Seeking Direction (RWBY, OC)

Seeking Direction (RWBY, OC)

by Elbowsnapper

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

When Lima Morta, a graduating student of Sanctum, finds out that his insane guardian is the new first-year combat instructor for Haven, he quickly crafts an exit plan. With his bow in hand, and a quiver full of gravity-dust filled spikes, he sets off for Vale—Destination; Beacon.

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BoopDaSnoot
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Funny with epic figh scenes and detailed character

Reviewed at: Chapter 15 - Trauma

Nice fanfic, love the protag and his OCs team. Depsite having 4 OCs ( the protag and his 3 team mates), each and everyone of them are distinguishable with their personalities.

 

The protagonist Lima is a funny and hammy guy. He loves to ham thing up for fun and teasing his team mates. His captain Teak is a faunus boi that is too cute and pure, more than Ruby herself. Another team mate Lux is a battle maniac snek girl. The last Clair is kinda a friendlier Blake that's actually tries to fit in

Their banters are hilarious. The fight scenes are good. Plenty of character interactions. Cute Teak get teased a lot. 

5/5 would tease Teak again. I ship Lima with everyone btw. Mainly with Teak, but gotta catch em all.