The Bright Lord

by AlexKnowles

Original ONGOING Action Fantasy Sci-fi Cyberpunk Magic Male Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Strong Lead War and Military

A home, a family. Lies and resentment. To save the future he must reclaim his past.

Enjoying his retirement. Ryan has everything. The perfect wife, a daughter he adores and all the time in the world. Yet, with dinner burning on the stove and his wife late home from work, two visitors appear bringing dire news and a quest he can't refuse.

Dragged back to a universe and a life Ryan did everything to escape, he must secretly hunt out survivors and friends all while training for the fight of his life.

Where brutality and pain were all Ryan ever knew, now he must inspire and heal. The collision of two worlds draws ever closer and if he can’t claim what was once his, all is lost.

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The writing is a little rough, could definitely use some tightening. But that first chapter is pretty fantastic. It has a fantastic hook into the story, that automatically had me going to chapter two. Excellent job and I look forward to seeing where the story goes.