Beneath the Dragoneye Moons

Beneath the Dragoneye Moons

by Selkie

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

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Elaine is ripped from this world to Pallos, a land of unlimited possibilities made real by a grand System governing classes, skills, and magic.

An ideal society? What is this, a fantasy novel?

Adventures? Right this way!

A Grand quest? Nah.

Friends and loot? Heck yes!

Humans are the top dog? Nope, dinosaur food.

Healing and fighting? Well, everything is trying to eat her.

Join Elaine as she travels around Pallos, discovering all the wonders and mysteries of the world, trying to find a place where she belongs, hunting those elusive mangos, all while the ominous Dragoneye Moons watch her every move.

Hey! Beneath the Dragoneye Moons is my first writing effort, so please be kind, but don’t hesitate to point out the flaws.

The story starts off slowly, more like a slice of life than action-adventure, but it gets there!

I’m going to be posting M-W-F

I do know how the story ends, and I promise if it ever gets dropped, or I stop doing this, I will post the ending. There will be no random “this is the last chapter” out of the blue.



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41 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Image Gallery! ago
Dedication ago
Chapter 1 - Rebirth ago
Interlude - The Magic Elements Explained! ago
Interlude - Bonus Content - Black Crow//White Dove ago
Chapter ???? – The Coven of Fabulous Witches 0 ago
Chapter ???? – The Coven of Fabulous Witches III ago
Worldbuilding - What caused the deadzone? ago
Chapter ??? - Dragoneye Mortis 1.1 ago
Chapter ??? - Dragoneye Mortis 1.2 ago
Chapter ??? - Dragoneye Mortis 1.3 ago
Chapter ??? - Dragoneye Mortis 1.4 ago
Catchup Artwork! ago
Chapter ??? - The Wish 1 ago
The problems with Beneath the Dragoneye Moons ago
Hey! Where did the chapters go? ago
Chapter 375 - New Skills! ago
Chapter 376 - War Class ago
Chapter 377 - Deep Lore ago
Chapter 378 - The Hidden Library ago
Chapter 379 - General Skills ago
Chapter 380 - Interlude - Auri - The Great Brrrrptish Bake-off ago
Chapter 381 – Divine Errand ago
Chapter 382 - Practice Makes Perfect ago
Chapter 383 - Citation Needed ago
Chapter 384 - Interlude - The Proof is in the Pudding ago
Chapter 385 - The Gladiator Gauntlet I ago
Chapter 386 - The Gladiator Gauntlet II ago
Chapter 387 - Interlude - Iona - The Gladiator Gauntlet III ago
Chapter 388 - Interlude - Takatane Sakai - The Gladiator Gauntlet IV ago
Chapter 389 - The Gladiator Gauntlet V ago
Chapter 390 - The Gladiator Gauntlet VI ago
Chapter 391 - The Gladiator Gauntlet VII ago
Chapter 392 - Interlude - Iona - The Gladiator Gauntlet VIII ago
Chapter 393 - The Gladiator Gauntlet IX ago
Chapter 394 - The Gladiator Gauntlet X ago
Chapter 395 - The Gladiator Gauntlet XI ago
Chapter 396 - The Gladiator Gauntlet XII ago
Chapter 397 - The Gladiator Gauntlet XIII ago
Chapter 398 - Orienting to the Future ago
Chapter 399 - A Mango A Day ago

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It's always a pleasure to find Litrpg where the game mechanics supplement good writing rather than compensate for a lack thereof.  The story starts a bit rush and awkward, but the author really hits their stride after a few dozen chapters, and even the early ones are still decent.

The author's handling of sexism grows more nuanced and natural with the rest of their writing.  Elaine (the protag) faces a nice mix of personal and systemic problems.  She's a bit scatterbrained at the start, but it's kinda hard to tell whether that's on purpose or part of the author learning to write.

The worldbuilding, what little we've seen of it, is well done.  Armies fighting an eternal war against monster ants makes a lot more sense than paying poorly regulated mercenaries to keep your country safe (*cough* adventurers *cough*).  Julien's reaction to Elaine talking about dragons sells their danger and mystique better than any trite info-dump could have.

Er... two hundred words... The system is a nice mix of original and familiar.  The worldbuilding takes some of the practical consequences of certain people being massively stronger/faster/tougher than others into account.

Advice for the author... try to keep the big picture in mind.  We haven't encoutered much by way of economics and politics because Elaine hasn't and isn't terribly interested in it, so it's hard to tell if you have a long-term plan or not.  I'd recommend the occasional interlude from another character's perspective - lots of opportunity for context and to fill in certain things that the protag just doesn't care about.

Forrest Andar

So, I've been reading this pretty much all of my free time for the last few days and finally caught up to the current chapter. I'd have to say I definitely like it and I'm looking forward to more.

Style: I've got no real complaints. The exp notifications can sometimes be difficult to read, but that is just a litrpg thing.  The colors of skills can sometimes be difficult to interpret.  

Grammar: I've caught a few spelling errors, but nothing terrible, just typos I think.  I haven't once found myself wondering if English is their second language :D 

Story: It's fun and engaging, occasionally sad/dark.

Character: Really like the main character and her motivations. Her ADHD is sometimes distracting, but so is having ADHD :D  As a fellow mango lover, I look forward to seeing what she gets into next.


I don't know how many words I've already written, but apparently it wasn't 200.  Maybe this will bring me over the limit. Sheesh, I'm a reader here, not a writer.  Nope.  Still not enough.  What do you want from me Royal Road!?!  This is why I don't do advanced reviews, but the author asked so nicely for them in like every single chapter's notes. So I'm trying to get this to submit.....


I'm somewhat grumpy about lost potential, so it could seem that there are more cons than pros, but it is actually wrong and author did good job. But I know he can do better.

TLDR: The writing itself and start of the story are pretty good, had great potential to be really entertaining read, a shame it becomes stale without proper chracter growth. At least up to 315 chapter story was interesting. And. It. Is. Many. Long. Chapters.


Writing is easy to read, descriptions are vivid and there are no problems with distinguishing between character dialogues.

Roman-style country in tropics with dinos in fantasy is pretty novel and world building is to my liking.

Plague and formorians arcs are actually really really great and I even had some problems with sleep due to how interesting they are.


Character growth is nearly non-existant: I can fully understand that physical body can strongly influence mind, but MC stays the same on core level even after childhood, at least through 350+ chapters - immature, barely learns anything outside of her field of expertise and makes same mistakes over and over again, even though these mistakes could be practicaly fully mitigated with expierence and knowledge from past life. It can be explained with MC being stupid, but she is clearly not. And it can't be explained with ADHD - it is about attention and hyperactivity, not about low intellect and inability to learn (she actually learns just fine in first school arc). No, "alergy" on "social" skills is not really great reason either. Hard times actually make children mature fast and MC somehow stays immature even after many-many close-to-death and shocking experiences.
The problem is relatevly small or nearly non-existant while MC is solo or in small party in wildness, but is really pronounced in society and during "political" arcs. Secondary characters have some growth, but barely pronounced.

Theme of sexism is mostly used as plot device, forgoten for most of the story,  totally ignored then it is convenient, resurfaces sometimes to force MC or other people do stupid things to move said plot. Basically, if the theme is implemented, better to stick to its premise and be consistant. Or don't bother with it.

Timetraveling is basicaly used as 'reset button' to everything and I personally think was badly thought through - every single plot vanished, only some characters stayed and everyone survived tribulation practically didn't get anything out of it, even though story was previously consistent with equation danger/stress = level/expierence, also

MC did know about possible time trap, but just straight left most dear people to die of old age, even though she could have prolonged their lifespan significally. Yes, they still would have died of old age, given how much time passed, but she didn't even tried. 


After timetravel it is completely new story with some old characters. Don't think I'll read it.


The story has shifted to slice of life, which is fine, but the plot has almost completely stalled.

When Elaine entered the school, there were so many things to be excited for, like her identity as the author of the healing manuscripts, her scholarship as part of the combat team, trying to get in touch with Night, and her roommates backgrounds.

Instead, she's now been in the school 3 years, there's been only passing mention of her revealing her identity, we haven't seen a single combat competition, she has made no effort to contact Night, and her roommates are mentioned so rarely it's difficult to remember who they are. That wouldn't be so bad if there were other things happening, but aside from her relationship with Iona, you could have skipped the last 30 chapters and not really missed anything of note. 

The story just feels so shallow now. Any possible conflict is swept away the next chapter.


Fanatic beginning, falls off after chapter 300-ish

Reviewed at: Chapter 361 - Biomancy III

If I just reviewed the first arc, through about chapter 300, I'd give this 4-5 stars, easy.  Since then, I've just been kind of paging through, hoping to get back to the original style and content.  I read a wide range of stuff, but it's frustrating to get 300 chapters in to a world, and have the rug yanked out from under you.  I thought the transition to the new arc was done pretty well, but why would the MC have suddenly just abandoned her close friends?  There's other stuff that led me to stop reading on this particular date, but I won't post spoilers.

edit: Not sure why it won't let me edit the typo in the title (should be fantastic, not fanatic).  I agree with another reviewer, if the author 

stopped where the family kept putting the mango in the dish until they no longer remembered who it was for, that would have a better ending.  A terribly depressing one, but better.


Mad Mardigan

I saw this series recommended on a discord channel  while I was struggling to find something decent.  

This series of 3 books is outstanding.  Yes I'm sure theirs some critiques.  If you are looking for something to read.  Read this.  It's good.  

Female MC, gamelit with stats, MC is a healer it's a great change of pace and hit the right spot with being something different to read.  Theirs only so much time loop, OP MC, or harem I could do.  Expand your mind man. This book made me think their was a reason people were into TV shows like House, ER, Greys Anatomy.  No love interest so far with MC.  the philosophy on making medical decisions can provide the same action sense a battle does.  

characters are real, grammar is fine, story is outstanding, style hit the spot.

I rarely log into RR.  Normally I read logged off on my phone at work.  This is one of the few books I logged into and reviewed.  I don't think you'll be disappointed.  

how many more words does a review need holy mangoes.  By the way I signed up to authors patreon I was hooked and didn't want to stop

oh my god, more words?!  This is why I don't do reviews.  I'm at work and don't have time for this.  Typing paragraphs on my phone is annoying as well.


Overall a quality story, Decent world building, not just cookie cutter LitRPG fantasy world Inetesrting background characters, although many in the middle of the book seemed excessively detailed for the amount of use they were actually put to in the story (here I'm mainly talking about the other trainees at the school, Now I presume they'll pop up later in the tale, but there weren't really enough connections made between the Main Character and the other students whilst she was there)

the main character is occasionally irritating, but that's the way she started, and you can see her developement although it is occasionally judderingly slow. however it is all internally consistent and fits together without relying on standard tropes. So individual enough to truly interesting, not someone who had me sat thinking "Oh god, here we go again"

The Grammar and style are both excellent, with the occasional error, but no more then the majority of published books. the rythm of the word use storytelling is excellent. and any novel where the main character is getting annoyed because they're being talked into quoting huge sections of Homer once again for the entertainment of the others has a few more layers than standard hack / slash / zap / burn storytelling



LITRPG, but not too heavy on stats. A kind of Isekay and a strong, but not overpower character.

This novel goes to something that is similar to a medieval fantasy at the begining, but as the world is presented it shows that it is very original.

I like the way that this story looks very familiar but at the same time very original. The way that stats and skills are ver important, but they are not the whole of power.

Very good 3D characters.


Might as well be a new story at this point!

Reviewed at: Chapter 375 - New Skills!

I loved every chapter, that is until author killed off most of the cast and skipped thousands of years into the future, and it was all done in a few short chapters. It just felt abrupt, and invalidated so much of the world building. Hence, for these reasons I can not score it high in story and character. I am sure author can rebuild the worldbuilding, our attachment and care for the characters, but it might as well be a new book at that point.

Would have rather that the story was given a proper ending, and made a new story instead, than this mishmash. Now, I understand why the author didn't, this already had a established fanbase, why take the chance? But I just think it did this story a disservice.

Grammar and style are both near flawless, the system is well explained and structured. Probably one of my favourite and well thought-out systems around, with a wide variety of abilities, with everything being somewhat balanced.

I will sorely miss this system, the characters, the world, I would have also have liked to read about her meeting Night again, but I just can't keep reading it at this point.


A lot of good parts mixed in with some bad.

Reviewed at: Chapter 168.1 – Aftermath

Beneath the Dragoneye Moons is a 5/5 story if you can read it without thinking about what you are reading at all. If you start questioning any of the main or side characters actions, motivations, the human society or the world that they inhabit, you will find that many of them are not grounded in reality. I think that the core issue here is that the author wanted to write two different stories in one. First story is a fun LitRPG with a juvenile MC that goes around on adventures and has fun, and the second is a dark story with slavery and sexism, a never-ending war with an invasive species that is hellbent on destroying humanity. While this book is focused on the first story there are almost no problems. The world and the System are created with the first story in mind, but when the elements for the second story are just dumped in, without spending the effort to make it work, then the problems start to pop up everywhere.

Let’s start with the System. I would call the System here omnipotent. When I say that, I’m talking about the sheer variety of classes that have been shown so far. For every single conceivable activity there might be a related class. I wouldn’t be surprised if someone who has a dream of being a dog gets a class that helps him with that. I think that the author showed all of the quirky classes for comedic effect but they set a precedent for all of the possible classes that can be found in this world. Now, in the first type of story that wouldn’t be a problem, but in the second it is. Let’s say that there is a noble that likes to torture people. It wouldn’t be surprising for an organization to exist that provides that kind of service. There might be a person that has a class with skills whose effects would help while being tortured. Maybe a skill that offers increased regeneration while being tortured, pain nullification, pain conversion to pleasure, increased acting skill while being tortured, pain sharing, the effect can be almost anything. Something that is established in this book is that the more specialized the class for a certain situation, the more powerful it is in that situation. A high-level Farmer could have skills that multiply his stats while farming, increase crop resistance and yield. Imagine any activity and there will be a class that makes them excel at that activity. Now ask yourself a question, why would anyone buy a slave that doesn’t have a related class? A high-level Farmer, Gardener or a Maid would be a luxury, not a common commodity that people can buy in the market. They would be a time and resource investment that you would want to keep loyal. If you have two job offers and you know that one is better than other, then you would choose the better one. Maybe they are allowed by law to treat people like slaves and everyone obeys that law? But the law doesn’t shape the society, the society creates the laws. The administrators would be in charge of administering, the generals would be in charge of the army, healers would be in charge of the healing and so on. A simple soldier could never do a better job than a general, no matter their level difference, because the general has skills that directly help him with commanding an army. Rulers wouldn’t have combat classes, they would have classes that would make ruling better. You could say that people with combat classes would just kill everyone else in their way and overpower everyone, but rulers would have skills that would help them rule. Which means, skills that would make everyone fall in line, skills that would instill loyalty in their subjects. Human stupidity wouldn't be a factor when the skills do all of the work.

Again, when there are people specialized for every conceivable activity, why would anyone buy slaves? You would lose money like that. It would make a lot more sense that the nobles would have families, that they took care of, who had family occupations. Farmers, Miners, Masons, Architects, Teachers, Guards, you could be educated for that class by your family or there could be schools that offer teaching for a certain class.

This is just one example of trying to integrate a powerful System in the world. If this story was just a fun adventure, then it wouldn’t be a big deal if the author didn’t bother spending the effort and pages on boring societal structures but when it’s trying to tackle serious issues then that effort needs to be invested.

It makes me sad that the author spent almost no effort trying to integrate such a powerful System. The whole human culture would be shaped by it. Instead, we have a medieval society with fantasy elements thrown in the mix with almost no effort to make a cohesive whole that supports the rest of the story.


Something else that you should keep in mind about how people should be treated is the existence of people who could kill whole towns without too much effort. It would take only one to bring irreparable damage. Maybe a runaway slave managed to level up. Maybe a high-level adventurer fell in love with a girl, and while he was on a quest, she was kidnapped by a noble who thought he was untouchable. By the time that person was killed they would have enough time to destroy multiple towns. It would take one assassin to bring the half of the Empire to it’s knees.


Let’s go over the unending war a little bit. I might be wrong, but I don’t think that war was covered until later in the story. Maybe some small hints were dropped here and there, but I don’t really remember it. Imagine Vikings for a moment. Their whole culture is based on battle, raiding and killing each other. It was an honor to die in battle and be worthy of joining other warriors in Valhalla. Now imagine that there is a great, unending war. Children would be brought up with stories about bravery and valor of the army that is fighting that war. Considering how integral and important that war is for humanity there should be songs about warriors fighting on the front lines, children should be playing in the streets humans vs formorians, wives should be proud of their husband and sons going into the Great Fight, fighting for humanity. Maybe the most important piece of worldbuilding is glossed over until it becomes relevant to the MC. That would be the same thing like watchers of LotR movies learning about Sauron when Frodo reaches Mordor.


As far as sexism is concerned, the only thing that I can say is that I don’t know why it’s even in this story. The only influence of sexism in this story is in the beginning. It’s the main factor for MC leaving her home to start her adventure. That is, it. We constantly hear how sexism makes life difficult for women in this world but that is never truly shown after the beginning. Being female never got in the way for the MC to do whatever she wanted. Sexism in this story is as follows: MC meets someone and tells them they are doing everything wrong, they answer that MC doesn’t know what she is talking about because she is a woman, MC shows them that she knows what she is talking about, they accept. There are some minor exceptions to this but in most cases it’s like this. You might find that when a teenager comes to a professional and tells them that what they have been doing their whole life is wrong, gender isn’t really a factor in that equation. None of the side characters are sexist, MC’s gender is of no influence to the story, you might even forget it exists until the author sneaks up on you and slaps you with a sexist stick in the face out of nowhere and for no reason.  The consequences that sexism exists are so minor that there is no point in it even being in this story. And of course, the world that the author has created doesn’t support sexism in any way, but enough reviews have gone over why that is the case so I’m not going to repeat them.


All of the dark and gritty elements of this story maybe constitute 5% in all. Sexism is important in the beginning and later on is almost forgotten, it’s usually MC saying how a life for a woman is hard and nothing else. Slavery is mentioned a few times but is ultimately pointless. My only problem with the war is that something that important is not really set up correctly, but in the end it’s not a huge issue. Almost all of this story is written like a fun adventure. Yes, there are sad and difficult moments, but the MC is the same naïve, bumbling idiot from the beginning. I don’t know why the author decided to put in all of the darker stuff in, they are not a big part of the story, they are not explored in any way, and the only thing that they do is hurt the fun adventure that is the 95% of this story.

Aside from that small percent of stuff that doesn’t belong in this story, everything else is a good, fun LitRPG story. Some of the fights are honestly not that great in my opinion. They are usually dragged out because we are stuck in the MC’s head during the fight. Tons of introspection. Upgrading the class is one of the worst parts of this story for me. It usually takes multiple chapters where nothing is happening. Instead of getting a list of classes and getting it over with, we get class after class that the MC knows she won’t pick even before looking at upgrades. Classing up is not done very often so it’s not a huge issue, but those chapters are completely skippable, which should never be the case in a book.

Unfortunately, after the extremely boring first 20 to 30 chapters the quality of arcs goes up and down. Most are great, few not so much, but you can power through them. The bad parts are not too bad, just a little bit boring.

Characters are serviceable. There isn’t really any character growth for the MC. Even when she grows up, she still behaves like a kid. A kid that killed quite a lot of people, but I guess murder doesn’t change you in fantasy land. Considering that we are stuck in MC’s head for most of this story, side characters are quite decent.

Grammar is ok.

Almost every great thing in this story is tainted by something bad, be it worldbuilding, the story or the characters, but if you can look over all of the bad parts, you are left with a really fun and entertaining story.