Welcome to Galeron

by Maiz

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Dungeon High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Mythos Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Welcome to Galeron is the tale of heroes who are sent to another world by a way unknown, in order to save it from a terrible darkness which is threatening to take over the universe in which they reside. These heroes are brought their with no specific memories of their previous lives and before they can even become heroes, are told that they need to complete three challenges. Failing a challenge means their most certain death, but that is what they must do. 

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The style.

Omniscient third person narration style. And the author is making a great use of it. We are able to see the world of Galeron through the eyes of the different characters involved. Including their perspevtives, thoughts and emotions.

The story.

The story follows a bunch of heroes who were sent into another world to prevent a universal catastrophy. An entertaining and fascinating story that keeps developing in a brilliant way. A thrilling story with a thrilling storyline.

The grammar.

High quality. No noticeable errors that could affect the flow of the story.

The character.

The characters are one of the strength of this book. They are well defined. You simply have to love the characters, especially Raithe and Luna. What a character they are.

Excellent work. Keep it up, author.