Hardcore OP-ness

by Mike777ac

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Most people pray for good health, a loving family, and to win the lottery. I asked “Can you send me to a game-like fantasy-style world? It can't be too unrealistic, but also, it would be nice if I was immortal to some degree. Oh yea, no rape or slavery either, cause then I'll have to spend the whole time trying to create a perfect society, and I'd rather not have to deal with all that nonsense. No other players either, cause that always creates a ton of annoying drama, and I just want to have a fun, relaxing, and enjoyable time.”

Three years later, after I had completely forgotten about all that… well, better late than never I suppose. The moral of this story, is to be careful what you wish for; also, cuteness is justice, so don't complain if adorable bunnies beat you to death and devour your corpse.

(Warning: This story includes profanity, numbers, humanity, nudity, uncomfortable realism in a fantasy-world, awkward but mild sexual-content, descriptive violence and gore, nekomimi, necrophilia, bizarre and disturbing sexual-content, offensive language, plus all of the other things that disclaimers usually have to tell you about. Do not read this if you dislike transportation, virtual reality, fantasy, or other similar genres… or me, because I'm the author.)

I'm only posting a few chapters on this site, but there are over 100 on my wordpress. https://mike777ac.wordpress.com/hardcore-op-ness/
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Good at the begining. Piece of crap later on.

The story is really good at the begining, but later on it becomes complete garbage. I read up to the 210th chapter on the author's website, and I can say that I ended up so fed up with the mc that I couldn't continue reading until the end.

The mc is maybe the most useless character that I've seen in quite some time. He starts lots of quests, but I don't think he finishes any of them at all. Some times he is close to finishing one and getting some good rewards and then, for god knows what reason, he travels to another place and starts a diferent quest, forgeting the previous one completely. This becomes specially annoying when the new quest is exactly the same as the one he just left, only in a diferent dungeon, or with a diferent goddes/element.

Another annoying thing is that the mc doesn't bother looting the treasures/coins from dead bodies, dungeons and such, and disregards the rewards from quests, but then the moron always finds himself lacking the resources to upgrade the house, or buy stuf and all. Seriously, he is a mix beetwen extremely lazy and a total dumbass.

Also, his companions are all a bunch of selfish bastards that, even if they didn't help anything at all in the quest, they always rush to take all the good things from bodies, chests, rewards, etc. and leave the mc with nothing. They are also extremely lazy, like the mc, and they only care about themselfs, not bothering with training, or puting any efford in becoming stronger so that they could actually help, even a little bit, when the fight starts.

There are 2 specially annoying characters. One is the dragon/alchemist girl and the other is the little cat/dwarf girl.

The dragon girl not only is completely useless in a fight throughout the whole story, but also she is always asking for lots of cores, bodies, and resources in general, to supposedly make potions to help the party level up, or gain status, or you know, something usefull. But, the thing is, I swear that she has never made a single potion that helped the mc, or anyone in the party. So what exactly is her role in the party? What does she do with all the resources she gets to make potions?  She is a complete waste.

The cat/dwarf girl, just like the dragon girl, is also so weak that she becomes completely useless in a fight throughout the whole story. But it's actually worse here, because not only is she unable to hurt the enemies, but she actually always starts shoting bullets like crazy attacking mosters that weren't fighting the party, atracting more and more monsters into the fight when the mc is barely able to cope with the few he is currently fighting, making the whole situation far worse than what it was. Also she is completely clumsy, like: "ops! I fell to the ground and dropped my expesive gun into this puddle of acid, so I need a new gun". She is so useless that most of the time the situation would be a lot easier if she simply stayed put and did nothing at all, instead of trying to "help".

The sex becomes really weird and disgusting. I really liked it when the mc got to lay with the cat/priest girl at the begining. That was really well done. But from then on and also with the rest of the girls it's just really weird, disgusting, poorly done and only brings the story down.

Lastly the goddeses are really no better than the mc's companions. They are all really weird/freaky. Their personallity sucks. They are very childish, lazy and shallow. They completely lack any sense of responsability, and it becomes impossible for me to take them seriously. And I'm still unable to understand their fixation with the mc, as he completely lacks any good quality and never does anything that helps any of the goddeses.

So... all in all, I don't recomend this story to anyone.

mentalperson
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i'll let the others speak

GOING GREAT--- UNTIL IT DEVOLVES INTO A JUMBLED MESS OF DEVIANT SEXUALITY WITH LITTLE-TO-NO PLOT AT ALL

GOOD AT THE BEGINING. PIECE OF CRAP LATER ON.

DISGUSTING

neverdying
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Going great--- until it devolves into a jumbled mess of deviant sexuality with little-to-no plot at all

I read up to chapter 90ish on the author's website, and I must say that I was enjoying it for most of that. Going into the story, it was pretty clear just from the name that there would be some seriously OP elements, which are fine, in my opinion. What really messed this story up was the progression into chapters almost entirely devoted to poorly written smut. 

Truth be told, I often enjoy reading just about every one of the sexual fetishes that the author has chosen to include in his story. But even I can't bear to read this drivel, given that it seems that the author wants it to be a cross between an erotic fiction and a fantasy novel, actually managing to make it neither. Mike777ac needs to just pick one and stick with it. And if he chooses to write the erotic side, he needs to at least make it better.

It honestly reads like the author is just attempting to throw as many 'disgusting' fetishes as he can in one story, just to make it as "disturbing" as he possibly can. He probably isn't even into any of these things. 

So why the half star only? To sum it up:

  • The smut is poorly written (despite having the requisite fetishes, it failed to turn me on at all)
  • There is really no plot at all in the later chapters

 

As an aside: just judging by the other reviews on here, it seems to me that the majority of people who like this story do so because it disgusts them and makes them feel special for not having weak stomachs. Which is really quite sad.

Kandoral
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Read it on his site a while ago (but couldn't post here before because of adblockplus problems) and it is disgusting. Like some reviewers before said the story is almost non existent! It is just disgusting fetishes one after another. Everyone who doesn't feel like throwing up big time after reading this thing should get himself examined

CautiousDuck
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The content is funny,weird and different at first, but later on things just get so fucked up, disturbing, nasty, abominable, fetish filled meatball of puke that will make you question this Arthur's sanity.

I am ashamed of myself for stomachin it for 90 chapters or so.

Save yourself from reading this, you'll regret it

RexZShadow
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It was good at the start before all the sex ruined it

I read this long time ago on the author's blog up to chapter 14x before I couldn't continue any longer. The idea was great and the story starts off great but at a certain point it stop being a story but a really bad and poorly written porno.

It was refreshing at the start to have books where there is sex because having the characters of the opposite sex in a relationship together and not have sex is stupid. But soon it goes overboard and it becomes chapters after chapter of really weird sex. Even when the character hang out and talk about stuff they have to be having sex.

It reached a point where its like 1/5 of the original story and 4/5 just sex for w/e random reason.

Folkensedai
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trash material made by kid for kids.

pretty fun start, goes downhill pretty fast.

Zheus
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Well, the description by the author says it all.

Disturbing, absurd and pretty much the worst kind of deviancy I ever read. The sexual content is mostly incredibly disgusting. 

9/10

I would give it a full ten if it wasn't for the time travel shit at the very end of the story. I hate time travel so fucking much.

Mattaj
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I read more than 200 chapters of this story but unfortunately this late into it I have dropped it. It was a good read but after around 200th chapter it starts losing this something that made me want to read it. It simply gets boring and consists of repetition of previous events done in more sophisticated ways and grander scale with some new ones joining.

I think I have stopped reading the story where there were quite a lot of chapters of boring fights. I would probably enjoy them in game or anime but here it is simply boring. There may be a lot of fans of your novel but unfortunately I am no longer one of them.

tonyorobsky
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I put 5 stars to counter the other poor ratiings due to the reviewers not liking the content.

From the very start it was said that there would be disturbing content. If you don't like that, why the hell did you read the story? Because you wanted to read some disturbing/disgusting content!! You were warned before hand, you have no right to complain. It feels like you chose to read it just so you could complain later. Completly stupid.

Really, those reviewers giving poor ratings to stories that hasn't been written for their exclusive tastes...

 

Leaving the disturbing content aside, I give the story 2.5 stars at most as it becomes a mess later. 3 stars for the characters (interesting, but too many weird ones, too much use of "exageration") and the style is ok.