Never Die Twice

by Void Herald

Original ONGOING Fantasy Dungeon LitRPG Male Lead Mythos Secret Identity Strong Lead Villainous Lead
Walter Tye is the best friend any adventurer needs. He is the smiling shopkeeper next to your local dungeon, the one who sells you these cheap healing potions. When you need information about a monster, Tye always knows. He wants to help; you can trust him.


He is also the undead necromancer ruling said dungeon, getting paid to solve problems that he caused in the first place. But don't tell anyone that... 


Original cover by Elvira Shatunova, and story sponsored by knightaether.
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He's not a villain, he just has a dream...

Reviewed at: 10: Convergence

... and a different view on life and death, or undeath, I suppose.

It is rare to find a well done vill.. cough.. good man misunderstood by the masses, but this one is among the best I have seen.

I haven't found a flaw yet, be it in story grammar or anything else, and I really enjoyed it so far.

Nothing more I could say, five stars in everything.

namesarehard
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Seriously, the title says everything. With Vainqueur The Dragon, he did what I thought impossible by keeping every new chapter just as fresh and humurous as the very beginning. After reading the first 11 chapters of Never Die Twice, I have no doubt that pattern of quality will continue! 

Ha San
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Nice story, refreshing view point and I am a sucker for villian point of view Stories.

BrokenAtlas
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I usually don't write reviews so early into stories (read all the chapters but there aren't a lot). 

I know Void's writing ability from other novels, so this is an advance I'm willing to give.

 

I really like the setting, motivations, writing style and just about every scene so far. 

 

Good grammar, though you get a word out of place every few chapters. Author fixes errors and his writing grammar is very pleasant to read 

forged
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Another good read

Reviewed at: 10: Convergence

Void Herald back at it again with yet another banger. Comedic, but with a few serious undertones that mesh quite well.

Redeyes Eclipse
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very interesting concept of a alchemist running a dungeon. The question is does this dungeon have a core and is does it have sentience maybe not to early to know the functionality and mechanics. Can't wait to see the ends and outs and insides I'm pretty sure of experimentations giving necromancer and alchemist classes.

Icaimas
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Immortality to read! Void Heralds new work.

Reviewed at: 11: War

You´re a fan of Void Heralds older works, like Vainqueur? No? That´s fine.
Because this might seem similar to those who read it, but does not share the same Universe.
Here comes Tye, Alchemist by day, Necromancer by night.
Dark Fantasy with a Necromancer as a MC is nothing new. But Void Herald makes it seem fresh and entertaining nevertheless.
A well written story with Summoned Heroes, a System, elements of Norse mythology and a Necromancer who works towards immortality.

Rivet
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Reviewed at: 10: Convergence

 Fantastic. The grammar is immaculate, and the story promises a lot to come in the future. I'm already anticipating Tye's exploits in new places and the storybuilding, which hints at a large world.

Only, as of so far, the characters do not have that much depth to them. This is being particularly picky, though, because only 10 chapters have been released as of this review.

I think this will become big.

Zethuron
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Cant a friendly necromancer be left alone?

Reviewed at: 10: Convergence

Void Herald does it again here, first Vainqueur, which is one of my favorites which is still going strong after hunderd chapters, and now this story. And he just hits the right notes once again, writing a story that just grabs me from the start.

The characters are just fun and quirky, like those from the author's other stories, grammar is on the same level as the author's other story, which means barely any problems with the grammar, so makes for a smooth read.

The author has done an interesting take on the nine realms from Nordic mythology, keeping it rather original and fitting with the system, which seems to be mostly the same as his other story. Im interested in just where the plot will go from here, there are just so much possiblities with the MC's goal and current ongoing events in the story.

 

I like the story being more serious than Vainqueur, while still keeping those little details that can make someone laugh.

While it may be not as hilarious as Vainqueur's story is or as good as it overall, it is still fun to read and one i would recommend to give a try.

lightnoveleater
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Fantastic, like a more focused Vainqueur the Dragon imo.

Reviewed at: 13: An Insidious Curse

I love reading Vainqueur the Dragon, and this is by the same author and it's great. I feel where Vainqueur the Dragon have more side characters and side events, this is more focused, which I enjoy, since I like the MC. It's also an intriguing concept, where he basically disguise as a shop-keeper while being more of a boss monster.