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Eight Thousand Years after the Glassing of Earth, Terran Descent Humanity has largely become a post-scarcity society based on consent and enjoying life. With the discovery of another ancient race beyond the "Great Gulf", events and history collide to draw the Terran Confederacy into war against a hundred million year old empire that has always won and believes it always will. With allies and enemies of multiple species, the Orion Galactic Arm Spur will be wracked by warfare the likes of which have not been seen. Cracked, harried, wounded, and damaged, Terran Descent Humanity willfully throws itself against the universe itself.

"The universe hates you and will take away everything you love, laughing while it does so." - Terran belief.

A wiki is available (although under construction) at: https://fcgestalt.fandom.com/wiki/First_Contact_Gestalt_Archive_Wiki

Told largely from the viewpoint of other species, the story is currently ongoing. It involves graphic depictions of violence, war, adult language and situations, drug use, and other mature topics.

The story will be updated on weekdays, so keep an eye on this page for more chapters.

The story is 700+ chapters, and repeating characters do not start appearing until the Vuxten chapters. If you're in a hurry for repeating characters then this story will not be enjoyable to you. The interwoven plot is not based on a single person but the entire war, with its effects upon multiple people.

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The Mad Arch-Angel TerraSol

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935 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
P'Thok Eats an Ice Cream Cone ago
Born Whole ago
First Contact - Chapter One ago
Chapter Two ago
Chapter Three ago
Chapter Four ago
Chapter Five ago
Chapter Six ago
Chapter Seven ago
Interlude ago
Chapter Eight ago
Chapter Nine ago
Chapter Ten ago
Chapter Eleven ago
Chapter Twelve (Daxin) ago
Chapter Thirteen (Nakteti) ago
Chapter Fourteen (Daxin) ago
Chapter Fifteen ago
Chapter Sixteen ago
Chapter Seventeen (Crashrider) ago
Chapter Eighteen ago
Chapter Nineteen (Dreams) ago
Chapter Twenty (Leebaw) ago
Chapter Twenty-One (Interlude) ago
Chapter Twenty-Two (DOKI DOKI DOKI) ago
Chapter Twenty-Three ago
Chapter Twenty-Four (Daxin) ago
Chapter Twenty-Five (Sam) ago
Chapter Twenty-Six ago
Chapter Twenty-Seven (Delminta) ago
Chapter Twenty-Eight ago
Chapter Twenty-Nine (Dreams) ago
Chapter Thirty ago
Chapter Thirty-One ago
Chapter Thirty-Two (Dreams) ago
Chapter Thirty-Three ago
Chapter Thirty-Four ago
Chapter Thirty-Five ago
Chapter Thirty-Six ago
Chapter Thirty-Seven ago
Chapter Thirty-Eight (Daxin) ago
Chapter Thirty-Nine ago
Chapter Forty (Old Iron Feathers) ago
Chapter Forty-One (Ekret) ago
Chapter Forty-Two (Ekret) ago
Chapter Forty-Three (Ekret) ago
Chapter Forty-Four (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Five (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Six (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Seven (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Eight (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Nine ago
Chapter Fifty (Dreams) ago
Chapter Fifty-One (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Two (Dreams) ago
Chapter Fifty-Three (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Four (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Five (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Six (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Seven (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Eight (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Nine (Kark) ago
Chapter Sixty (Kark) ago
Chapter Sixty-One (Kark) ago
Chapter Sixty-Two (Daxin) ago
Chapter Sixty-Three (Dreams) ago
Part Sixty-Four (Rixen) ago
Chapter Sixty-Five (Atilla) ago
Chapter Sixty-Six (Atilla) ago
Chapter Sixty-Seven (Atilla) ago
Chapter Sixty-Eight (Lionel Hutz) ago
Chapter Sixty-Nine (Words) ago
Chapter Seventy (Nakteti) ago
Chapter Seventy-One ago
Chapter Seventy-Two (Daxin) ago
Chapter Seventy-Three (Nakteti) ago
Chapter Seventy-Four ago
Chapter Seventy-Five (Dreams) ago
Chapter Seventy-Six (Old Iron Feathers) ago
Chapter Seventy-Seven (Nakteti) ago
Chapter Seventy-Eight (Nakteti) ago
Part Seventy-Nine ago
Chapter Eighty (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Eighty-One (Leebaw) ago
Chapter Eight-Two ago
Chapter Eighty-Three (Daxin) ago
Chapter Eighty-Four ago
Chapter Eighty-Five ago
Chapter Eighty-Six (Cheekeet) ago
Chapter Eighty-Seven (Ekret) ago
Chapter Eighty-Eight ago
Chapter Eighty-Nine ago
Chapter Ninety ago
Chapter Ninety-One ago
Chapter Ninety-Two (Dreams) ago
Chapter Ninety-Three ago
Chapter Ninety-Four ago
Chapter Ninety-Five (Cornelius) ago
Part Ninety-Six (Telkan) ago
Chapter Ninety-Six (Jed) ago
Chapter Ninety-Eight (Leebaw) ago
Chapter Ninety-Nine (Nakteti) ago
Chapter One-Hundred (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 101 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 102 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 103 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 104 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 105 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 106 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 107 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 108 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 109 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 110 (The War) ago
Chapter 111 ago
Chapter 112 ago
Chapter 113 (The War) ago
Chapter 114 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 115 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 116 (The War) ago
Chapter 117 (The War) ago
Chapter 118 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 119 (The War) ago
Chapter 120 (The War) ago
Chapter 121 (The War) ago
Chapter 122 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 123 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 124 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 125 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 126 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 127 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 128 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 129 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 130 (Nightmare) ago
Chapter 131 (Nightmare) ago
Chapter 132 (Nightmare) ago
The Whispers Can You Hear Them? ago
Connection With Host - Error 134 ago
135 Skulls on the Throne ago
Chapter 135 One. Three. Five. 1 Three 5 ago
Chapter Number Goes Here ago
Chapter 1 Thirty 6ix ago
Recap ago
Chapter 137 ago
Chapter 138 ago
Chapter 139 (The War) ago
Chapter 140 ago
Chapter 141 (The War) ago
Chapter 142 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 143 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 144 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 145 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 146 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 147 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 148 (The War) ago
Chapter 149 (The War) ago
Chapter 150 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 151 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 152 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 153 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 154 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 155 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 156 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 157 (Trolling) ago
Chapter 158 (Empire) ago
Chapter 158 (Darknyss) ago
Chapter 159 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 160 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 161 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 162 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 162 - Cont (Nemta) ago
Chapter 163 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 164 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 165 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 166 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 167 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 168 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 169 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 170 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 171 (Historical Archive) ago
Chapter 172 (Historical Archive) ago
Chapter 17 3 (Historical Archive - Classified) ago
Chapter 174 (Historical Archive) ago
Chapter 175 ago
Chapter 175.5 ago
Chapter 176 (The War) ago
Chapter 177 ago
Chapter 178 ago
Chapter 179 (Empire) ago
Chapter 180 (The War) ago
Chapter 181 (The War) ago
Chapter 182 (Telkan - The War) ago
Chapter 183 (Nemta - The War) ago
Chapter 184 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 185 (Delvar) ago
Chapter 186 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 187 (Del'Var) ago
Chapter 188 (Del'Var) ago
Chapter 189 (Del'Var) ago
Chapter 190 (The War) ago
Chapter 191 (The War) ago
Chapter 192 (Del'Var) ago
Chapter 193 ago
Chapter 194 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 195 (The War) ago
Chapter 196 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 197 (Empire) ago
Chapter 198 (The War) ago
Chapter 199 (The War) ago
Chapter 200 (The War) ago
Chapter 201 (The War - Leebaw) ago
Chapter 202 (The War - Leebaw) ago
Chapter 203 (The War - Leebaw) ago
Chatper 203.5 (The War) ago
Chapter 204 (The War) ago
Chapter 205 ago
Chapter 206 ago
Chapter 207 ago
Chapter 208 ago
Chapter 209 ago
Chapter 210 ago
Chapter 211 - Ya'ahd, Bahn Ya'ahd ago
Chapter 211 - Capture ago
Chapter 211 - Inprocessing ago
Chapter 212 (Ralvex) ago
Chapter 213 (Ralvex) ago
Chapter 211 - Questioning ago
Chapter 214 (Ralvex) ago
Chapter 215 (Ralvex) ago
Chapter 211 - The Library ago
Chapter 216 (Foxtrot Niner Two) ago
Chapter 217 (Foxtrot Niner Two) ago
Chapter 218 (Foxtrot Niner Two) ago
Chapter 219 (Foxtrot Niner Two) ago
Chapter 220 (The War) ago
Chapter 221 (The War) ago
Chapter 222 (The War) ago
Chapter 223 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 224 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 225 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 226 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 227 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 228 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 229 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 230 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 231 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 232 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 233 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 234 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 235 (The War) ago
Chapter 236 (The War) ago
Chapter 237 (The War) ago
Chapter 238 (Savash) ago
Chapter 239 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 240 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 241 (The War) ago
Chapter 242 (Terra) ago
Chapter 243 (The Black Box) ago
Chapter 244 (The Black Box) ago
Chapter 244.5 (The Black Box) ago
Chapter 245 (The Black Box) ago
Chapter 245.5 (The Black Box) ago
Chapter 246 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 247 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 248 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 249 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 250 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 251 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 252 (Terra) ago
Chapter 253 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 254 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 255 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 256 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 257 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 258 (Historical Archive) ago
Chapter 259 (Interlude) ago
Chapter 260 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 261 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 262 (Hesstla) ago
Chapter 263 (The Great Herd) ago
Chapter 264 (The Great Herd) ago
Chapter 265 (The Black Box) ago
Chapter 266 (Lost Data) ago
Chapter 267 (Lost Data) ago
Chapter 268 (P'Thok Smokes a Pack) ago
Chapter 268 Historical Archive (P'Thok & The Great Ice Cream Raid) ago
Chapter 269 (Lost Data) ago
Chapter 270 (The Black Box) ago
Chapter 271 (The Black Box) ago
Chapter 272 Historical Archive (P'Thok Makes a Video) ago
Chapter 273 - Historical Archive (P'Thok Signs His Name) ago
Chapter 274 (Black Box) ago
Chapter 275 (Black Box) ago
Chapter 276 (Black Box) ago
Chapter 277 Total War ago
Chapter 278 (TerraSol) ago
Chapter 279 (Total War) ago
Chapter 280 (TerraSol) ago
Chapter 281 (The Confederacy) ago
Chapter 282 (The Confederacy) ago
Chapter 283 (The Confederacy) ago
Chapter 284 (TerraSol) ago
Chapter 285 (TerraSol) ago
Chapter - ERROR- (Interlude) ago
Chapter 286 (TerraSol) ago
Chapter 286.5 (TerraSol) ago
Chapter ERROR (Capture) ago
Chapter ERROR (Inprocessing) ago
Chapter ERROR (Questioning?) ago
Chapter ERROR (Libary) ago
Chapter ERROR (Reducation) ago
Chapter ERROR (Arrival) ago
Chapter ERROR (Gestalt) ago
Chapter 287 ago
Chapter 288 ago
Chapter 289 ago
Chapter 290 ago
Chapter 291 ago
Chapter 292 ago
Chapter 293 ago
Chapter 294 ago
Chapter 295 (Daxin) ago
Chapter 296 ago
Chapter 296.5 ago
Chapter 297 ago
Chapter 297.5 - Because You Need This ago
Chapter 298 - Infinity ago
Chapter 299 - Infinity ago
Chapter 300 The Man Comes Around ago
Chapter 301 Hesstla ago
Chapter 302 ago
Chapter 302.5 ago
Chapter 303 ago
Chapter 304 ago
Chapter 305 ago
Chapter 306 ago
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Chapter 308 ago
Chapter 309 ago
Chapter 310 (Evil Never Dies) ago
Chapter 311 (The War) ago
Chapter 312 (The War) ago
Chapter 313 (The War) ago
Chapter 314 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 315 ago
Chapter 316 ago
Chapter 317 ago
Chapter 318 ago
Chapter 319 ago
Chapter 320 (Sidelines) ago
Chapter 3.145 ago
Chapter 321 ago
Chapter 322 ago
Chapter 323 ago
Chapter 324 (Secure Archive) ago
Chapter 325 (Eternity) ago
Chatper 326 ago
Chapter 327 (Eternity) ago
Chapter 327.5 (Eternity) ago
Chapter 328 ago
Chapter 329 (The Immortals) ago
Chapter 330 ago
Chapter 331 (BEHOLD!) ago
Chapter 332 ago
Chapter 333 (Empire) ago
Chapter 334 ago
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Chapter 360 (Memoir) ago
Chapter 361 (Memoirs) ago
Chapter 362 (Memoirs) ago
Chapter 363 (Memoirs) ago
Chapter 364 (The War) ago
Chapter 365 (TerraSol) ago
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Chapter 496 - The Old Ones ago
Chapter 497 - Eternity ago
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Chapter 518 - Resurgence - Deep Magic ago
Chapter 519 - Eternity ago
Chapter 520 - Resurgence ago
Chapter 521 ago
Chapter 522 - Resurgence ago
Chapter 523 - Resurgence ago
Chapter 524 - Resurgence ago
Chapter 525 Resurgence ago
Chatper 526 - Resurgence ago
Chapter 527 ago
Chapter 528 - Resurgence - Black Box ago
First Contact - Second Resurgence Wave Chpt 529.130 I See You ago
Chapter 530 - Can You Hear the Buzzing ago
Chapter 531 - Who is with Diamonds? ago
Chapter 532 - Many Parts of a Whole ago
Chapter 533 - Lucy ago
Chapter 534 - Resurgence - Crying Anne ago
Chapter 535 - Resurgence - Legends ago
Chapter 536 - Resurgence - Legends ago
Chapter 536 - Resurgence - Legends Pt 2 ago
Chapter 537 - Resurgence - Legends ago
Chapter 538 - Resurgence - Legends ago
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Chapter 556 - 4th & 10 ago
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Chapter 559 - 4th & 10 ago
Chapter 560 - 4th & 10 ago
Chapter 561 - 4th & 10 ago
Chapter 562 - 4th & 10 ago
Chapter 563 - 4th & 10 ago
Chapter 564 - Interlude ago
First Contact - Chapter 565 - Interlude ago
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Chapter 585 - Stock Car Race ago
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Chapter 590 - Stock Car Race ago
Chapter 591 - Stock Car Race ago
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Chapter 593 - Stock Car Race ago
First Contact - Chapter 594 - Stock Car Race ago
Chapter 595 - Stock Car Race ago
Chapter 596 - Stock Car Race ago
Chapter 597 - Stock Car Race ago
Chapter 598 The Stock Car Race ago
Chapter 599 - Stock Car Race ago
Chapter 600 - No Time for Tears ago
Chapter 601 - No Time for Tears ago
Chapter 602 - No Time for Tears ago
Chapter 603 - No Time for Tears ago
Chapter 604 - No Time for Tears ago
Chapter 605 - No Time for Tears ago
Chapter 606 - No Time for Tears ago
Chapter 607 - No Time for Tears ago
Chapter 608 - No Time for Tears ago
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Chapter 623 - War In Heaven ago
Chapter 624 - War In Heaven ago
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Chapter 634 - The War in Heaven ago
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Chapter 636 - The Cavern of Stars ago
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Chapter 800 - VPN ERROR ago
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Chapter 802 - Ultimis Diebus Hominum ago
Chapter 803 - Ultimis Diebus Hominum ago
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Killashard
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Small flaws within an amazing story

Reviewed at: Chapter 201 (The War - Leebaw)

This story is amazing!  It conveys so much emotion and I can really feel like I'm there in the trenches with the troops.  It has great humor and wit, fantastic characters, and the potential of this story is seemingly endless.

Having said that, there are a couple drawbacks.  In regards to grammar, this author is simply amazing for the vast majority of the time.  I can't remember a single their, there, they're or two, to, too mistake.  However, most chapters have at least one word that is simply the wrong one.  Several chapters have multiple.  Considering the authors grasp of the English language, it's incredibly jarring and immediately breaks the immersion.

The style of how this story is written is definetly something I can see as being a negative to some people.  It often jumps around and there will be multiple POV switches within a chapter without any line break to let you know.  You'll go from fighting dangerous flora on foot to suddenly being inside a tank in the next sentence.

Additionally, the author frequently writes as if we are already supposed to know his thoughts.  This is extremely frustrating as there is no possible way we can read his mind and know what he intended, but didn't write.  Most times, the various alien species are barely described beyond having fur, muzzles, brief descriptions of claws, and having tails/wings.  The broodmothers, for example, have only been described as having very fluffy tails that podlings can hide in, they have fur, are very meek, and they sing.  That's it.  How tall are they?  How many arms/legs do they have?  Body shape?  Weight?  Color scheme?  Number of eyes/ears? 

In addition to that, the author wrote multiple chapters about a horror space station, had literally 2 sentences about a face in a star, and then claimed that we should have known it was a Dweller Spawn.  This is despite the fact that up to that point, we have had zero descriptions of what a Dweller Spawn is, does, or looks like.  Dweller Spawn had only been mentioned in passing in a bare handful of senteces in the previous ~150 chapters and then it was in the tone of:  "We don't want to have the dweller spawn attack again."  OK, but how does that equate to a face in a sun?  Plus, the word Dweller Spawn never once came up in those specific chapters, so how someone could connect those dots is beyond me.

In spite of my gripes about the story, this is an amazing one.  Despite them, this story is fantasticly done and is well worth your time.  I hope you enjoy it as much as I am.

Ciaina
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Starts great, then meanders downhill

Reviewed at: Chapter 611 - Interlude

This is GREAT. For a while.

Then it starts going into the metaphisycal and loses its way completely. Overcomplicating a story that starts making less and less sense. I don't know if it is done to lengthen the story, or if the author wants to try new themes but instead of starting something new places the setting on the operation table.

What I do know is that it is painful to watch.

It's like watching a great sculpture going dirty and moldy while losing its features to time.

Had to drop it.

Cocop (Cale Plamann)
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A Melange of Every Science Fiction Show/Movie You've Ever loved

Reviewed at: Chapter 216 (Foxtrot Niner Two)

So your 'TLDR' is that this is REALLY good.  If you have even the slightest inkling that you want to read epic science fiction, give this a try.

Style
The story has a massive scope, entire stellar empires getting wiped out massive.  There are a lot of POVs which at times can be good, but at times is a distraction.  I know that some of the story arcs feel like throw aways that I scim past because I just don't care.  That said, when it works (most of hte time) it WORKS.  The chapters skim past quickly and it's hard to put down.

Grammar
Overall good, but I noticed the occasional missing word that threw me off.  Not enough to really disrupt my enjoyment, but I noticed it.

Story
Yeah, the story is amazing.  Post scarcity humanity in all its unfocused and manic glory replicating the science fiction from old while fighting ancient enemies.  There are plenty of pop culture references, but it's literally references to a half forgotten and legendary pop-culture so it works.

Character
The good characters are REALLY good.  I found myself enthralled in and getting emotional over the struggles, failures and triumphs of aliens.  Moreover, the aliens were ALIEN.  Not just a person in a bog monsters skin.

 

Pylons709
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Initially good, but repetitive and simplistic.

Reviewed at: Chapter Fifty-Seven (Vuxten)

The story can only be explained as a brain dump. Chucks in every potentially cool thing one could think of; neko-girl space marines fighting ork waaaghs, fantasy world simulators, op space marines, wacky space traders, space megacorporations; you name it. The way they are described is pretty good, and the author does a great job immersing you in the story and the sci-fi setting of each character (this is a series of short stories set in the same sci-fi universe). From that alone, it's pretty good until a few of the cons become more prevalent and can't be ignored anymore. I read up till chapter 50 btw.

Regarding the cons, the author is wayy too overzealous in using sci-fi jargon to build the world. Half the time the reader has no idea what's going on and you eventually start just skimming or skipping over most of the writing; like one of those stories in which there's a bunch of maths about stats so you skip the maths entirely (looking at you delver).

Also, the worldbuilding is incredibly simplistic. Basically, the humans are put forward as a chaotic species with no rules that can do no wrong. Literally that meme in which the kid is like "Why  do I fix everything I touch". You never really get an insider perspective on the sci-fi human culture, so you never see anything outside of how powerful, chaotic, and libertarian they are. Other alien cultures are built pretty well, which is a good thing, but they are sometimes oversimplified or put up as goofy characters next to the 'alpha' human race. For example, the author does a great job creating an alien federation driven by corporate interest, a widespread culture of indentured servitude and exploitation of the lower "neo-sapient" classes and a culture of ruling class xenos. However, the ruling class is put forward as a comically incompetent body; unable to agree on any measures to take diplomatically against the humans. The technology of that civilisation is stone age technology compared to what the humans have, and the justification for this is how backwards thinking their ruling class is. In most interactions between the humans and the alien civ, there is no interaction; the aliens just run away from a third-party threat and the humans implement their perfect political system to give the suppressed neo-sapients self-determination. This whole premise becomes boring after while, constantly reading about how humans are so "alpha" and "predatory" and "all-powerful". Even if it is the premise of the stories, you'd imagine most people would get it by the 10th time, by the 100th time it just becomes painful to read.

The characters are pretty good and the reader gets invested in them during their story for quite a bit. The grammar is subpar, and the story would enormously benefit from an editor.

 

 

 

dononof
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For a good while this story was amazing.  But at some point it just became new chapters of random things bouncing betweens 90 characters where a small tiny piece of the universe stories is told in 10 words out of three chapters.  I just finished quickly skimming through five chapters and realized nothing really happen as 10 different charactes and places had to be referenced and talked about.

I can see how some folks like the tiny short stories woven together approach.  I don't. I think the overall story would be better without 90% characters.  The universe the writer created is amazing. The way the story is told doesn't work for me.

Roko's Basilisk
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A quick note, I've been reading this series since the very first short was posted on the r/hfy subreddit, Every evening I feel the whispers give me a heads up just before the story gets updated (it's a thing, see the reddit posts for details).

Now, this story has a special place in my heart and such I am completely biased. I normally try to be objective in my reviews but I love this one too damn much. Disclaimer out of the way, lets begin.

Style:

Ralts writes in a way that invokes humor and powerful emotion in nearly equal parts. Nothing is shown or told without relevance to the universe, the history, and characters. Every moment is either amusing or suspenseful, his mastery of properly timed comic relief, and powerful emotional writing shines throughout the series, with the Second Telkan War being a fantastic example of this.

Story:

Imagine human history became a jumbled mess of ideas, history, fiction, memes, and records all lumped together in a shattered amalgam of information. In the world of First Contact, humanity has been traveling the stars for thousands of years, dark secrets and forgotten history a hallmark of their mad civilization. We have friends in the form of other races, and our descendants such as the Clone Worlds, the Digital Sentience Systems, and more. At first glance the universe seems to be a random bunch of pop culture references and slapdash humor, but as you read on you discover more and more of the terrible history, you learn WHY things are the way they are, and begin to understand it on a level that is hard to describe without a massive dissertation. Suffice it to say, its epic.

The story itself follows a collection of people, one person per arc typically, and shows you the universe from their perspective. This allows the tone of the story to drastically alter itself based on the subject matter and viewpoint, allowing for fascinating, complex stories to be told in a (relatively) short format.

Grammar:

Ralts has impeccable grammar, and in the event of a mistake being pointed out it is quickly fixed, as rare as they are.

Character:

There is not a single character in First Contact without a deep backstory that you only get hints of through their conversations and actions. Every character introduced has a purpose, every character feels rich and developed, the Show Don't Tell method used with exacting detail. There a quite a few characters, as this is more of an anthology than a traditional adventure story, but it flows together to create a single over-arching narrative that will keep you hooked from the moment a strange little bug takes a lick of ice cream.

tarakis
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Awesome (funny and terrifying) Read

Reviewed at: Chapter 230 (Hesstla)

Ralts Bloodthorne is an awesome writer and is telling one Awesome Tale. It is a must read, funny, terrifying and thought provoking. The characters in this story are well thought out and great. The style is very good with very good pacing. Grammar and some mispelling needs a little work but done mostly well.

This story hits you like a TON of bricks!!!

:D CHEERS (c)

coldfireknight
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A little <snerk> something for everyone.

Reviewed at: Born Whole

 I've followed this story on Reddit from almost the beginning and can't recommend it enough to anyone who enjoys a WIDE range of deep characters, as well as an array of well done plots. There are so many nods to over forty years worth of assorted media that FC needs it's own chiropractor, and virtually all of them have been well done. Even the "slower" parts have their own payoffs.

There are plenty of typos and grammatical errors, plus the occasional duplicate word here and there, but our Mad Angel makes the keyboard go BRRRTT and the errors worthwhile. Enjoy the ride and HERE. WE. GO!

Niurn
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FUNNY, EXCITING AND INSANE

Reviewed at: Chapter 239 (Dreams)

Alright, I worry for the mental health of the author. To write this story, you need to have a vision spanning races and galaxies, a drive to spew thousands of pages and being downright insane. Because every-fucking-one here belongs to a madhouse.

This story can be incomprehensible, repetitive, confusing but also innovative, an hilarious parody and a sacred verse of the Holy Chainsword Gospel. It has clear themes and never slows down for a minute.  

I read it while I had a fever AND BOI WHAT A RIDE ! 

 

 

 

Goshi
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Best sci-fi in a few years

Reviewed at: Chapter Seventy-One

You made me dream again , one of the most beautiful, fresh, Emotive sci-fi works that I read last decade. 

There are 2 kinds to sci-fi writers in my opinion , those who predict the future, an those who shows how we must be in the future, and that gestalt of yours, that allows to channel our agresiĆ³n, and rage falls in the second.

 

I'd like tothing that future is brought to life a future where your dreams as deviant as they are came true,. There are a lot of themes not finished  as the ethics of cloning but this is the thing about serials you can go to there in future releases and I hope yo give it a good thought.

I am enjoying a lot I'll donate, or even buy your book if you ever publish it in Amazon, or even you will be my first payreonf thingy. 

 

One of the things that I loved more it's the writing , in part- inconexed , Wich step by step ends telling a grand story of multiple races, planets and wars.

The characters are great, if anything a bit shallow, but I suppose that those is by design, only showing the parts of the charcter relevant to that chapter of history.

This is the way.