The Courting of Life and Death

by VMJaskiernia

Original ONGOING Fantasy Historical Horror Romance Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Mythos Non-Human lead Ruling Class Slice of Life Steampunk Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Traumatising content

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Clandestina is a realm of secrets, fairies, and dark magics. Among the nobles there is talk of a goddess of death, and a forbidden magic she grants to those that follow her-- cræft that can heal injuries that should be fatal or even bring back the dead. But she asks for much in return; blood and sometimes even life itself.

Pierre Salvador has just returned to court after finishing his studies and becoming a surgeon. But as he flirts with his childhood friend Elizabeth Anne, Mora, The Lady of Death, waits for him.

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Chapter Name Release Date
❦ Characters, Maps, Lore, and Patreon Shoutouts ❤ ago
1.1 ~ Gala ago
1.2 ~ Illness ago
1.3 ~ Lord of Death ago
1.4 ~ Fairies and Daimons ago
1.5 ~ Murder ago
1.6 ~ Poison ago
2.1 ~ Spirits of Death ago
2.2 ~ Cræft ago
2.3 ~ Fée Funeral ago
2.4 ~ Her Fate ago
~ The First Suitor ~ ago
2.5 ~ Witch ago
2.6 ~ Flirting ago
~ Hanging ~ ago
2.7 ~ A Favor ago
2.8 ~ Château ago
2.9 ~ Death and Dreams ago
2.10 ~ Council Meeting ago
2.11 ~ Dancing Lessons ago
~ Fée Child ~ ago
2.12 ~ Going Into Town ago
2.13 ~ Sabine ago
2.14 ~ Letters ago
2.15 ~ The Ladies ago
2.16 ~ Secrets ago
2.17 ~ Foundling ago
2.18 ~ Surgery ago
~ First Kiss ~ ago
2.19 ~ Authority ago
2.20 ~ More Letters ago
2.21 ~ Fairy Boots ago
2.22 ~ Fortune Telling ago
2.23 ~ Dead ago
2.24 ~ Dinner ago
2.25 ~ Blancræft ago
2.26 ~ Necrocræft ago
2.27 ~ Presence of Death ago
2.28 ~ Meetings ago
~ Mothers ~ ago
~ Return ~ ago
2.29 ~ Magic of Death ago
2.30 ~ Familiar ago
2.31 ~ Midspring and Summerfinding ago
2.32 ~ Church ago
2.33 ~ Mora ago
2.34 ~ Feuilles ago
2.35 ~ The Prince and the Duc ago
2.36 ~ Cold Iron ago

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The style.

Omniscient third person narration. The author is able to convey the feelings, thoughts and perspectives of the characters to the readers in a perfect way. Excellent style.

The Story.

Check out the synopsis first, and you'll see why it's so captivating. 

"Clandestina is a realm of secrets, fairies, and dark magics. Among the nobles there is talk of a goddess of death, and a forbidden magic she grants to those that follow her-- cræft that can heal injuries that should be fatal or even bring back the dead. But she asks for much in return; blood and sometimes even life itself. Pierre Salvador has just returned to court after finishing his studies and becoming a surgeon. But as he flirts with his childhood friend Elizabeth Anne, Mora, The Lady of Death, waits for him."

And once readers pick this thrilling book up, they'll find it hard to drop. The story is developing nicely without deviating from the plot line.

The grammar.

This is excellent. No noticeable errors that could affect the flow of the story.

The characters.

The characters are well written. I found the nature of the Pierre character, quite intriguing. The author is really doing a great job in developing his story line so far. Not a lot to say about the character Liz for now, but I think her character is full of unlimited potentials.  

Thanks author, well done..

FortySixtyFour
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V. M. Jaskiernia pens a lighthearted romance steeped in horror—or is it perhaps a horror that has instead been beset by romance? Nuances of the dark and tantalizing blot across the finery of Victorian intrigue, with dread and delight waxing and waning in tandem to vie for the reader's attention. Larkspur's single defining shortfall is its brevity⁠—this fiction will capture you with its heartfelt whimsy and then steal your last breath away.

MrBadWithNames
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Style 4.5/5, the story is written very well, no complaints here, I'd apprechiate some imagery but that's just a personal thing.

The pacing is great and the world gets a fair amount of descriptions.

 

Gramma 5/5, as always, not much to say :D

 

Story 4.5/5, while the setting seemed pretty standard in the begining, I've definitely been caught off-guard by the end of chapter one and I have to say I'm liking what I see! 

I'm looking forward to a unique adventure!

 

Characters, so far while the characters' motives aren't perfectly clear, I can tell they aren't 2D caricatures, so I'm giving the story the benefit of the doubt and rating them 4.5/5

 

I definitely reccomend you give this story a read, it's a fun and easy read :D

Dakie Salamander
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Different than other novels on RR, it's so wholesome it could be published physical book instead. And I bet it would be bestseller.

When I read it, the victorian atmosphere just hit me in the brain and pulled me right inside. Beautifull, exquisitively crafted descriptions that will force you to imagine you being here but still gives you enough space to imagine your own things. It reads as Jane Austin books a little bit. (and that's a big, BIG bow from me).

The story is dark and mysterious that you will just impatiently await more chapters.

All characters are having personalities, ambitions and motivations. You will dive into life of nobles in the victorian era, where intrigues and rules of conduct are important. But there is a scale of characters, each of them important. You feel them live their lives even when they leave the scene.

Magic is very tasteful and not too much or too little. Incredible how can you write magic system without overblowing it.

For what I can say, that grammar is perfect.

What can I say? Read it! Definitely! R.E.A.D I.T!

TaxReligion
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The first thing that will stand out to you, when you read this work, is how well written it is.  The variety of prose, their flow, the word choice.  It's a joy to read.  Grammar 5/5, Style 5/5 easily.  The quality of writing is consistent, at least for the first 7 chapters.
Story:  It's a cool story that's filled with detail.  The world the story takes place in is clearly well thought out.  I love the little details that give the world a lived-in feeling.  The story in the early part is exciting if a bit slow-paced to start, but once things pick up it's very engaging. 4.5/5.

Character:  The characters have personalities, desires and quirks.  The omnipotent narrator will tell you what each person is thinking allowing the reader to get to know the characters well. 5/5

Overall 5/5.  A great story, and clearly head and shoulders above most of the stories here on royal road.

sumdumbguy
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This story a highly organized and well-written work of art. The amount of planning put into every aspect is incredible. 

The characters are well developed. The interactions are fluid and believable.  The world is captivating; the prose is engaging.

Go and read it!

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm taking my own advice to read the rest of this polished gem.

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 To me this was a mix of myster of magic, this work is honestly phenomenal, it was like reading a classic novel mixed with the novelty of plot, magic and mystery of web serials. I honestly loved it. 

 

The style of the story was filled with the mystery and charm of the story, it conveyed to me how that world is much different from other mystery and magic stories, if I had a bone to pick it would be that sometimes i was confused due to the structure, but those were very few.

 

The story and plot itself, oh were they good, reading the first few chapters told me how much of this world was built and thought upon by the author i really want and hope it to continues that way.

 

I did not feel there was something wrong with the grammar so nothing from me here.

 

I read about a quarter of the current released chapters so for what i saw in the charcters was they each held a distinct characteristics based on their position in royalty and in the plot. The MC was the one that held a bit of character that steamed out from emotion. But like i said i stopped fairly early on and i am sure the rest of the characters get fleshed out later. 

CoCop
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Putting the 'Romance' in Necromancy

Reviewed at: ~ Hanging ~

To start, this is novel novel is positively dripping with lore and aesthetic.  This means that the writing is dense to the point where it might turn off some readers, but that doesn't mean it is bad.  The novel is a true Gothic Romance and very very good at what it does.  It's filled with clever wordplay and medieval dating/courtship rituals all with an undercurrent of magic and folklore that is both feral and dangerous.

Style
The style is where this shines.  The dialogue is stilted in a charming way, mimicking the overwrought langauge of the court.  That said, the wording, wordplay, nonverbal cues, descriptions, all of it is very well done without going over the top.  It very much feels like something written in the 18th century about a man of science harboring a dark secret.  If you enjoy any of the old school proto-horror novels such as Dracula or Frankenstein (where half of the purpose was the aesthetic of the era) this book is VERY much worth a read for the style alone.

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I didn't notice any errors, that's a good thing.

Story
The story is ultimately a love story with some elements of jealousy mixed in.  At times it can run a little slow, a bit overburdened by the lore and the world it dwells in, but I am very much engaged in it nonetheless.

Character
There are limited characters, all of whom are interesting and have their own role and voice.  There isn't much to say other than 'they're well done' and 'more Wolfram.'

Kraze Kode
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A Dark and Fanciful Tale of Love and Death

Reviewed at: 18 ~ Delphinium ~ Going into town

I would start by simply saying that this story is a MUST read. I do not tend to give 5 stars in all categories but alas my hand was forced by the masterpiece that this story is. A tale written in the realm of Clandestina filled with magic and cræft it will take you through a journey of the tale of old when magic was much more real and dire.

Style 

If I could I would have given this category 10 stars, but I only have 5 to work with so I had to make do. The writing style represents something written in the 1800s and it is a PLEASURE to read. The interaction, the world building, the subtle hints, the way the characters think, the way everything fits the image of this realm of magic Clandestina is something I am in love with it and I think you will be too. 

Story 

The story has a lot of aspects mixed into it, political intrigue, romance (not the sappy kind), drama, etc. Our protagonist courts death itself and while death is a strength there are consequences for it. The beautiful way that the author has expanded on necromancy had me gripped right from the start. A different and such a refreshing take over a magic that has been over-generalized by LitRPG, it takes spirits and death and the nature of Afterlife into account and overall is just delightful to read with a lot of potential for the future. An easy 5/5 here.

Grammar

Very rare typos but flawless otherwise if I was petty then I would have cut a half star here but honestly, I was so enamored by the story that I never even notice the typos. 5/5

Characters 

What would you say when Death herself was a character? Each character has a purpose a goal, and each one seems equally deep and well thought. The only difference that I see between the main characters and side characters? How much we know about them. I will not spoil here so JUST GO READ! You will not be disappointed as right from the first chapters the characters drag you to travel through their tale, full of Life and Death. 

Give the story some time it may take a while to grow on you, as the text is dense and filled to the brim with content so some reader may feel overwhelmed but go past that and you would have in your hands a masterpiece you wish was on your bookshelf too. 

TL;DR Go Read it!

Ferone
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An amazing read, well worth the time

Reviewed at: ~ First Kiss ~

What can I say. Impeccable grammar and story telling. A refreshing style of story. Budding romances and ver very interesting and ethereal magic complementing a victorian age style collection of fae realms.