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Leon hid a grimace. He was no soldier, he chose this. At least in a way. He chose to risk his life for profit. He chose to fight in a war he had no real opinion of. Hell he even chose to join this assault. 

There was a bonus in it after all. 

The room shook.

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First 3 chapters review

Reviewed at: Chapter 3 Inquisitor

A good medieval mercenary story, while I was a lil hesitant to rate vanguard on the first 3 chapters alone. After some thought I believe that it deserves a review regardless.

Good character depth for the beginning chapters and even though we've just started the plot seems fairly developed already. I can't wait to see what vanguard has next