Complaints: Working At A Store That Sells Gender-Swapping Products

by MajorKerina

Original ONGOING Comedy Romance Sci-fi Gender Bender Multiple Lead Characters Slice of Life

Working at a store that sells gender-swapping products is never simple or easy, especially when you're in the Returns and Complaints Department.

All art is made by my late friend, Aisaku.

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Kaladin99
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Potential to be absolutely hilarious

Reviewed at: Part 3 - Suited to a Dee

Well written so far, grammar and spelling wise.

Love the concept of running a complaint desk in a gender swap store that seems to run on a buyer beware system...seems like the rick and morty satan's gift shop episode. Tons of potential for all sorts of hijinks. Also loving the little sketchs in each chapter, it's something unique, I have seem a few that do it, but it's usually google image cut and paste stuff, these seem like hand drawn sketchs, good ones too...so kudos to the author/illustrator. I would keep them sparse though...don't start filling up the pages with them like system novels do.

There are only 3 chapters so far, so there's not alot to go on yet, so it may be planned for down the road, but I would like to see some world building..like, is this the future? Are there competitors? What kind of society is this that such a store hasn't been shut down or confiscated yet?A "traveling store" ? Most likely not that last one...but still a possibility.

Beyogi
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This story is about two tweens doing customers support in a shop that changes technomagical gender bender items. The whole story is set in some (near) future, justifying the use of gender bender nanites, but the world in general isn't explored much.

The focus rather lies on the weird accidents and issues people can have with the gender bender items and the slowly developing Romance between the main characters.

Overall it's a very humorous story with good natured characters you just want to cheer for.