Crystal Down

by 0xReki

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy GameLit Low Fantasy Magic Multiple Lead Characters Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Slice of Life Strong Lead

Meet Swift Mittens who just got reincarnated as a 10-year-old catling after a traffic accident. Having just woken up in a new world with no real explanation, our kitten shows he lacks any common sense whatsoever while he tries to cope with his situation as good as he can: being alone in the middle of nowhere, with no fixed shelter, no stable source of food — but with a kind of gaming interface and his not so helpful knowledge from playing MMOs in his past life. A good start to an adventure… or it would be an adventure if he didn’t hole himself up in the middle of the forest in the first place!

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1-0: Prologue — the Bus Factor ago
1-1: Oh! I'm a Potato Cat! ago
1-2: I Got Mail?! I Wonder Who It's From… ago
1-3: Setting up Camp and Discovering Numbers ago
1-4 & 5: Choosing My Initial Traits and Skills ago
1-6 & 7: Digging My Cave ago
1-8: Awakening Crystals and Forest Magic ago
1-9: Raiden the Thunder Hawk ago
1-10: Upgrading My Cave — The Bathroom ago
1-11: Food and Cooking in Avan Forest ago
1-12: The First Hunt ago
1-13: Experiments with Infinite Storage ago
1-14: Cave Upgrade — Adding a Hot Spring and a Bedroom ago
1-15: Visitors in the Forest ago
1-16: On the Way Home from the Forest ago
1-17: Bunnyflies Faryl, Felix and Flynn ago
1-18: Again, Visitors in the Forest ago
1-19: Worrying About the Future ago
1-20: Slimes and Slime Gelatine ago
1-21: Meeting the Gods of Cratherion ago
1-22: Giant Rabbit Subjugation ago
1-23: Cooking After the Hunt ago
1-24: First Day of Real Training ago
1-25: Card Games and High Stakes Gambling ago
1-26: Swift Mittens, the Kitten ago
1-27: Creating the Evergreen Forest ago
1-28: The Large Bath in the Evergreen Forest ago
1-29: My First Trip to the Capital! ago
1-30: Registration at the Adventurer’s Guild ago
1-31: Sky Salmon and Sky Salmon Stew ago
1-32: A Shopping Trip Gone Wrong ago
1-33: Matthew Sitnalta Ace Prosecutor ago
1-34: Spinning Magic Yarn ago
1-35: Slime Jelly Production Talks Before Dinner ago
1-36: Reading and an Unexpected Find ago
1-37: The Second Day At Tatilans Castle ago
1-38: Tales of Maple Wine ago
1-39: Making Sashimi and Gathering Fern ago
1-40: A Short Chapter Where (Almost) Nothing Happens ago
1-41: Lesson in Lock Picking ago
1-42: Hot Spring After a Trip in the Rain ago
1-43: Rice and Real Rice ago
1-44: How to Improve on Maple Wine ago
1-45: Divine Problems ago
1-46: Lecarvi the Bard ago
1-47: Mortal Problems ago
1-48: Dropping by Glorindamli’s Armoury ago
1-49: Mail Mirrors and Message Bottles ago
1-50: Alfred Jodocus Plumel ago
1-51: Cooking and Divine Banter ago
1-52: The Mad Cow Disease ago
1-53: Robbery on Avan Highway ago
1-54: Barrier Crystals ago
1-55: Banter At the Inn ago
1-56: The Cheese Crisis ago
1-57: The Cow Level ago

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MrHrulgin
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It's fine, though not great. Early, heavy infodump and stiff internal narration.

wedrftgy
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Too much talking, not enough description.

Reviewed at: 1-34: Spinning Magic Yarn

Too much talking, not enough description. Characters also seem 1d.

Wingsong
Overall

 Your story has good draw. And while most of the o the reviews are true if not a tad harsh, most can be dealt with by gaining experience, self and story reflection and of course research by reading others stories. Just don't be afraid to take a step forward take a partial step back to reflect and gain experience so you can step forward again 

TehGingerKlaus
Overall

Seems very similar to another story

Reviewed at: 1-52: The Mad Cow Disease

This story seems really similar to the Web novel "The man picked up by the gods" I think it's called. Like a lot of the talking points are very similar, and the situations the MC get into seem almost 1 to 1.