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On just another normal Monday, the world changed. The universe had reached a threshold humanity didn’t even know existed, and it was time to finally be integrated into the vast multiverse. A world where power is the only thing that one can truly rely on.
Jake, a seemingly average office worker, finds himself thrust into this new world. Into a tutorial filled with dangers and opportunities. In a world that should breed fear and concern, an environment that makes his fellow coworkers falter, Jake instead finds himself thriving.
Perhaps… Jake was born for this kind of world, to begin with.
5 chapters a week.
Average chapter length: 2500
Tags and content warnings are mainly to give me creative freedom later on. This is my first novel ever, and English isn’t my native language, so go easy on me chaps. Any feedback is more than welcome, of course.
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A new take on an old genre this story never fails to keep me amused. I love the insane power scaling with a level 90 bird going 6 times the sound barrier. Physics are mostly addressed with magic making things stronger, though I imagine physical oriented D-rank creatures would simply disintegrate mid tier E-ranks from mere proximity of the kinetic force of trading blows.
I will say that the MC needs a foil or some sort of rival. Some other OP character that he needs to surpass. Story doesn't have enough tension.
its just good. I like the style of the litrpg development. good grammer. I hope there is much more to come. Now i need to fill this review lets do this with my onely critics, you cant just read it if you read it you will read it whole and forget everything else.
Decent start of the story and good ideas. Start is a bit long winded and just when you think the story goes forward the author nerves the intelligence of the MC and his charcacter changes as well.
Well, good start at about 4 stars. Sadly, the author forces the plot afterwards, that's at least how I feel about it.
wonderful story, i enjoy so many of the characters too. A few too many pov switches for me so far tbh. Still enjoying the personality in the writing/narrative (or w/e). I want to buy the viper a beer and shoot the breeze with him lol. Can't wait to read more!
Hunting fun, people good, potions great, I love it :) I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I I
the story is written really well and the chapters flow well. as far as i've read it, there hasn't been a single ass pull and that is pretty new for a story like this. the powers seem a bit bland at first but i'm sure they will become interesting soon enough. excited to read ahead. keep up the good work.
Very good, very very very good. A relatively nice take on system novels as many I have seen the mc mainly uses magic or swords/spears as their main weapon, so a bow is a nice choice for a weapon. I need more words so words words words words words words words
i'm going to be brief and say it is one of my favorite reads on this site and deserves much more attention. The spelling and grammar is pretty good and the plot and the story telling is enjoyable. Daily updates are pretty nice too.
Big thanks to the author for not stopping and still writing after all the shitty comments.
sry if my grammer is bad, i am no native speaker
Started alright and in-group drama was good enough, brooding and all the psychological transformations... but then MC got a cheat skill and turned murder-hobo.
Basically, the first 10 chapters are alright, but then its just a boring kill fest, with no tension nor any doubt of outcome. He is not absurdly OP, but sure as hell is going to become one, if it continues this way. Most agregiously, it all came out of nowhere. He is just speeeeciaaaaal, I guess.
seems very average and mediocre. not bad, but not good either. i have no idea why this is rated so highly, nothing about it is different, interesting or unique. its just a system apocalypse with a generic MC, generic system, and generic circumstances. i couldnt even make it past chapter 4, seen it a million times, why should i read this instead of other system apocalypse stories? this is good, from what ive seen the writing is good, and the characters are decent, the only downfall is that the story is bland. and the author has potenitial, but the story lacks uniqueness and originality.
if youve never read a system apocalypse story before you may enjoy this.