The Five Series

by Brogotta smoke

Original ONGOING Action Sci-fi Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Ruling Class
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Three generations have passed since the last near-apocalyptic war. Civilization is beginning to thrive again at an ever increasing pace. The burden of society has been once again placed on the back of a massive robotic workforce, creating a huge divide between industrial glory, and those forced to live in its shadow. Many have stubbornly held onto the old ways of self-governance from back when the government fell, but with its return, life in Welan City is changing.

Aaron, a middle-aged man, who is stuck in the rut of daily life, witnesses a murder and finds himself in trouble, love, and the middle of a highly secretive robotics project. Aaron stakes his life on helping a prototype survive, and pays for it dearly. Passionate hate, love, and indifference send life in Welan City spiraling out of control, leaving no one innocent in the end.

The Five Series is, well, a series. I've completed 3 of the books so far and will finish with a fourth, maybe fifth book. 

Book 1 is heavy on the character development side while the following will be much more decision and consequence oriented. This story reaches into the soul of a person and the universe we live in.

Some people deserve a second chance, and some do not. With that im mind, no one really ever gets what they deserve though, do they? Always tell the people you care about that you love them as often as you can, they could be gone tomorrow. Would that change if you could always bring them back?

I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I did writing it.

Cody

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You can tell there's been a lot of work put into this book. The description is very detailed. Some grammar could be cleaned up but it's overall very legible. 

I really like the different character viewpoints and wonder who will be killed off next. You already get a character death in the first chapter. There's a Gore warning too It's kind of like GOT where you might not want to have Favorite? I'm guessing. 

Hoping for some romance and further development of the AI character FiveTwo. I'm only about 6 chapters in so far. 

Will update my review as I go.