Mike’s Resting Place: Multiverse Pit Stop

by frostvlad13

Original ONGOING Comedy Fantasy Dungeon LitRPG Portal Fantasy / Isekai Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

It's Opening Day.

After 20 years of service in the Army, Micheal Irons, Mike to his friends, is now ready to get back to his old life.

He's now once more running the old family business; a roadside pit stop that combines a gas station, a motel, a diner and a convenience store.

The only problem is.... His first customer? He's not from this dimension. Or even human at all.

And with 'His' glowing recommendation, 'Mike's Resting Place' is now open to the Multiverse.

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Crossposting from Scribble Hub under the same username.

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Now undergoing a massive rewrite. Might take a while forme to finish.

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Good read, made me chuckle.

Reviewed at: First Guests
 

Keep up the good work and I look forward to more of Mike's encounters.

 The characters are fun, and sometimes make you laugh. The grammar could use a little work, but it is still readable, with just a couple of snags. I would suggest this to anyone who like cross dimension, building, and comedy.