What do you mean there's no dark elves?

by ReneAlcantar

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy Satire Dungeon GameLit Gender Bender Magic Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Reincarnation Slice of Life Strategy
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I wound up reborn as a dungeon core in a fantasy world but everyone's wearing boring armor and worst of all there's no dark elves in existence. As a Dungeon Core of Culture, This will not stand!


Howdy people, Sorry for lack of updates. I'd like to thank everyone for reading so far. I will be taking a hiatus to focus on raiding Ahn'Qiraj with my wow classic guild. I am an officer in a progression guild and opening the gates is the focus at the moment. Sorry for everyone that has read thus far and to anyone who finds this on the Trending page before it falls off.  

I hope to come back to this once things calm down but I may edit the formatting to make it easier to digest on the website. Thanks for all the kind words and constructive criticism thus far. I appreciate it. 

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Milanda
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So the Author has a fairly good style, well written and with characters that draw your intrigue. The MC is a bit of a derp but still a fun read. I will emphasize though that this is fairly lewd humor based (MC is a pervert and has no filter) which can be a bonus or a con depending on the reader. Personally I find it more a con. Spoilers ahead.

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Lux
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Nonsensical and unfunny

Reviewed at: Chapter 9: Encroaching

Has some potential in the beginning where the world first appears to have been thought out and the protagonist while quirky and weird is intelligent. But sadly it quickly devolves into a completely unrealistic world with a protagonist who is both insanely dumb and horny. At this point a third of the chapters are focused on this unfunny joke about the main character being horny. So horny that he is basically retarded, the joke was barely funny the first time much less the 30th.

That-Which-Shall-Hug-You
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As of Chapter 9, the dungeon building has just begun! And it seems there is much store for us, can't wait for the next chapter! It'll be a lot of fun.

4 1/2 Stars.