High-Class Mob

by Seyer_Jad

Original ONGOING Action Comedy Fantasy Romance High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Mythos Reincarnation Ruling Class Slice of Life War and Military
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

As Leo opened his eyes, he found himself in the body that is not his. 

Colt Edgeworth is a man with little to no information in the story Sword of Heaven. 

The character Colt Edgeworth died in the hands of his fiancé after experiencing some stabby-stabby action. And that is who Leo had become. 

‘I am in a world that has magic, different technology, customs, races, and Gods actually do shit, and I have a woman who loves me but also wants to turn me into swiss cheese...’

He looked at the mirror, contemplated his fate, and came to a single conclusion...

‘So be it, I’ll try living.’

Note: This is my first time writing and English is not my first language, so there are mistakes, I only managed to Re-edit [Volume-1 Chapter 1 - 20], please tell me about the mistakes.

The cover is not mine, I just saw it and thought it was awesome...all rights reserve to the original creator

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1. Did Truck-sama send me? ago
2. Love is in the air ago
3. What has the world come to? ago
4. Hands in the Shadows ago
5. Loving a Yandere doesn’t sound that bad. ago
6. Man of Culture ago
7. Pedophile ago
8. Reason of the original’s death (part 1) ago
9. The reason of the original’s death (part 2) ago
10. The reason of the original’s death (part 3) ago
11. The reason of the original’s death (part 4) ago
12. You deserve the truth ago
13. Youthful Desires: Claiming each other ago
14. The Alliance makes their move ago
15. To fight with numbed legs is bullshit ago
16. The daughter and the past of Colt Edgeworth (part 1) ago
17. The daughter and the past of Colt Edgeworth (part 2) ago
18. One-meter ago
19. The storm ends and spreading one’s wings ago
20. A whole new world ago
21. Wishing for plot armor is not viable [Vol. 2] ago
22. I just want to take a bath ago
23. Like I said, I wanted to take a bath ago
24. No secrets ago
25. Not for me! ago
26. What? ago
27. Nyaaaa! ago
28. The cat and the human ago
29. Birth of a Legend ago
30. Not all popularity is good ago
31. It’s in the blood ago
32. Move, bitch ago
33. Duel ago
34. BitDar ago
35. Juked ago
36. This is the real world ago
37. Name ago
38. Fair Enough ago
39. The Dragon Slayer ago
40. Proposition ago
41. One more reason why he stopped ago
42. A Man Worthy of Respect ago
43. Rats ago
44. Alley ago
45. Tired ago
46. Fluff Reaper ago
47. Caught in a Trap ago
48. As you said ago
49. Value ago
50. Colt Edgeworth ago
51. Meeting ago
52. Two Choices ago
53 One Answer ago
54. Who? ago
55. Resonating Values ago
56. Invitation ago
57. Negotiation ago
58. Generals ago
59. The Kid, The Cat, and the The Food ago
60. To the Thunder Tiger Mountain ago
61. The Entrance to the peak ago
62. Black Smoke ago
63. Going down the Mountain ago
64. Anger ago
65. To fight with numbed Legs ago
66. Unsheathing the Sword ago
67. 20 seconds exchange ago
68. Drugs ago
69. The Girls ago
70. The cheating Goddesses ago
71. Just another day ago
72. Change ago
73. Dammit [Vol. 3 Child of Light] ago
74. Let it go ago
75. Return ago
76. A Guilty Heart (part 1) ago
77. A Guilty Heart (part 2) ago
78. Questions ago
79. Smile ago
80. Watched over by the Divine ago
81. Troublesome ago
82. Peaceful Days ago
83. Father-in-Law ago
84. Preparation ago
85. Finally, He Faces the Future ago
86. Ragdoll (Part 1) ago
87. Ragdoll (Part 2) ago
88. Ragdoll (Part 3) ago
89. Fuck ago
90. Bleeding (Part 1) ago
91. Bleeding (Part 2) ago
92. Bleeding (Part 3) ago
93. Bleeding (Part 4) ago
94. Bleeding (Part 5) ago
95. Bleeding (Part 6) ago
96. What luck indeed ago
97. Pah! ago
98. Seriously, What? ago
99. Meow! Meow! Motherfucker! ago
100. Untold ago
101. Don’t think much about it ago
102. Mother (Part 1) ago
103. Mother (Part 2) ago
104. Unexpected ago
105. Sadistic ago
106. Where are they!? ago
107. Knowledge for a Favor ago
108. A Mother (Part 3) ago
109. A Mother (Part 4) ago
110. Disgusting ago
111. The Sovereign ago
112. End of the Day ago
113. The Wife, the Goddesses, and the Celestial War ago
114. A peaceful day ago
115. Butler ago
116 Questions after Assumptions ago
117. Colt Faction ago
118. How is that possible!? ago
119. Nun ago
120. Knight ago
121. Cry for Help ago
122. Guilt ago
123. The Cure ago
124. Not Enough ago
125. Flee and Defeat ago
126. None can resist this Lord ago
127. Noooooo! ago
128. Lucille Yola ago
129. The Great Trade ago
130. Schemer Colt ago
131. Shattered ago
132. I need wine ago
133. Destroying dreams ago
134. Medals ago
135. I don't want to die ago
136. The sudden turnabout ago
137. Let me rest ago
138. I want a happy Ending ago
139. No Context ago
140. Where's the Sword ago
141. Not Tessaiga ago
142. Purifying Moon (Part 1) ago
143. Purifying Moon (Part 2) ago
144. When? ago
Chapter 145. Loophole ago
146. Fuck my life ago
147. Lea ago
148. Friendship ago
149. Oh, No ago
150. We have a problem ago
151. Beasts ago

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MadKiwi
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I have been reading this and something has felt off the entire time. Other than the fact that grammar causes the story to have absolutely no flow and the random tense and PoV changes that is. It's the fact that I feel like the author doesn't follow the rule of show don't tell.

Maybe they will put something in there that is supposed to show what they want to tell, but they don't put anything behind it. It'll be a few lines for some really big change.

Also everything that happens doesn't have any foreshadowing. And pertinent information is given at the time it is pertinent which makes it feel like it was just something that was added to get the word count up and it isn't really important.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

I wanted to like this story. I feel it had a lot of potential. I haven't decided if I will keep reading yet, but it isn't looking likely. It lacks flow, it has no buildup, and sometimes the MC feels more like a sock puppet to advance the plot and make jokes for the author instead of a character. This is my first review, and I could be focusing on the negatives. I think anyone who reads this should still give the book a try.

Illya Bohatkov
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The story is pretty good, it's no professional author writing this but if you came here looking for that you're in the wrong place.

Only thing that really bothers me is the grammar, oh the grammar.

My advice to the author, just ask a viewer to do some editing on the chapters as im sure there would be a lot of people willing to.

I'm very close to dropping this solely because of the grammar and I beg of you author-san, just get an editor.

Dnoj
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"Trash of the Count's Family" - Yandere Waifu Edition.

Reviewed at: 73. Dammit [Vol. 3 Child of Light]

This story borrows a lot from the korean wn "Trash of the Count's Family." Just change the Hero who beats MC up in the original story, to Yandere who kills the MC in the original story.

It's an okay story, far from perfect.

My biggest gripe is the author's numerous grammar mistakes. He/she should hire a proof reader, or just proofread the whole thing themselves. Because there are grammatical errors in EVERY chapter.

(surprisingly, though, no spelling mistakes)

It's still perfectly readable, though, but it gets very annoying.

Try it out if you like Reincarnated into Story/Game type of fictions.

Edit:

I've made it to chapter 72. Dropped it for a while because the grammar was just atrocious. Went back here because... I don't know. Because I hate myself, probably. Also, I'm a sucker for trashy isekai stories.

I missed the 'Martial Arts' tag the first time I saw this, so imagine my surprise when it started to introduce stuff which were vaguely wuxia/xianxia, a genre I hate with a passion

However, I too, have mastered a secret technique which I have honed through out the years by slogging through countless trashy isekai stories.

Yes, that technique is called: Skipping Paragraphs.

Yes, by using this mystical technique, I have persevered through numerous trashy stories, and I have managed see the essence which lies at their core.

In normal English: Skipped through all the wuxia/xianxia bullshit (which can take more than half of some chapters), forced my way through the atrocious grammar with sheer strength of will, and I was pleased to find a decent power fantasy romance story.

It's not an amazing story, far from it: it's generic as fuck, but that's the kind of shit I'm in to, and at the end if the day, it's enjoyable. But I shouldn't have to put myself through so much trouble just to enjoy this story, so I'm not changing my rating.

TL;DR: An enjoyable, generic, isekai power fantasy romance story buried under horrible grammar and even worse (my bias) wuxia/xianxia elements, which are completely skippable and should definitely be skipped.

Alex Pauloff
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Psychology? No. Common sense? No, thanks.

Reviewed at: 2. Love is in the air

Author doesn't consider thoughts of the mc about
his transmigration. Other characters take his changes "as is" though it would be
possible that they would think that their child was possessed or got crazy. It looks like everyone take drastic changes in his behavior as granted. Also, author states that this character was mentioned in three lines in a story that mc read before. Is it possible to recognize the story at the beginning from vague descriptions and a name of a "three-line character"? I just cannot believe in this plot, sorry.

Waffle(est)
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Decent story in process of derailment

Reviewed at: 124. Not Enough

The start is pretty decent reincarnation story. It doesn't take itself too seriously which makes it relatively easy to overlook some initial issues. There is even a rather emotional moment hidden in there! There is not too much power scaling silliness either, so lookign good indeed!

Then the author starts to take things more seriously, the lighthearted tone vanishes. Then the story starts to slowly be overwhelmed by mentally unhinged homicidal maniacs (oh dear). And finally, shortly after chapter 100 it becomes truly clear that this is turning into foll blown xianxia. The world is full of characters that give 0 value to human life or outright enjoy the suffering of others. The power scaling gets more rapid and there is even a temporary power boost to help MC overcome an obstacle (how convenient!). 

Then to top it off, it turns out that the driving force of the story is literally a couple of insane people, a bunch of zealots and a whole lot of mind control shenanigance.. (and of course all of these are homicidal maniaces who love to torture everybody and anybody, especially childeren as seems to be the best tradition of xianxia these days)

The grammar is not perfect but sufficciently good that it does not significantly detract from reading.(which means its not 5 stars, and then i stop caring)

So, the score.. take this as an average across the book, more properly it would be about a 4.5 for the beginning, somewhere at 3.5 near the latest currently released chapters.. (and about 2 in the currently-imaginary-but-I dread-it-might-become-reality future where the author takes this to it's logical conclusion in about 5 years time).

Nautilus
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Give this story a read before you take anyone else's opinion

Reviewed at: 100. Untold

The first few chapters will be your typical isekai story, but that cant really be changed easily. But after that it shows it colors when Colt finally gets his full memory back and I think the characters only start improving from there. They are believable and interesting with enough depth to keep you interested and not too much exposition to bore you.

The Mc is doing his best without BSing, spending actual effort to show gains(though yes the gains do come in faster than an average person). There is no harem which is a massive plus if you ask me.

You might be thrown off by the yandere wife, but it gives reasons for why she is that way and she does improve away from that.

Really just give it a try, if you make it to chapter 15 and dont like it then it probably isn't your sup of tea.

P.S. chapter 13 doesn't have any plot so you can skip it if you aren't into that(like me)

Carson6319
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It looks like a semi entertaining story about being reincarnated as a random nobile in a book who is going to be killed. 

I could only get to chapter 15 before I had to stop. The grammar just ruins it for me. The author clearly is not a native english speaker and it shows in every paragraph of every chapter. 

I suggest the author source some help with this as grammer is a nightmare to learn. 

vasilla
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Come for Otome reincarnation left because of wuxia bullshit

Reviewed at: 15. To fight with numbed legs is bullshit

Come on it was such a nice otome story reincarnation why begin this bullshit with Water Ripples movement arts. There are so much of cultivation stories and you shuld have warned about this shit in first chapter. Now it`s just dissapointing.

Umbral
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Failed to impress, but give the first few chapters a try as it may be for you?

Reviewed at: 4. Hands in the Shadows

I don't think this story will be everyones cup of tea. To start with there is nothing majorly wrong with the story, but equally there are no stand out praise worthy qualities.

The story starts out with a character reincarnated as a 'Trash mob' character from a visual novel that meets apitiful end. The closest thing I could compare it to is The World of Otome Games is Tough for Mobs.

However unlike that story where the main character is pro-active to better the situation he finds himself in, this charcter does not really do anything and feels like he lacks any agency. 

In addition the way the story is written feels off to read, but its hard to pinpoint the exact issue. it might be due to sentence structure and grammar?

All in all this story failed to grip me within a few chapters, if you give it a longer read it may improve but I can only go from my experience so far.

Nomad1791
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Not a lot here yet but it's well written and has one thing that so easily over looked. The mc isn't a idiot, he dosent constantly fall into self pity, he is dare I say it. Likeable. Yup can't wait to see what happens good luck author hope they masses treat you well.