Particle researcher

by C.R. Mcmahon

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  • Traumatising content

As a coming of age rite, each sentient being receives a class and makes a vow. That moment determines the path they will take. If they break said vow, they turn into a soulless being ruled by bloodthirst and hunger.

Cyverous couldn't care less about fixing the world, or putting an end to the cycle of death that causes the majority of the people on his planet to live a nomadic lifestyle. All he wants is to study monsters, nature, and everything in between. As a particle researcher, he gains power through discovery and testing hypotheses. 

His particles, or flecks as he calls them, allow him to do so safely. Well, safety is a relative term, isn't it?

Follow him on his journey as he holds his vows true, fights when he wants, explores where he wants, hordes treasure, magical items, and slowly builds on his mysterious abilities. 

 

My attempt at a slice of life. There will be battles, and dungeons, and adventure, but the plot will not be a huge focus. 

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