Sitting, standing, walking; this is cultivation.
Living life with what we know, and moving forward with it; this is cultivation.
Finding what we desire and grasping it in our hands; this is cultivation.
This story follows Taylor Murphy and his discovery of the power of choices.
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I enjoyed the 50 odd chapters of this that I read, but at a certain point I wasn't interested in continuing with this book. It moves very fast, too fast for me to resonate or empathize with most of the characters. There's some legitimately interesting internal character struggles within the MC, but the wrapping of everything around it is unrefined. There's a lot of "This happened, and then this happened, and then this happened," and not nearly enough of the showing of those things actually happening. Anyways, I think it's worth a read to see if it resonates with you.
To the author: Please keep writing. I think this story has a lot of potential, but you would be well served to slow down with it and show things more in depth. I'm actually very interested in the cultivation methods/all the different types of characters,
vampires and werewolves and witches and stuff
, but we never actually see any of the struggles/methodology of cultivating after a quick introduction to it in the first couple chapters. However, I'm just some rando on the internet, feel free to ignore any of this if you disagree.