Medium Meld (Naruto/Gamer, OC)

by Elbowsnapper

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Mystery Anti-Hero Lead GameLit Grimdark LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts Portal Fantasy / Isekai
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

A man with strangely specific amnesia wakes up on a beach. Updates every Friday.

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Webzayne
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This was a bit of a disappointment, to be honest. He did jack shit with his ability, and somehow killed people out leveling him by hundreds of levels. He wasted massive amounts of time, didn't progress at all for the most part; and created some of the blandest abilities I've ever seen. The comedy is the only thing this Fic has going for it, but even then it's quite a bit too raunchy. It had lots of potential; it still has lots of potential, but needs a more creative approach with what abilities he's going to use and make.

nedrey
Overall

By no means is it perfect, but this story is definitely well above satisfactory.

The story is well-written and flows well with very few errors that halt the reading experience.

The story takes an approach that is very different for me in terms of the MC's personality as well as the overall use of the story setting and it's not perfect but it's definitely well-researched and it does its best to make itself seem natural.

Overall, I look forward to whenever the next chapters are released.

God Of Alcoholics
Overall

so i gotta say as a start, dont expect some insane overly detailed stat board/skills popping up every five sec, the real charm of this story is the sheer amount of banter and bullshit, its amazing.
i was a little like meeh in the start but once you start reading its actually insanely fun, well at least with my type of humor i guess.

story is pretty good but it takes a while for you to get into it. the grammer is good enough there's some error here and there but nothing serious.
overall i would recommend giving this a read!

Elorie
Overall

read... but the protagonist is a moron of the lowest order.

Even Han Ji Han, or whatever the original gamer is called, figured out how to use mana better entirely on his own, and he wasn't terribly creative.

Still, the writing is sufficiently engaging to make for a simple read for anyone who is familiar with Naruto and enjoys Gamer stories.