𝕽𝖊𝖇𝖊𝖑𝖑𝖎𝖔𝖓

by Slyze

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The Kingdom of Silveria is a broken nation, long put under the colonial rule of the distant Albionic Empire, with it's people and pride shattered to work a life of desperate struggle under their overlords. Former King Justus can only watch in silent contempt as his people are taxed, burdened and broken. How will Silveria rise from the ashes, and forge its own road to independence?

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Chapters are released once every two days, and occasionally early.

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Does a great job at writing in a good manner and hooking you in, but does require more background information so as to not leave the reader confused at times.

I recommend adding more chapters detailing the backstory of each character, and the overall story itself.

Briizy
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A Lore-tastic epic fantasy that I'm ADDICTED to!

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I've been keeping up with this story and decided I had read enough to write a review.

I am in love with this story. The author's style and the plotline are unique, addicting and a breath of fresh air. I know I am biased towards fantasy, as both of my stories have fantastical elements in them, but the way this author writes is just... amazing. It wowed me from the first chapter. 

Definitely one of my favorites. It should be one of yours too. A niche on the RR website, but one that deserves a lot of attention and fame. Good job, Slyze. I am still as impressed as I was when I first messaged you. 

nerdy_n_dirty86
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(As of Chapter 3) Interesting Story

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Enjoying this so far. Parts of these chapters seem a bit disjointed and doesn't flow that well. Maybe a bit more information to tie it together. Looking forward to this story though!