Cultivation Anomaly Type 7A Variation 3Z

by UselessMortals

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Magic Male Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Supernatural Wuxia Xianxia

A person from Earth dies and is reborn! Initially delighted, he quickly begins to realize that being in a cultivation novel is much more frightening than reading a book. Still, he does his best to keep a cheerful, positive outlook on life while going to extreme lengths to prevent his own miserable and possibly brutal death.

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Prescott
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This is honestly a really interesting fic. The author has done a good job of developing a cohesive world and a set of semi-realistic characters. At the time of this posting (chapter 5) there has yet to be much in the way of plot but there is a lot of promise. 

DownSyndromeShadowAssassin
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Always glad to see another offshoot of "Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4".

sandro530
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This is awesome, the biggest problem this has in the moment, is, that if it doesn't get more chapters it will most likely go down from trending. I really hope this doesn't go into hiatus, as after arrogant master, this is a very close follow up according to quality.

The MC is a very realistic character, while it would be good to include some more details of his past in future chapters, his character is being fleshed out.

I have found nothing wrong with Grammar, and the story is building up, other characters are very realistic. Most of cultivation storys just have those illogical people who go around being arrogant for no reason and when meeting someone stronger instantly submissing. Here on the other hand it was explained why to follow orders of inner disciples and elders, which I found very nice.

The biggest "problem" this has is the author. Now most novels, especially on Royalroad, go into hiatus, because of the author giving up the story, or not visiting royal road anymore. Those who don't visit Royalroad anymore like LivingSpoon most certainly have personal reasons for not doing so, maybe they are dead(hopefully not), have RL problems, or a hard time with their jobs or simply problems with time-management. As the author of this novel is still here I hope he sets a frequent release date, as I see it this is the next "Arrogant Master" of novels on this site.

The only thing stopping it, is the lack of chapters.

dayadaya
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It's a good story.

The concept of choosing your own reward and punishment based on your deed in your previous life make it a good idea, simple but balanced, he truly earns what he got, paying the price fully.

He got it through good deeds. Not just a lucky encounter, that his existence can be replaced by any other and the story would just continue coz it only cares about luck, not the person.

friendofcatgod
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It Definitely in my top 6 on this site

Reviewed at: Ch. 5 - The Mission!

Amazing novel pls update soon. I really enjoy the concept and hope me gets stronger or gets a cool item soon.