Yes, I'm a plant, so what?

by Rovon

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Magic

(Translated from Russian. I apologize for mistakes.)

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Translation is quite horrible

Reviewed at: Chapter 1. Am I a plant?

 Not much to say about the story seeing as I couldn't get past the first chapter, the translation is way too painfull, the sentance do have meaning but the story is told in such strange way I have to read the same sentance multiple time to understand

 

Here 2 example early chapter 1 

"Death? Coma? Or something close in meaning?"

Something close in meaning ?

 

"But, as people usually do, if we can't do something, that's usually what we want to do."

Again weird way to say that.

I have no idea why this story have 4.8 in score right now