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Eight Thousand Years after the Glassing of Earth, Terran Descent Humanity has largely become a post-scarcity society based on consent and enjoying life. With the discovery of another ancient race beyond the "Great Gulf", events and history collide to draw the Terran Confederacy into war against an hundred million year old empire that has always won and believes it always will. With allies and enemies of multiple species, the Orion Galactic Arm Spur will be wracked by warfare the likes of which have not been seen.

Told largely from the viewpoint of other species, the story is currently ongoing. It involves graphic depictions of violence, war, adult language and situations, drug use, and other mature topics.

I will post roughly 10 chapters each day from over on reddit until caught up. That'll only take nearly a month.

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Ralts Bloodthorne

Ralts Bloodthorne

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Chapter Name Release Date
P'Thok Eats an Ice Cream Cone ago
Born Whole ago
First Contact - Chapter One ago
Chapter Two ago
Chapter Three ago
Chapter Four ago
Chapter Five ago
Chapter Six ago
Chapter Seven ago
Interlude ago
Chapter Eight ago
Chapter Nine ago
Chapter Ten ago
Chapter Eleven ago
Chapter Twelve (Daxin) ago
Chapter Thirteen (Nakteti) ago
Chapter Fourteen (Daxin) ago
Chapter Fifteen ago
Chapter Sixteen ago
Chapter Seventeen (Crashrider) ago
Chapter Eighteen ago
Chapter Nineteen (Dreams) ago
Chapter Twenty (Leebaw) ago
Chapter Twenty-One (Interlude) ago
Chapter Twenty-Two (DOKI DOKI DOKI) ago
Chapter Twenty-Three ago
Chapter Twenty-Four (Daxin) ago
Chapter Twenty-Five (Sam) ago
Chapter Twenty-Six ago
Chapter Twenty-Seven (Delminta) ago
Chapter Twenty-Eight ago
Chapter Twenty-Nine (Dreams) ago
Chapter Thirty ago
Chapter Thirty-One ago
Chapter Thirty-Two (Dreams) ago
Chapter Thirty-Three ago
Chapter Thirty-Four ago
Chapter Thirty-Five ago
Chapter Thirty-Six ago
Chapter Thirty-Seven ago
Chapter Thirty-Eight (Daxin) ago
Chapter Thirty-Nine ago
Chapter Forty (Old Iron Feathers) ago
Chapter Forty-One (Ekret) ago
Chapter Forty-Two (Ekret) ago
Chapter Forty-Three (Ekret) ago
Chapter Forty-Four (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Five (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Six (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Seven (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Eight (Ullmo'ok) ago
Chapter Forty-Nine ago
Chapter Fifty (Dreams) ago
Chapter Fifty-One (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Two (Dreams) ago
Chapter Fifty-Three (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Four (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Five (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Six (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Seven (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Eight (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Fifty-Nine (Kark) ago
Chapter Sixty (Kark) ago
Chapter Sixty-One (Kark) ago
Chapter Sixty-Two (Daxin) ago
Chapter Sixty-Three (Dreams) ago
Part Sixty-Four (Rixen) ago
Chapter Sixty-Five (Atilla) ago
Chapter Sixty-Six (Atilla) ago
Chapter Sixty-Seven (Atilla) ago
Chapter Sixty-Eight (Lionel Hutz) ago
Chapter Sixty-Nine (Words) ago
Chapter Seventy (Nakteti) ago
Chapter Seventy-One ago
Chapter Seventy-Two (Daxin) ago
Chapter Seventy-Three (Nakteti) ago
Chapter Seventy-Four ago
Chapter Seventy-Five (Dreams) ago
Chapter Seventy-Six (Old Iron Feathers) ago
Chapter Seventy-Seven (Nakteti) ago
Chapter Seventy-Eight (Nakteti) ago
Part Seventy-Nine ago
Chapter Eighty (Vuxten) ago
Chapter Eighty-One (Leebaw) ago
Chapter Eight-Two ago
Chapter Eighty-Three (Daxin) ago
Chapter Eighty-Four ago
Chapter Eighty-Five ago
Chapter Eighty-Six (Cheekeet) ago
Chapter Eighty-Seven (Ekret) ago
Chapter Eighty-Eight ago
Chapter Eighty-Nine ago
Chapter Ninety ago
Chapter Ninety-One ago
Chapter Ninety-Two (Dreams) ago
Chapter Ninety-Three ago
Chapter Ninety-Four ago
Chapter Ninety-Five (Cornelius) ago
Part Ninety-Six (Telkan) ago
Chapter Ninety-Six (Jed) ago
Chapter Ninety-Eight (Leebaw) ago
Chapter Ninety-Nine (Nakteti) ago
Chapter One-Hundred (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 101 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 102 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 103 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 104 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 105 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 106 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 107 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 108 (Vuxten) ago
Chapter 109 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 110 (The War) ago
Chapter 111 ago
Chapter 112 ago
Chapter 113 (The War) ago
Chapter 114 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 115 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 116 (The War) ago
Chapter 117 (The War) ago
Chapter 118 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 119 (The War) ago
Chapter 120 (The War) ago
Chapter 121 (The War) ago
Chapter 122 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 123 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 124 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 125 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 126 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 127 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 128 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 129 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 130 (Nightmare) ago
Chapter 131 (Nightmare) ago
Chapter 132 (Nightmare) ago
The Whispers Can You Hear Them? ago
Connection With Host - Error 134 ago
135 Skulls on the Throne ago
Chapter 135 One. Three. Five. 1 Three 5 ago
Chapter Number Goes Here ago
Chapter 1 Thirty 6ix ago
Recap ago
Chapter 137 ago
Chapter 138 ago
Chapter 139 (The War) ago
Chapter 140 ago
Chapter 141 (The War) ago
Chapter 142 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 143 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 144 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 145 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 146 (Dreams) ago
Chapter 147 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 148 (The War) ago
Chapter 149 (The War) ago
Chapter 150 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 151 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 152 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 153 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 154 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 155 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 156 (Telkan) ago
Chapter 157 (Trolling) ago
Chapter 158 (Empire) ago
Chapter 158 (Darknyss) ago
Chapter 159 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 160 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 161 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 162 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 162 - Cont (Nemta) ago
Chapter 163 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 164 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 165 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 166 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 167 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 168 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 169 (Nemta) ago
Chapter 170 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 171 (Historical Archive) ago
Chapter 172 (Historical Archive) ago
Chapter 17 3 (Historical Archive - Classified) ago
Chapter 174 (Historical Archive) ago
Chapter 175 ago
Chapter 175.5 ago
Chapter 176 (The War) ago
Chapter 177 ago
Chapter 178 ago
Chapter 179 (Empire) ago
Chapter 180 (The War) ago
Chapter 181 (The War) ago
Chapter 182 (Telkan - The War) ago
Chapter 183 (Nemta - The War) ago
Chapter 184 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 185 (Delvar) ago
Chapter 186 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 187 (Del'Var) ago
Chapter 188 (Del'Var) ago
Chapter 189 (Del'Var) ago
Chapter 190 (The War) ago
Chapter 191 (The War) ago
Chapter 192 (Del'Var) ago
Chapter 193 ago
Chapter 194 (Dorknyss) ago
Chapter 195 (The War) ago
Chapter 196 (Nakteti) ago
Chapter 197 (Empire) ago
Chapter 198 (The War) ago
Chapter 199 (The War) ago
Chapter 200 (The War) ago

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 Impossibly well written, novel and nostalgic, Ralts Bloodthorne weaves a tale of the far future, humanity beset on all sides by ancient and hostile civilizations, making friends and breaking things in either order. Told from the shifting perspectives of the universe as a whole rather than a small main cast, when humanity achieves sufficiently advanced technology, why not theme your own personal starship after your favorite story? Serious and silly, hard sci fi and tech that might as well be magic, find out what happens when someone declares war against a culture that cracked immortality and uses it to full-contact larp your favorite game of choice. One way or another, everyone's in for a ride!

tarakis
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Awesome (funny and terrifying) Read

Reviewed at: Chapter 200 (The War)

Ralts Bloodthorne is an awesome writer and is telling one Awesome Tale. It is a must read, funny, terrifying and thought provoking. The characters in this story are well thought out and great. The style is very good with very good pacing. Grammar and some mispelling needs a little work but done mostly well.

This story hits you like a TON of bricks!!!

:D CHEERS (c)

rgreads
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For those unfamiliar with the term HFY, "Humanity, f*** yeah!" focuses on the strengths of what it means to be human. The best parts. The monkey brain that is always trying to figure out how to do something new, or see patterns that even supercomputers struggle with, or develops concepts like mercy, love, or compassion.

Oh, and illogical, manic determination not to give up, even when any rational sentient would understand the only thing left is to make peace with nonexistence, go into shock and quietly die. That too.

First Contact is primarily told from dozens of non-human POVs that get chapters just long enough to tell their unique story (although some get to come back in multiple chapters). It starts off light and amusing before the plot drops like a dinosaur-killer asteroid.

Truthfully, the grammar score should be marked down to a 4 because the story needs an editor to help with typoes, but they don't take away from the story and the author created something so amazing that anything less than 5 stars overall would be a disservice. Since I can't buy it, the least I can do is hit the Donate button.

The dude who cook
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 Men this is so fucking good 😍😍 if you love sci fi then you have to read this . And the reference of all the old sci fi show is aswome 

coldfireknight
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A little <snerk> something for everyone.

Reviewed at: P'Thok Eats an Ice Cream Cone

 I've followed this story on Reddit from almost the beginning and can't recommend it enough to anyone who enjoys a WIDE range of deep characters, as well as an array of well done plots. There are so many nods to over forty years worth of assorted media that FC needs it's own chiropractor, and virtually all of them have been well done. Even the "slower" parts have their own payoffs.

There are plenty of typos and grammatical errors, plus the occasional duplicate word here and there, but our Mad Angel makes the keyboard go BRRRTT and the errors worthwhile. Enjoy the ride and HERE. WE. GO!

LiquidOcelot
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This writing is seriously, thoroughly, delightful mad. It's violently likable and toxicly fresh. Blows my mind, rly. Insta favourite.

Sum1whoisme
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Great far future hfy sci-fi fantasy!

Reviewed at: P'Thok Eats an Ice Cream Cone

I don't think I have the right words to describe the breadth and depth of this story. It's everything right that ready player one attempted, there's lots of all kinds of humor, there's drama, action (so much action!), eerie horror, just so much.

 

Can't recommend this enough, super glad it's coming here so I can share it with non-redditors. The best part is that it was written so fast. Still waiting on door of stone but this epic came out in 3 months and it's still going. 

finstupido
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maybe the best series on royal road i have seen

Reviewed at: Chapter 110 (The War)

well done on almoust everything. get's you hooked instantly and as the story goes on it never fails to make you enjoy the story and charecters. higly recomended to anyone to read  

Andross Guile
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Sci-Fi Anthology With a Semi-Coherent Plot

Reviewed at: Chapter Twenty (Leebaw)

This is the first anthology I've read in a while. In almost every chapter we are introduced to new characters who do not stick around. The plot is there but it's obscured by about 3500 years of pop culture references that are incoherent. It's most certainly a brave attempt which is why it has such a high style score.

The grammar needs quite a bit of work. There are numerous minor irritating errors in every chapter.

There's a story, which is kinda fascinating but instead of keeping it mysterious the author has decided to use *sigh* narration to reveal the epic backstop in a very tired way. The plots basically: Ancient evil, narcissistic, world torturing and destroying Galactus type aliens vs Humans who make Star Trek look like they're in the Middle Ages. Who knows who is gonna win (sarcasm)?

Characters get the lowest score because they don't stick around for development. We get their backstory, which is nice, what they're doing aaaand that's it.

It's the best anthology I've read, but tbh the bar isn't very high.

Thereadman
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Really good story, but skip the Daxin parts, those aren't really interesting.