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What would do your typical, totally normal human when it gets summoned by a being that can only be classified as a Divinity to another world.

This is the story of a man who thought that the Arcane Record was a game and was surprised to find the reality of the universe. We are not alone, there are more. Maybe identical, maybe different. Maybe friends, maybe enemies.

Only one thing is sure, and that is his fucked [Status]

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Epsilon Twilight

Entity beyond the Arcane Record

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MhadGrin
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The math is incorrect!

Reviewed at: 3. Humans

The math is WRONG, aaaaaahhhhhh! I can take bad grammar, I have read inconsistent reasoning, but I draw the line at bad math...

Soulxlight
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I honestly couldn't make it past chapter 2. The grammar is terrible,TERRIBLE. While thenspelling is fine, I'm assuming a spell checker was used, the wording is bad, so bad you can't really tell what some sentences are suppose to be. The entire thing reads like something written by an auto generator AI. Give this a pass.

Example : “Ah, yes. Math.” Adrian wasn’t an enemy of math but being kidnapped and latter be forced to do math felt a lot like school.

 

zigman2021
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The author mentions that English isn't their first language and to let them know their errors. But their skill at English is so poor that pretty much every single sentence is a mess. They need to get much better at the language before this can be even a little bit readable. I gave it my best shot so you don't have to.

Avoid. Flee. Run, while you can.

Avadonia
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 Okay i didn't want to straight up believe the top reviews but this story is extremely painfull to read.
I didn't read past the first chapter but even trying to read that was a chores, while my review will probably be quite bad i have to do an advance one because this story SHOULD'T have 5 star for things, i don't even know how it have 4 star as an overall score.

From the few i see the main character is pretty generic/stupid, exemple : "Yes! Maxing is the best strategy, it’s maximum efficiency! (that seem stupid) sooo he want to be a mage okay guess what he will want to max, well celerity of course "Measure of quickness and time perception" really man ? sure it work because the author want it to but still ...

I think the other review said enough about how bad the grammar and style are, just "try" to read the first chapter you'll see for yourself.

Can't really juge the story from what i read, it's the generic human get transported, get stats etc.

I would love a good time power story but you seriously need to rewrite everything.

Heracle
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I would highly encourage a beta reader and an editor to go through past chapters if you're attached to the idea. I'm sure there's some good in the story, but I can't get past the first few paragraphs too find it.

PurpleTree
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Not great, but readable

Reviewed at: 40. Information

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I opened up the first chapter because I was curious about the "terrible" grammar. Having binged all the chapters currrently released, I can say for a fact that the grammar and syntax is a far-cry from what the top reviews make it out to be. It's much better than your average eastern web novel translation and averages about 3 errors/200 words, if I had to put a number on it. In one of the latest chapters, the author mentioned he was doing a rewrite of the previous chapters and that he was using Grammarly.

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I'll point out some quick negatives to be as constructive as I can:

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Not a great story yet, but decent and definitely not unreadable for a casual reader that has dabbled in eastern novels. It also takes a few elements from Delve, which I really enjoy reading.

I've already made my peace, so bring the downvotes.

knifeandko
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A flawed, but enjoyable story

Reviewed at: 40. Information

The story is alright. The plot is not spectacular, but it's neither too slow nor too fast yet. There's no global mission, just some slice of isekai life at the moment. 

The main characters are somewhat different, and the author tries to have them all talking and making decisions, so props for that. Still, there's nothing exceptional about them. 

The style is pretty simple - easy to follow, but without being too simple. Though it isn't something that's enjoyable by itself.

 

Grammar. Oh, grammar. The structure of the sentences is alright, but the word choice sometimes is wrong (like "meditated" instead of "pondered"/"thought about") or there are mistakes in the words themselves. Still, these are not bad enough to make it unreadable, just quirky.

 

Overall, I'd say that it's a risky read: you either like it or close it and try to forget it exists. Though still worth to try reading it before judging.

 

Edit: I thought rating reviews should be done on the basis of how useful and accurate it was. Surprised to see mine downvoted. If you have any corrections, please PM me and we can discuss your opinion.

Ungrave
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Story deserves a boost

Reviewed at: 31. Tavern

I've always thought that time powers are the coolest, and this story definitely reinforces that opinion. There hasn't been a whole lot of progress in the grand scheme of things, just figuring out how the world works, and killing things mostly, but dang I'm looking forward to a certain card coming up.

10/10

Boss_of_life
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I'm bad at reviewing stuff and everyone has their own tastes. However so far this ones has me hooked and is fun to read! I don't see any grammar mistakes and it's easy to read.

So have fun and read it!