Falling Star of Evolution

by Karnage

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Historical Romance Sci-fi Harem Martial Arts
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In the year 2230, 5 years before a test reactor that destroyed humanity went off, a pair of wealthy scientists both husband and wife believed the reactor would never work and tried to persuade the World Government to cancel the test but were denied due to lack of hard evidence. The pair of scientists predicting the end of the world hastily returned to their lab and poured all of their resources into their field of work creating an experimental drug that could initiate an evolved state of human DNA that would increase a human's biological adaption in hopes of negating radiation poisoning .

At the time they only had enough for a single dose and so made a decision. Using the highest technology of the their era which was labelled """"Black technology"""" which was banned to regular civilians and only allowed for military use , they wiped their only son's memories and instead implanted memories of the greatest martial artists and styles of combat that Earth had ever recorded in hopes he would be able to survive the new world that would be created by the exposure of radiation, placed him in a cryogenic stasis craft and sent him out of the Earth's orbit.

However, the test reactor went above their expectations and completely and thoroughly destroyed Earth. The cryogenic stasis craft had been blown into a wormhole and after a few hundred years, it's autopilot had been finally once more been engaged.
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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue: A world at it's end ago
Chapter 1: A falling star ago
Chapter 2: A rare treasure ago
Chapter 3 & 4: Awakening suns (Part I & II) ago
Not a chapter sorry! But will affect story! ago
Chapter 5 & 6: Two stars ( Part I & II) ago
Chapter 7: What noble? ago
Chapter 8 & 9 : New sun (Part I & II) ago
Chapter 10 & 11: Mitra (Part I & II) ago
Chapter 12: The Former King's feelings ago
Chapter 13 & 14: Into the Wild Part (I & II) ago
Chapter 15 & 16: Into the hive (part I & II) ago
Important Notice! ago
Chapter 17 & 18: A family by circumstance (Part I & II) ago
Chapter 19-20: Infiltration & Rescue: Part I & II) ago
Chapter 21 & 22: Why hello there fatty (Part I & II) ago
Chapter 23 & 24: Baptized by fire (Part I & II) ago
Chapter 25: Lamia's mark -Volume End ago
V2 Chapter 1: Fire & Poison ago
V2 Chapter 2: Familia ago
Power Rankings Change- Must Read ago
V2 Chapter 3: Song of the Wind ago
V2 Chapter 4: The tiny green horror ago
V2 Chapter 5: Invitation of the Skeleton King ago
V2 Chapter 6: Predatorial Awakening ago
V2 Chapter 7: A true descendant ago
V2 Chapter 8: The True Serpent Falls ago
V2 Chapter 9: Night of the Skeleton King ago
V2 Chapter 10: Awakening of the Skeleton King ago
V2 Chapter 11: Blood, Sweat & Tears ago
V2 Chapter 12: Departure ago
V2 Chapter 13: Good Fashion Sense. ago
V2 Chapter 14: An Unexpected Visitor ago
V2 Chapter 15: The Late Arrivals. ago
Hello! ago
V2 Chapter 16: Heaven Devouring Serpent ago
V2 Chapter 17: A True King ago
V3 Chapter 1: Rebellion ago
V3 Chapter 2: Song of Death ago
V3 Chapter 3: Diamonds in the Sky ago
Heads up! ago
V3 Chapter 4: Night of Blood ago
V3 Chapter 5: Poison? ago
V3 Chapter 6: A human? ago
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a little whale
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you sir are a beautiful seahorse that gallops on rainbows

good job, keep up the good work! if you decide to abandon this half-way through, i will haunt you in your sleep.

AnarchyDev
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Go Super Saiyan mode XD?!!!!

This story is not your ordinary Travel to Fantasy World story. Just as the title says it really is the Falling Star of Evolution, be it the Martial arts or the medical knowledge or the “sci-fi” things the MC can bring to this new world will truly be an Evolution, and also there’s the main Evolution path of Bloodlines i.e. Harem created future generations XD will have great potential to Evolve.

 

Also regarding the writing style as well as the Story are well thought out. The characters not so many yet but the already existed ones have been fully fleshed out, be it description or the their personality. There was a full chapter on the Martial arts description of the MC style which was written in a very well known manner and that shows that the Author knows what he’s writing….

 

Also, Does it have a Plot-hole??? It depends on how you see the story!!! Who knows, maybe my body might also evolve when exposed to a Mana-Pool…. ya right!!! Not going to happen , so you know it’s a fiction so we cannot question the Story mechanics fully!!!

 

So be prepared for more OP moments, cause the story is about an OP existence trying to survive in a Ridiculous OP World!!!

 

Do give this story a try and it will be well worth it. Now I just need to wait for more chapters..

modelSWIPE
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Original story, taking classic elements and adding a twist

love it, takes the martial elements of plenty of other stuff, but you've weaved it into something new and exciting, cant wait for more.

Personally im a fan of the whole harem tag (if its done well), just thought I'd mention it since many others have expressed.....displeasure at it

Amadan Na Brion
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Maybe the future of Royal Road

There is something to be said about your story, and that is the undisputed fact that it reeks of potential. Your characters are thought out, you have clear wording, and your world seems real. It's incredibly difficult to build a fantasy world, much less keep your readers entertained while you info dump, however, I only realized your info dumps after re-reading your chapters because you managed to lay them in between your perfectly paced story.

I'm upset that I found your story so early because now I have to wait for the releases instead of marathoning.

zhebartard
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It's torture! you just stop the story here and now. But the story  is well detailed contrary to most novel where you can't even imagine how the characters look like but this novel you can clearly see and feel it all. The authors is talented enugh that he can clearly portait a beautiful scenery. This is one of favorites well written super original. you gotta love the concept. The story could clearly go pro and make some decent money. If you do I want to buy your books!!! please

Squeaky
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This is so good so far i hope you keep it up!!!!

6paths4321
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I like the beginning and I can feel that this ff will be a good read in the future.

charlzpalach
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All i can say is keep it up, i give it a 8/10th chance this going  to the top charts, can you give an estimation on when you release chapters? (like days-weeks-months)

blitflame1
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Nuclear distruction a brief lesson

first and for most even a platinum bomb which can wipe out a contenent even 200 of those could not destroy the planet only the surface even then if you had it consintraited in one spot the best damage you could get is too magma lair. Nuclear power is just not strong enough to destroy anything more then the surface. Even the most powerful of weapons can not do it. If you wanted to be more realistic a high powered laser directed towards the earths core would have a far better chance at destroying the earth. Although the planet would still exist it would be like mars chances of recovery way to slim. You see mars core has been dying for milania struggling to hang in there the fact that a magnetic field is showing there and water is flowing means its finally coming back from near death. Still. Destroying a planet into nothing but dust is incredibly difficult.

HORSE
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400 followers in less then two weeks

400 followers in less then two weeks is not a joke...now I see why.
The writing is not without flaws, I personally think the pace is too fast...but who cares. The story is just so good that any criticism feels like baby talk.
MC reminds of Clark Kent from Saiyan's Planet