A guy reincarnated as a sloth and is too lazy to be a protagonist

by Mr.FluffyMuffins

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy LitRPG Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
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Hey, so do you also love a Story about people getting isekai’d into another world into a body of a monster that can evolve?

Yea, sucks that most of them are either Harems (honestly, at first i was like "weird flex but okay", but now every fucking story that looks like it could go somewhere just throws the MC a new love interest every 3 chapters or so), or idiots that trust the first human they see to not kill them.

Also, is it just me, or do most of them evolve into a human-ish Form way too fast? I mean what is the point of a monster MC if the guy is practically just an overpowered human?

 

Well, after like about 3 years I am kinda running out of good stories, so i am gonna try to make one myself. Its probably gonna be pretty bad to be honest, but it has no harem so it is already better than 3/4 of novels out there. And I haven't even started yet!

But to be serious now: The story is about a pretty lazy guy who reincarnates as a sloth....i haven't really planned more for now... well, good luck to me i guess. Also I am not sure if i want this to have blue screens yet... i mean they look pretty neat but personally im kind of sick of them.

PS: If you wondered, no I am not the person that took the photo of a sloth with sunglasses...god, that dude must be living the Life...

Small update, I am gonna be gone for the summer but I'l try to make some raugh drafts when I have some time

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Acolyte_of_cthulhu
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The reason why this story is so amazing ah I am to tired to even......

PaulTB
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The grammar and spelling is terrible, but it's the unlikeable MC that really kills it for me. The concept has promise, but not enough to keep me reading.

Kian Temple
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too lazy to write a good title so go sloths

Reviewed at: Friends for life.

go sloths! sometimes i just like reading about a lazy person who doesn't marry every single woman he finds but stabs them instead.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

OverdinoAcolyte
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Finally a relatable isekai

Reviewed at: Friends for life.

This is a masterpiece of literature.

Certainly the MC is the most understandable of all the other isekai type novels I have read

NotMC
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There are 3 prominent characters and the dynamic is hilarious

Reviewed at: Friends for life.

In the novel we have 3 prominent characters based on people you might meet in any office, and one of them happens to be trapped in a fantasy world as a sloth.

The narrator is the same for everyone and everyone can hear him - unless you buy prime membership for the right to turn the narration off. The narrator is an optimistic guy always intent on telling a standard heroic tale. Unfortunately the actors of his tale are not exactly up tp standard and sometimes even an optimistic guy gets annoyed and pissy.

Then there is the System. The system is that quiet guy that sticks to the basics and isn't very talkative, but iff you annoy him he'll throw stones in your way by leaving out important facts by 'accident' or giving you gifts you really didn't want. Also, the system steals donuts from the boss and can be ...convinced to bend the rules to stay out of trouble. 

And then there is the MC. He's a bitchy spoiled lazy virgin with 0 people skills and an opportunistic streak that skipped brutal and cruel to go straight down to the coldest logic, all while bit hing like a spoiled sixteen year old who got a car in the wrong color for her sixteenth birthday.

And it's amazing!

WolfLordMaster
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11/10 Comedy Adventure LitRPG

Reviewed at: Friends for life.

When I first started this novel, I was put off by the grey text not knowing what it was and the grammar at the start, but continued onwards, into a absolutely hilarious novel, 11/10 comedy in my opinion, was hooked after only a couple chapters, along with the crunchy LitRPG, along with the unique narrator, one that everyone can hear, overall the main three genres are perfect, it's mainly a comedic adventure LitRPG! (Rest in peace Jimmy, he'll live on in our hearts forever ;-;)

auramasda
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So idiotic, so lazy, so GOOD

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it's from the time I read everybody love large chest that I don't read something so moronically good, I want to apply to be the narrator

Astrowoud
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So, you aren’t sold by the intro yet?

Reviewed at: The pains of growing up

This book is exactly how it advertises itself, and for once, that is good. (Minor spoilers ahead)

The story is about a man, who got hit by the almighty truck-kun,, and got reïncarnated. So far: normal run of the mill story.

Our beautiful protagonist however, is lazy as f*ck. And becomes a sloth. Literally. He transforms into a sloth and does nothing all day.

”So why is this a good story, if nothing happens?” You ask.

Well let me tell you: the way this novel is written changes everything. It is written as if a narrator narrates everything, and yes, we learn that the mc also hears the narrator. Then there is a snarky system, a perfect satire on most other systems. And last but not least: short chapter.

While the last one may seem to be detrimental, rather than helpfull, it makes everything work. Chapters in which barely anything happens suddenly have the same amount of progression per sentence (if that is something) as most other books. It makes sure that the writing style does not become obnoxious and it allows the author to keep writing, and you to keep reading, without getting a migraine.

Of course this writing style isn’t for everyone, but I encourage you to read the first two chapters nontheless. They are short, so you will barely lose time at all. Trust me when I say that you’ll be sold after reading those two. 

Oh, and before you go: the grammer is impeccable, or at least to good for me to notice errors. The story so far is as advertised and said earlier, so if it takes a turn for the worse, I’ll update the review. But I don’t think that is going to be necessary...

So, do go on, and read this novel written by my good sir Mr.FluffyMuffins. 

DinoXander
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Seems Like a great Story so far, although a bit sad at times (Rip Jimmy and little snake) it is still good 

Will still continue to follow how it goes

 

Pius Isaksson
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Funniest forty(40) minutes I had all year. And that is not a fact, but it is still funny