Misadventures Of a Broken Dungeon Core

by Azrie

Original ONGOING Adventure Drama Fantasy Psychological Dungeon Female Lead Gender Bender Grimdark High Fantasy LitRPG Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
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What does it mean to be broken? In a world that has a broad history and a myriad of problems ⁠— betrayals, murders, dungeons ⁠— anything just to climb to the top of the food chain. A broken and unfair system. Born to kill; a soulless machine that exists for that single purpose. 

What would happen? If someone took that place. 

“Everyone wants to help someone; be someone. Sometimes it's possible, sometimes the tides of fate take over. How does it feel⁠? Being at the hands of fate for an entire life. I wonder, how would it be? To be free…” ⁠— Leah

What would happen? To the original. 

Sometimes we don’t get a choice. On what to do. On what we are. Sometimes things just happen, it can be called fate, others will call it destiny, it can even be called life. In the end, there was no choice to begin with. There was never a choice. 

What would happen? If they got to be free. 

“I just hope... that you can find forgiveness for me somewhere in your heart… And that I can find it for myself…” ⁠⁠— to Leah. 

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Chapter Name Release Date
(Prologue) Darkness & Light. ago
(Chpt. 1) Going out of the box ago
(Chpt. 2) Going out the box (2) ago
(Chpt. 3) Going out of the box (3) ago
(Chpt. 4) Playing with fate ago
(Chpt. 5) Playing with fate (2) ago
(Chpt. 6) Making all the wrong decisions ago
(Chpt. 7) Making all the wrong decisions (2) ago
(Side S. 1) Procedure & Protocol ago
(Chpt. 8) Making all the wrong decisions (3) ago
(Chpt. 9) Finding a purpose ago
(Chpt. 10) Finding a purpose (2) ago
(Chpt. 11) Finding a purpose (3) ago
(Chpt. 12) Collecting things in the wrong way ago
(Chpt. 13) Collecting things in the wrong way (2) ago
(Chpt. 14) Collecting things in the wrong way (3) ago
(Chpt. 15) Collecting things in the wrong way (4) ago
(Chpt. 16) Gearing up ago
(Chpt. 17) Gearing up (2) ago
(Chpt. 18) Gearing up (3) ago
(Chpt. 19) Decision ago
(Chpt. 20) Promise ago
(Chpt. 21) Going down the rabbit hole ago
(Late Special) Brother & Sister ago
(Chpt. 22) Going down the rabbit hole (2) ago
(Chpt. 23) Going down the rabbit hole (3) ago
(Chpt. 24) Self acceptance ago
(Side S. 2) Failure ago
(Side S. 2) Reality ago
(Side S. 2) Trust ago
(Side S. 2) Broken ago
(Chpt. 25) Walking on glass ago
(Chpt. 26) Walking on glass (2) ago
(Chpt. 27) Walking on glass (3) ago
(Chpt. 28) The path that will forever close ago

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The first chapters aren't up to the writing standarts of the newer chapters and I have to say that the Author gets better at writing with every passing chapter!

The grammar is good but sometimes the sentences get a bit mixed up (to me at least).
Tho, I think that every grammar error disappeares with each chapter.

A interesting read and the weird thing where it explains the whole thing or introduction is cool too. The author explains in the first chapter (was it?) that this book is sad and etc. and it is.

I hope that le Azrie doesn't drop this and that Leah gets a good ending!

Please don't strangle me for writing a bad review. I'm really bad at writing reviews.