The Rise of a Magi - Empires of Old

The Rise of a Magi - Empires of Old

by Rhein

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

A fan-fiction held within the Metaworld universe created by Wutosama from their series Metaworld Chronicles.

This fan-fiction will adhere to the laws and physics of the Metaworld, for the most part, to stay as close to canon as possible.

In addition, this fan-fiction will try to keep to the same progression rate as the original piece.

 

Follow the life of the young mage William Godwine as he adventures throughout this magical world. Set in the west coast of what was once Canada during the early 2000's.  Join William in his fight against the magical beasts in hopes of retaking what was once lost. 

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Techman
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Interesting start

Reviewed at: Doctor Who?

This fan fiction story is set in the same world as Metaworld Chronicles, though in a different part of the world than the main story. It's early yet, but the "feel" of the story is good.

Grammar is okay, but the tense jumps around. Half the time it's present tense "he straightens his tie", but the other half is some weird past/future subjunctive "he would snort at her comment".