Old Cultivation Record

Old Cultivation Record

by jay244

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Sitting, standing, walking; this is cultivation.

Living life with what we know, and moving forward with it; this is cultivation.

Finding what we desire and grasping it in our hands; this is cultivation.

This story follows Taylor Murphy and his discovery of the power of choices.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue – Birthday Sale ago
Chapter 1 – Willing to Pitch ago
Chapter 2 — Birthday Boy ago
Chapter 3 — Myriad of Choices ago
Chapter 4 — Grounded ago
Chapter 5 — First Date ago
Chapter 6 — Kick Ass ago
Chapter 7 — Cheers ago
Chapter 8 —  Someone Else’s Domain ago
Chapter 9 — Keep it Casual ago
Chapter 10 — All I Got ago
Chapter 11 — Could be Good or Bad ago
Chapter 12 – Being Pushed Along ago
Chapter 13 – Heated Argument ago
Chapter 14 – Always Be Your Bro ago
Chapter 15 - Doesn't Sound So Bad ago
Chapter 16 - Just Told Me To Go ago
Chapter 17 - How Hard Could It Be ago
Chapter 18 - Fucking Rich ago
Chapter 19 - Hide the Shit ago
Chapter 20 - Good Enough ago
Chapter 21 - Something Between Men ago
Chapter 22 - How Would Stones Be Useful ago
Chapter 23 - Peaches Are Worth Way More ago
Chapter 24 - Maybe We Should Solve World Hunger ago
Chapter 25 - Had to Move That Body ago
Chapter 26 - Anything For You ago
Chapter 27 - Lucky Fucking Kid ago
Chapter 28 - Bunch of Dudes Waiting ago
Chapter 29 - Bona-Fide ago
Chapter 30 - Unless You're Open to That ago
Chapter 31 - Carry Me Home ago
Chapter 32 - Taking the Hit ago
Chapter 33 - Going Home for a Bit ago
Chapter 34 - To Life ago
Chapter 35 - Thanks for the Number ago
Chapter 36 - Lazy Kid ago
Chapter 37 - Where You Belong ago
Chapter 38 - Still Going to Try ago
Chapter 39 – See Where This Thing Goes ago
Chapter 40 - Good Luck ago
Chapter 41 - Very Free as of Late ago
Chapter 42 - Whether He Liked It or Not ago
Chapter 43 - Embarrassed In Front of the Vampires ago
Chapter 44 - Expressionless Face ago
Chapter 45 - Had it in Him ago
Chapter 46 - The Wife's Approval First ago
Chapter 47 - Hot as Fuck ago
Chapter 48 - Otherwise I Would Have to Love Him ago
Chapter 49 - Not Smiling ago
Chapter 50 - Not Going to Lie ago
Chapter 51 - Makes the World Go 'Round ago
Chapter 52 - That's Wild ago
Chapter 53 - Keep On Ballin' ago
Chapter 54 - Just Keep Coming and Coming ago
Chapter 55 - Butt Buddies ago
Chapter 56 - Player In The Game ago
Chapter 57 - Natural End ago
Chapter 58 - Wall of Flames ago
Chapter 59 - Dumb Look On His Face ago
Chapter 60 - Would Be Much Hotter ago
Chapter 61 - Figure Some Shit Out ago
Chapter 62 - Farther Than You Would Think ago
Chapter 63 - In Your Best Interest ago
Chapter 64 - Sweet Kiss ago
Chapter 1 - Offer A Ride ago
Chapter 2 - Little Bitch ago
Chapter 3 - If It's Convenient ago
Chapter 4 - Hint of Happiness ago
Chapter 5 - Out of This One ago
Chapter 6 - Watch the Show ago
Chapter 7 - Time and a Place ago
Chapter 8 - Evil Grin ago
Chapter 9 - Mess the Place Up and Leave ago
Chapter 10 - Going to Kill Me ago
Chapter 11 - Disastrous for the World ago
Chapter 12 - Started Out as a Stone ago
Chapter 13 - Let It Go ago
Chapter 14 - Continue to Bang ago
Chapter 15 - Going to Hurt ago
Chapter 16 - The Fault ago
Chapter 17 - Stuck With Them ago
Chapter 18 - Nightmare ago
Chapter 19 - Love Van ago
Chapter 20 - Very Agreeable ago
Chapter 21 - Cute ago
Chapter 22 - Winter ago
Chapter 23 - Pretty Well ago
Chapter 24 - Look of Judgement ago
Chapter 25 - Maybe It's Worth It ago
Chapter 26 - A Trap ago
Chapter 27 - Bad Dream ago
Chapter 28 - Too Young ago
Chapter 29 - Future ago
Chapter 30 - Good Time ago
Chapter 31 - Idiot of a Man ago
Chapter 32 - Pitying Him ago
Chapter 33 - Bring Me Back ago
Chapter 34 - There The Whole Time ago
Chapter 35 - Little Softer ago
Chapter 36 - Do It Again ago
Chapter 37 - Animals ago
Chapter 38 - All Out ago
Chapter 39 - Out of Our Hands ago
Chapter 40 - Hero's Tale ago
Chapter 41 - Be a Man and Burn ago
Chapter 42 - Family Outing ago
Chapter 43 - Thank You ago
Chapter 44 - Paying the Bills ago
Chapter 45 - The Jungle ago
Chapter 46 - All I Had to Say ago
Chapter 46 - Hope ago
Chapter 47 - Priority ago
Chapter 48 - Bound to Happen ago
Chapter 49 - Worth an Inquiry ago
Chapter 50 - Impressed ago
Chapter 51 - How the Machine Works ago

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I enjoyed the 50 odd chapters of this that I read, but at a certain point I wasn't interested in continuing with this book. It moves very fast, too fast for me to resonate or empathize with most of the characters. There's some legitimately interesting internal character struggles within the MC, but the wrapping of everything around it is unrefined. There's a lot of "This happened, and then this happened, and then this happened," and not nearly enough of the showing of those things actually happening. Anyways, I think it's worth a read to see if it resonates with you.

To the author: Please keep writing. I think this story has a lot of potential, but you would be well served to slow down with it and show things more in depth. I'm actually very interested in the cultivation methods/all the different types of characters, 

vampires and werewolves and witches and stuff

, but we never actually see any of the struggles/methodology of cultivating after a quick introduction to it in the first couple chapters. However, I'm just some rando on the internet, feel free to ignore any of this if you disagree.