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Anna, a 23 years old woman from earth who play at a VRMMORPG everyday since 11 years, she is one of the top player as a Magic Swordswoman. One day, she suddenly got killed by a lightning because of a mistake from God. She got reincarnated as her character in the game in another world while keeping her memory, strength and inventory.

Follow Anna's adventures where she explores the world, make news friends and protect them with her sword and magic, kill monster, start a business, gain more and more influence and slape the bad guys!

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WARNING / MORE INFORMATIONS:

- Female protagonist
- Overpowered protagonist from the start.
- NO romance! (maybe only a little bit)
- No status window / No level / No stats
- It's an easy going story, it means that the protagonist won't struggle that much (work hard YES / lose pathetically NO)
- The MC mastered her power in the game, so it's not a "i'm OP but I don't understand my power" story.
- The MC won't hesitate to kill if someone try to harm her or her friends but she is a kind and gentle person toward those that she loves.
- She will build some connexions with nobles or others important persons
- A bit business managment
- A bit of adventurer guild (not too much, and won't be repetitive)

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Haidynre
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Fun story written by a non native speaker. Grammar gets better over time, but phrasing still needs work as of ch. 28. Hey, I don't speak a second language as well as he writes English, so it's all good from my POV. 

Main character is OP by design. Story is light and refreshing to read.

SunnyShim
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Standard isekai story but still a light and fun read

Reviewed at: Chapter 28 – The Power of a Cake

This is one of those everyday light and fun isekai stories that are generic but can still provide entertainment if you don't want to read something too serious. The grammar is a bit poor, especially in the beginning few chapters, but it is still quite readable. The style of the story is about the same as many other light-hearted isekai stories out there so if you like those types of stories, you will be able to find at least some enjoyment from this story.

PaulTB
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The author is not a native speaker of English (I presume). The grammar isn't bad enough to make it difficult to read, but some people will find it annoying or distracting.

The story is generally lighthearted and not very complicated. Good guys are good, bad guys are bad and it's pretty easy to tell who is who. It's a decent read, and I will be following it for the time being.

The characters are OK, although it would probably be improved by having someone a bit more complicated - maybe have somone who is difficult to get on with but not an evil villain?

Kaisyn
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Well. This happened.

 

This story is what you call your generic OP MC in another world. The style of the story allows for easy follow through and the grammatical errors are... Not to the point where the story is illegible.

The story itself is pretty early in but already from the start there is no definitive goal, no hints or build ups toward anything other than situations whereby the MC gets praises. Shifts in PoV exist solely to exaggerate the MC's abilities so they don't really provide much in terms of story progression where none is truly defined in the first place.

Characters themselves as a consequence of a lack of defining story do not have much dimension to them. The design of their interactions feel 'toonish' in that their interactions themselves are almost always centered on the MC and are used to exaggerate them in some form or the other.

 

Overall... It's a story that's written with a style that's easy to follow but the character interactions and the story itself needs work.

 

I hope these points get some work!

Rocco
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28 chapters in and its pretty much exatly what it says it is so it's hard to say much about it, but my only critique is the author didn't really leave much room for growth for the mc 

Calum Griggs
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The cast are all enjoyable nice to see that not all people are cliques in the story. I think some of the group members need a little more detail. Now for the reason this is only a 3 star is the grammar, in every other sentence there are words in the wrong order or the wrong words full stop, however this book has great promise and it would be a shame for the book to end. My final advice would be to go on pause and review the chapters you have so far.

Random Duck
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So far this story is pretty good and I'm enjoying it. Sometimes you just want to read about an OP girl who reincarnated as her game character as she runs around breaking normie's world views. If you don't like that kind of thing then this isn't the best thing for you to read. This is a light hearted easy read so don't bash it for being exactly like the discription says. 

 

 I have only 2 complaints so far.. Number 1 is stupid but it irks me Soap is made with an acid (usually lye) and a base (usually a mix of oil and other ingredients). Not oil, eggs and vinegar. That's in mayonnaise. Number 2 is probably all in my head but there seems to be hints of yuri foreshadowing. I'm probably imagining it, but if it develops in that direction I hope the author will be kind enough to do so tastefully or give sufficient warning about r18 scenes that they can be skipped.

PhiOnPhire
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RR required me to add a score for all of the categories but I'm not even going to attempt to review anything besides the grammar. (though the plot seemed flimsy from the first few chapters), since that would require reading it all.  I decided this story wasn't for me after the first few sentences based on grammar alone, and I managed to force myself through the first three chapters since I felt writing a review without at least getting that far would be unfair.

I'll assume that the author is not a native speaker and might still be learning, in which case keep it up! But also maybe see if someone is willing to help you translate what you mean.  Barring that, try to find an editor or something.  I don't think spell checker would be sufficient, since the spelling of individual words is fine, it's the sentences that struggle (though I've heard grammarly is pretty sophisticated these days so maybe that could work)

The first sentence of the story is a run on and it only gets worse from there.  I'd say most paragraphs have an error, and all of them have something phrased strangely or awkwardly.

Weird extra articles like saying a vrmmo "feels so real that you might mistake it for the reality" (emphasis mine) are constant.  Mixing of tenses happens throughout and strange choices of phrase are common.

If you're unsure about this novel, read the first paragraph (or first several) of any of  the first 3 chapters and you'll see what I mean.  If you found them fine, then this novel is for you.  If you found them difficult to get through, as I did, it doesn't get better.

I read the first 3 chapters and then decided to read the most recent chapter to see if it improves, and it doesn't seem to.

I think I'll reserve 0.5 stars overall score for offensive or completely incomprehensible content.  I can mostly tell what I think the author means, it's just a slog of rereading the last sentence, and immersion breaking due to errors and awkward phrasing.

Gawd Dayum
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Great op isekai, not quite at the level of death March, but nice to read on my breaks at work. Characters could use more development, but it delivers on the promises of the synopsis. Also I think that it would be easier to read if actual character dialogue was differentiated somehow, like italics. As I sometimes think the mc is talking only to find out later she is just thinking responses to character dialogue.

Chronicreader
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Couldn't stop reading it and finished it in one day keep it up.