Lonely Light (Complete)

Lonely Light (Complete)

by unice5656

Arael is an otherworldly being from the upper plane, a place similar to Heaven, full of Light. He now dwells on Earth, touched by Darkness, unable to return. When he rescues Sariel, an innocent angel from the clutches of Dark mages, he is no longer alone for the first time in centuries, but knows that he must return her home before she is also stranded on Earth.

The question is, does she wish to go?

(Pure fantasy romance)

 

 

- Cover art credit goes to Cassandra DenHartog (www.cassandradenhartog.com)

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werewolf_nr
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A bit of a forced relationship, with both characters being a bit emotionally stunted. However, the world building was fairly unique and it was well written despite the structural flaws.

 

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SleepyandLazyPanda
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Heart stirring bomb of emotions and understandings

Reviewed at: Chapter 5

A good concept that was executed brilliantly. It was a good ride that stir and simulate many emotions.It has a little bit of everything that a story should have, but focused on the right thing.

A whole package with nothing to fault at except on thing that we need a little bit more, just that.

A Good, and very well done Work.

Zarelto
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Lovely story indeed

Reviewed at: Chapter 5

Take my 5 * review and leave. Lovely story,last chapter gave me a few goosebumps

saqib reza
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Short but amazingly good, the best 50 pages I've ever read.

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MelodieRivers
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A Classic Unique Tale of Love

Reviewed at: Chapter 5

This is a unique love story as one seldom sees. Tasteful, with completely unique concepts, an awesome plot... What else could one ask for?

In this ocean of modern FSoG romance story, this is a welcomed good old-fashioned classic and extremely unique tale of love.

motoshead89
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A truely beautiful short story. The main characters are deep and engaging and draw you in quickly.

Phamtomof57
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The story is short but it can still convert so much emotion ! It was breathtaking ! The story is well written, the grammar exellent ! The meaning of darkness and light in the story is well done. This is certainly the most emmotional and most beautiful romance I've ever seen in RRL ! Good job !

OrderedChaos
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If I only had one criticism though, it is that it somewhat feels hollow. Or that's just me missing the point and looking too deep into it.

JoanBac
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The most awesome short story

The story outline was plotted well. Character-wise, well thought of. World development was just so picturesque. The Prologue was so brilliantly done. Thumbs up to the author.

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A nice, sweet short story that hit all the right parts of my inner craving for love stories.

The premise is incredibly interesting. A good twist on the whole "good vs. evil" thing.

I found the worldbuilding to be impressive despite the story being rather short.

The characters are relatable, even though they're not exactly normal.

The grammar and style leave nothing to be desired.

All in all, it is a nice read.

 

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