Onward To Providence

by Nighzmarquls

Original ONGOING Comedy Drama Sci-fi Female Lead High Fantasy Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Slice of Life Space Opera Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Pylo was a woman of trade and travel!

She had set out for a life of adventure and exchange with strange new life. She would make deals and exchanges with new fools and new civilizations. She would boldly swindle like no one had swindled before.

  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score
  • Total Views :
  • 93,216
  • Average Views :
  • 400
  • Followers :
  • 160
  • Favorites :
  • 43
  • Ratings :
  • 56
  • Pages :
  • 1,264
Advertisement
Remove
Go to Table of Contents
Rate it
Fiction breaking rules? Report
Advertisement
Remove
Author
Nighzmarquls

Nighzmarquls

Achievements
20 Comments
Top List #400
75,000 Views
100 Followers
Word Count (13)
Advertisement
Remove
Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Loading 0.0 ago
Loading 0.1 ago
Loading 0.2 ago
Loading 0.3 ago
Loading 0.4 ago
Loading 0.5 ago
Loading 0.6 ago
Loading 0.7 ago
Loading 0.8 ago
Loading With Tunie ago
Departure 0.0 ago
Departure 0.1 ago
Departure 0.2 ago
Departure 0.3 ago
Departure 0.4 ago
Departure 0.5 ago
Departure 0.6 ago
Departure 0.7 ago
Departure With Tunie ago
Touring 0.0 ago
Touring 0.1 ago
Touring 0.2 ago
Touring 0.3 ago
Touring 0.4 ago
Touring 0.5 ago
Touring 0.6 ago
Touring With Tunie ago
Camping 0.0 ago
Camping 0.1 ago
Camping 0.2 ago
Camping 0.3 ago
Camping 0.4 ago
Camping 0.5 ago
Camping With Tunie ago
Homesteading 0.0 ago
Homesteading 0.1 ago
Homesteading 0.2 ago
Homesteading 0.3 ago
Homesteading 0.4 ago
Homesteading 0.5 ago
Homesteading 0.6 ago
Homesteading 0.7 ago
Homesteading 0.8 ago
Homesteading 0.9 ago
Homesteading With Tunie ago
Approach 0.0 ago
Approach 0.1 ago
Approach 0.2 ago
Approach 0.3 ago
Approach 0.4 ago
Approach With Tunie ago
Redweed 0.0 ago
Redweed 0.1 ago
Redweed 0.2 ago
Redweed 0.3 ago
Redweed 0.4 ago
Redweed 0.5 ago
Redweed 0.6 ago
Redweed 0.7 ago
Redweed 0.8 ago
Redweed 0.9 ago
Redweed 1.0 ago
Redweed 1.1 ago
Redweed 1.2 ago
Redweed With Tunie ago
Codex: Genus Patera ago
Codex: Tabelarium Minorum ago
Codex: Anthropo Aeternalis ago
Codex: Immanibelua Sicuterrae ago
Codex: F'teropod ago
Debris 0.0 ago
Debris 0.1 ago
Debris 0.2 ago
Debris 0.3 ago
Debris 0.4 ago
Debris 0.5 ago
Debris With Tunie ago
Recompense 0.0 ago
Recompense 0.1 ago
Recompense 0.2 ago
Recompense 0.3 ago
Recompense 0.4 ago
Recompense With Tunie ago
Refugees 0.0 ago
Refugees 0.1 ago
Refugees 0.2 ago
Refugees 0.3 ago
Refugees 0.4 ago
Refugees 0.5 ago
Refugees 0.6 ago
Refugees With Tunie ago
Survivor 0.0 ago
Survivor 0.1 ago
Survivor 0.2 ago
Survivor 0.3 ago
Survivor 0.4 ago
Survivor 0.5 ago
Survivor 0.6 ago
Survivor 0.7 ago
Survivor With Tunie ago
Duat 0.0 ago
Duat 0.1 ago
Duat 0.2 ago
Duat 0.3 ago
Duat 0.4 ago
Duat 0.5 ago
Duat 0.6 ago
Duat 0.7 ago
Duat With Tunie ago
Refuge 0.0 ago
Refuge 0.1 ago
Refuge 0.2 ago
Refuge 0.3 ago
Refuge 0.4 ago
Refuge 0.5 ago
Refuge 0.6 ago
Refuge 0.7 ago
Refuge With Tunie ago
Saviours 0.0 ago
Saviours 0.1 ago
Saviours 0.2 ago
Saviours 0.3 ago
Saviours With Tunie ago
Codex: Dracodeontis Pestis ago
Codex: Sapiens Rusticus ago
Codex: Computantis Minimis ago
Codex: Fistulovivens Civilis ago
Codex: Dracodeontis Polis ago
Acceleration 0.0 ago
Acceleration 0.1 ago
Acceleration 0.2 ago
Acceleration 0.3 ago
Acceleration 0.4 ago
Acceleration 0.5 ago
Acceleration 0.6 ago
Acceleration 0.7 ago
Acceleration 0.8 ago
Acceleration With Tunie ago
Guidance 0.0 ago
Guidance 0.1 ago
Guidance 0.2 ago
Guidance 0.3 ago
Guidance 0.4 ago
Guidance 0.5 ago
Guidance 0.6 ago
Guidance 0.7 ago
Guidance 0.8 ago
Guidance 0.9 ago
Guidance 1.0 ago
Guidance With Tunie ago
Clarification 0.0 ago
Clarification 0.1 ago
Clarification 0.2 ago
Clarification 0.3 ago
Clarification 0.4 ago
Clarification 0.5 ago
Clarification 0.6 ago
Clarification 0.7 ago
Clarification 0.8 ago
Clarification With Tunie ago
Haunting 0.0 ago
Haunting 0.1 ago
Haunting 0.2 ago
Haunting 0.3 ago
Haunting 0.4 ago
Haunting 0.5 ago
Haunting 0.6 ago
Haunting 0.7 ago
Haunting With Tunie ago
Surveying 0.0 ago
Surveying 0.1 ago
Surveying 0.2 ago
Surveying 0.3 ago
Surveying 0.4 ago
Surveying 0.5 ago
Surveying 0.6 ago
Surveying 0.7 ago
Surveying 0.8 ago
Surveying 0.9 ago
Surveying 1.0 ago
Surveying With Tunie ago
Reckoning 0.0 ago
Reckoning 0.1 ago
Reckoning 0.2 ago
Reckoning 0.3 ago
Reckoning 0.4 ago
Reckoning 0.5 ago
Reckoning With Tunie ago
Fording 0.0 ago
Fording 0.1 ago
Fording 0.2 ago
Fording 0.3 ago
Fording 0.4 ago
Fording With Tunie ago
Trailblazing 0.0 ago
Trailblazing 0.1 ago
Trailblazing 0.2 ago
Trailblazing 0.3 ago
Trailblazing 0.4 ago
Trailblazing 0.5 ago
Trailblazing 0.6 ago
Trailblazing 0.7 ago
Trailblazing 0.8 ago
Trailblazing 0.9 ago
Trailblazing With Tunie ago
Wilderness 0.0 ago
Wilderness 0.1 ago
Wilderness 0.2 ago
Wilderness 0.3 ago
Wilderness 0.4 ago
Wilderness 0.5 ago
Wilderness 0.6 ago
Wilderness 0.7 ago
Wilderness 0.8 ago
Wilderness With Tunie ago
Tradition 0.0 ago
Tradition 0.1 ago
Tradition 0.2 ago
Tradition 0.3 ago
Tradition 0.4 ago
Tradition 0.5 ago
Tradition 0.6 ago
Tradition 0.7 ago
Tradition 0.8 ago
Tradition 0.9 ago
Tradition With Tunie ago
Side Story: The Death of a Tree ago
Codex: Meo Anthropoiensis ago
Codex: Regiis Concordica ago
Feast 0.0 ago
Feast 0.1 ago
Feast 0.2 ago
Feast 0.3 ago

Leave a review

Reviews
Sort by:
Unmaker
  • Overall Score

It's a Weird Universe Out There

Reviewed at: Homesteading 0.4

Terrans meet aliens. Aliens meet Terrans. Both sides have pretty much the same opinion: bunch of weirdos, but I think we can work with them.

Pylo is a perfectly normal crew member on a perfectly normal interstellar cargo hauler, trying to make a living by buying cheap and selling high. The trick is to read the contracts really carefully because, boy are those planet-evolved bipeds picky... and crazy... and mentally limited. But she would never say that, because she is a professional. But:

Mild Spoiler

The story switches POVs between Pylo, her ship, and the Terrans she meets. Of course, every one thinks they are acting normal and the xenos are doing really strange things. There is some comedy, but this is not a sitcom.

The author's story tags are accurate, although I haven't seen any VR yet. However, despite the author's summary, the only real problems so far are misunderstandings, not fraud.

I like it because it is good writing that is very different from my normal Isekai / reincarnation / time loop / etc. preferences. To me, it's essentially alternate mental snack food. It also helps that the author apparently has a serious backlog and is releasing quickly - the mental potato chips are being supplied regularly. Give it a try, unless you hate multiples POVs or slice-of-life stories.

Momomo
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score

It's all whack? Always has been. Onward To Providence by Nighzmarquls is a story about a bunch of whackadoodles meeting a bunch of whackadoodles from outer space. And of course everyone believes the other side is the one with the whackadoodles.

elbrop
  • Overall Score

Everyone is so very alien, and I love it (but not that way Pylo!)

The world building is excellent, some top notch sci-fi concepts that are original and work to build a setting that really is outstanding. Clever, plausible and very entertaining.

Xicree
  • Overall Score

Xenofiction at it Finest!

Reviewed at: Camping 0.2

This is the real deal in Xenofiction. It is the best of the GOOD stuff and worth every second spent reading.

 

If you love Xenofiction at all this is a MUST READ. Show it some love.

Renny
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score

I rarely write reviews but this deserves one. I can't recommend it strongly enough. The characters are a delight and the world building is broad without being overwhelming. The universe is internally consistent.

I'd discribe the story as an examination of what it means to be sentient and what creates and defines meaning. Each of the points of view delight me. Each character has their own way of understanding their reality and that's reflected in their pov and internal narrative. The amount of meaning conveyed through inference is higher than most stories on here - so if that bothers you be aware going in. The style took a little to adjust to, but I'm so glad I kept going. It end's working very well. I'm current with the original site, and left hunger for more. Do yourself a favour and read it. 

 

Sereminar
  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score

A Stuningly Alien Romp through the Universe

Reviewed at: Loading 0.0

I'm not often surprised by the alien nature of extraterrestrials in sci-fi stories I read. And I get it to an aren't why they are almost always just humans but purple or whatever. But this story will absolutely throw you for a loop. 

Do you want a sense of scale for the vastness of the universe? For the complexity of life? For the multifaceted forms of being? This is the story for you!

Honestly my only gripe is that they are all somehow capitalists, which is incredibly jarring when juxtaposed with the rest of the story lol.

The characters are both bizzare and endearing all with their own unique strengths and weaknesses. They all have their own voices and views of the world. 

It's a heck of a roller coaster and well worth a look!

Error404brain
  • Overall Score

Very good story. Aliens /are/ aliens. They are not simply reskinned humanoids but completely different beings, with a very well tought out background in all cases. One of the best stories on this site.