get boring fast. There are many intrinsical issues with the genre itself the power fantasy, the ruthlessness, the sexism, and many many more issues. But even seeing those flaws doesn't mean you can't love the genre.

The author of When Immortal Ascension Fails Time Travel to Try Again clearly loves the genre but precisely worked out its flaws and tropes. I'm not sure if this story is for anyone not steeped into the genre but to be honest I don't care cause this thing is gold.

Style: I don't think there is something intrinsically wrong with the style. There are just some wording issues that I have that are purely subjective. But at some points, the flow is a bit bumpy.

Story: Like I said it's pure gold. It's subverting the genre without making fun of it. There is no arrogance at all. The loop aspect of the story is an interesting take on the regular loop stories. The stakes don't feel as forced and pretentious. 

Character: I think the characters are one of the best-written characters on RR. They are very fun takes on established tropes. 

Grammar: I've got no issues with the grammar. But my own grammar knowledge is fairly limited. Take it as you will. 

 

All in all a fantastic story. I only hope the release frequency picks up (no pressure hehe)