Forsaken by the Righteous [BL]

by .Lance

What does it mean to be righteous? 

Shuang Xuanyi is a disciple, the smartest one of the most prominent sect, with a bright future. He was the bright star of his generation, a perfect role model, but, the day he got kidnapped, although he was set free unharmed, was the beginning of the end for the perfect image he had worked so hard to make for himself.

Zhang Zhixiu is a timid boy and although he does a few dumb things sometimes, only wishes well and for the people around him to be happy. He had many friends, as he was a truly kind youngster, but, it was inevitable that he would one day be on the other side of the battlefield...

The cause of their downfall? A mere spiritual root.

The sword spiritual root, if it can be called a spiritual root, was completely different from the other spiritual roots. It could not be combined with any other spiritual root and whoever had it could turn into a sword at will. They were stronger than any spiritual weapons and perfect partners to the normal cultivators.

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