Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy High Fantasy Magic Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead

Alex had always wanted to be an adventurer. The money, power, fame, and thrill of battle drew him in. Finally, he completes his training at the guild school, top of his class in almost every subject, and starts off his new life of protecting villages, and rescuing innocents. But rather than waking up in a tavern after his first job, he is in the entrance of a cave in the middle of nowhere. Not only that, but his perfectly trained adventurer body has been replaced by a baby dragon! Now, he must join an unlikely team to find out what happened to him and find a way to restore his lost humanity.

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An old idea done right where others fail to do so.

Reviewed at: Freedom

I've enjoyed reading this so far. It doesn't suffer from poor writing and is fairly interesting. While the idea behind this novel is by no means original, I've found that on many reading sites, many stories where the main character turns into a dragon have extremely poor writing and grammar.

This thankfully hasn't suffered from that. I do have one complaint though. Chapter length. The chapters feel especially short. While the story does seem to update every three days, it feels like very little and leaves me slightly disappointed.

Other than that I have nothing else to complain about. I have enjoyed this and will gladly read more.

rachel.alexx
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Attention to Detail and Unique Story

Reviewed at: 17. Understanding

The stylistic elements are clearly displayed through the writer's tone. The themes included allow the reader to become attached to how interesting the writing style is. These styles can be seen through inflection of the charcters and attention to detal in dialogue. The writing alone sustains the story and depicts a world which is incredibly detailed and through. This directly ties to the story and the the characters. Firstly with this story, while it isn't something completely unique it has a unique presentation of the world and the interactions within it. The story is consistently interesting with plot points that are unexpected and sequences falling perfectly into place. The charcter dynamic is perfectly imperfect as the characters struggle to understand each other and interact within a world of magic, mystery, and, of course, dragons. Alex and Parker are a fun pair to watch, the inclusion of Lasair really makes this dynamic more interesting. The stuggles that Alex faces with pride and identity is a great plot point. The imagry is phenomanal, and its easy to get lost in the story. Each chapter is clearly well thought out, and that makes for a well developed world and a clean story.  Brillant job, keep up the good work! 

endoria
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The only positive thing about this story is the acceptable prowess of written English. The story content is rather underwhelming and cliche.

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The world building is non-existent and everything feels like a bunch of tropes mashed together. We learn exactly nothing about the world, only that there is an adventurer guild and a quest Board. No Info about class systems, technology level, political makeup of countries, Basic geography... The story is basically lacking in every aspect and should never appear on trending *. 

Marg_Naroth
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Very good action scenes. It really feels smooth to read the adventures of our dra... (spoilers) hero Alex. I have never read such a story like that before, even though some people say that is not original, but man the pacing is good, the action is well written. The description of the scenes is very detailed. What shows that the author really put his heart on his fiction. Give it a try!

TheAbsoluteOne
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This is very interesting! It was a good read! Great going!

The writing style is pretty good. The story is very interesting and well written.

Grammar is also ok. The characters are also nicely done.

Overall, it's a good read for those who like the adventure fantasy genre.

Redchaos1
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Spirit Of A Great Story

Reviewed at: 11: Lost

This story is really well done. The characters are fun to read about and the writing style is neigh flawless and the narrative flows amazingly. As someone who enjoys world building, i must say that this world is beautifully thought out and alive.

ARC190
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Good idea, Disappointing execution

Reviewed at: 9: The Deal

Read up to and including chapter 9

While grammar is perfect, as far as I could tell, the characters feel bland. Pacing would be fine if it weren't for inconsistencies in what characters know, as well as plot points that come out of nowhere and have little to no effect on the story going forward.